Hey guys back again with some more Naruto OC reviews. We have another one from my first dancergirl222. She has tons of OCs in this review so if you want to check them out than go ahead. Anyway here is another one of her OCs. I hope you all like it.
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Genre: I really like making these. Quick question before we start though, if I did another one of these, maybe the team 5 siblings, would you be interested in reviewing them? Also, when willl you put your character's profile up?? I'm excited to see them!

I would love to review them. Also I'll put up one of my OCs maybe after this OC fire wall.

Name: Kin Fujimoto ("Gold under the wisteria")

Nice name.

Gender:male

Good, it's great to see male OCs.

Age: 26/28

Nice, a different age is always good.

Family: Ayaka Fujimoto (mother, alive) Kyo Fujimoto (father,alive) Iwao Fujimoto (little brother, alive) Hachi Fujimoto(little sister, alive)

Thanks for the status and their positions in the family.

Appearance: Tan long sleeve shirt with black baggy pants and black sandals, grey hair that's a little longer than his little brother's and dark brown eyes

This is easy to imagine but I would like to know one thing. How long is his brother's hair? You said that his is a little longer than his brother's but I don't know how long his brother's hair is which means I can't pin point how long his hair is.

Weapons: poisons, kunai, and daggers

Nice. They are standard and common weapons.

Personality: clever, shrewd, cowardly, smart, emotionally weak, introverted, loves his family(even if he doesn't show it), egotistical 

This is good and he stands in two different categories. Cowardly can go with clever but it has to be in a clever way. Get it...no....Ok let's continue. Anyway, cowardly and emotionally weak goes great together too.

Clan traits: dark green or gray hair with dark brown eyes, tend to be cold and calculated, have hidden agendas, aloof, warm-hearted, calm, strategic, clever, meticulous 

It's good to see he shares some clan traits. Not every character has to be exactly the same or it would make for a boring story unless the writer can make it interesting. Just like where it says "tends to be cold" and for him says he doesn't show love for his family. Those are similar but not the same. Good job.

Clan symbol: a wisteria tree with a pond underneath it

Nice. If you know what a wisteria tree is then this will be easy to imagine.

Relationship: none, until he can get over himself at least

Good, something I haven't seen yet is this. They have to get over themselves before they can even get into love. Great job.

Other: He's technically a civilian, but does a lot of research and experiments with poison that the ANBU and other high level ninjas use. Iwao taught him self defense, which is why he's able to handle kunai.

This is interesting. I believe this is the only OC I have seen that is a civilian.

Past: He's one of the few people who aren't ninjas in the Fujimoto clan. In his clan, people can choose to 1 of 2 things: become a poison expert or become a ninja. Kin who wanted to be a ninja, sadly couldn't, because he couldn't manipulate his chakra. So, instead, he tried to put all of his focus into making poisons, and discovered that he was really good at it and he didn't have to try too much to do well.

Very interesting and good. It makes home different because he isn't a ninja. It's also great to see he is still helping and providing help in the world by making the weapons they need to fight.

When his little brother came around, he was a tad bit jealous of the fact that his parents had to worry about his little brother, and felt like he was being left out. When it came time for Iwao to go to the Academy, Kin became jealous because he wasn't allowed to because he couldn't manipulate his chakra.

Perfect. The way he acts is just how any older sibling would act with their younger. It also says much about his character.

When Hachi, his little sister, came around, he got used to having 2 younger siblings, and stopped trying to get his parents' attention. He decided, that he was going to be the best poison expert he can be, and that's how he can get his parents' attention. He's sort of a recluse at times, especially at work. He likes to be by himself because he believes that he can focus better. When he saw how Iwao was treated, he felt bad, but didn't do anything to stop it because he liked the attention that he got from his parents.

Like I said before. It says a lot about his character. This is good that his goal is something in his reach and in his range. You did good putting him together like this.

After Iwao became a Chunin, he snapped. He started lashing out even more, and this driving Kin inside his shell. It wasn't until he moved up to Jounin, that they actually apologize to each other and try to move past their bad history. They still argue here and there, but it's not nearly as bad as it used to be.

It's good to see conflict because no family is perfect. The way him and Iwao are puts not just character in them but also their families. Good job.
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Well guys here is the first one. Now to the Final Analysis.

Final Analysis- This character has great potential and is very different from other OCs I have seen. I do remember doing Iwao so forget what I said about the hair. This character is strong in his own way even if he's not a ninja. You always do a good job with your OCs and this one is the same. It again was a honor to do your OC and I hope i get to do your team 5.
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Now we have two more OCs to do. We are going to get straight into it. Let's go.