Hey guys guess who's back....back again, I am happy to be doing these Naruto OC reviews again. Regents are about to be soon but I had a great break and I can manage doing these and tests so it's no big deal. We are doing OC sprint which means there are gonna be a lot of OCs being published at once. So let those OCs knock on my door because I am ready to review. This OC is by metal_kittens and i hope you like it.
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Genre: Used for Fanfiction

Nice, I would read it.

Name: Yvette Tenji    

Oh, that's a nice and unique name.

Age: 12 part 1, part 2 16, The Last 18, Baruto 30 

Oh ok, so she is part of the Naruto age group.

Gender: Female

Cool

Family:(Mother) Chi Tenji (Pureblood),  (Father) Takashi Tenji (pure blood),

Nice

Appearance Hair color and style: Black, part 1 has bangs with pretty short hair up to her mid  neck, Shippuden goes to mid back bit is always in a high ponytail, The Last keeps it down and is up to her lower back like Hinata, Baruto cuts it down to her shoulders so her kid wont pull it but kept it short after liking the style.                  

Oh cool, thanks for giving all of her hair styles from 12 to the last.

Eye color: Icey Blue 

Cool

Skin Tone: Pale

Nice

Body Type: Part 1 very petite and skinny, Shippuden more chunky a bit curvy not as petite (like Ino), Last has more noticeable muscle and very curvy from fighting, Baruto still the same but less muscle since she doesnt fight anymore.             

Oh ok, and I like how you didn't focus on giving her back breaking boobs.

Weight:Part 1 82, Shippuden 120, The Last 150 (muscle mostly  ) , Baruto 142  (in pounds)
Height: Part 1 4'2, Shippuden 5'0 , The last 5'2, Baruto  5'2 with heels 5'5

Nice and each age has a great height to weight ratio.

Personality: Very wise, accepts people for who they are but sometimes accepts the wrong people like Sasuke and could support a bad thing, kind and very friendly, very sensitive when it comes to love, is very serious when she has to be especially when killing people but is mentally strong because of that           

Oh, she has an adult like personality or has the saying a adult trapped in a kid body. Nice.
         
Battle: Uses Taijutsu and is very quick and swift, she relys alot on her Kekkei Genkai, she uses shuriken and kunai, she knows Earth and Lightning style but doesnt really use it much. She could use genjutsu cause of her eye but she doesnt really use it unless shes in trouble.
           
Oh ok, I wonder what goes on with her eye and Kekkei Genkai.
          
Past: Yvette was born outside Konoha in the land of snow  while her mother was working but was raised in Konoha after mainly by her father because their clan house is there . At a young age Yvette's father would take her on missions to expose his daughter early to the cruel ninja world she would have to eventually face so she wouldnt be scared, she eventually got used to seeing many horrific sights  and started fighting for her father as part of what he called  training in his missions.

Oh ok, and it goes great with her personality. Like I said, a adult in a kid's body and the reason why i say that here is because she faces what the ninja world have and it makes her more mature at a young age.

Throughout the time she was tooken into her fathers missions she was homeschooled by a teacher who traveled along with them who was payed and reported back stats to the hokage.

Oh cool.

By the time she turned 10 she enrolled into to academy to become a genin, she met Naruto and the rest of the gang and was a bit more advanced than the rest of them. She didnt get a team after her father got permission to be her sensei once she got out the academy. She learned quicker and more dangerous things through him, she saw many things travelling and that's what made her accepting of people, no matter the circumstances, her father was training her to become one of the most strongest Kunoichi of her generation and unlock her clan eyes which was a big trial to her, her father became more harsh aa she was growing up to make her as strong as he can, eventually she did become strong but didnt get to participate in the Chunin exams because of that.                               

Oh ok, it's cool how she has her father as a sensei or mentor like how team 7 had the legendary sannin's. Her personality again goes great with her battle and adds character to her profile.

Relationships: Best friends with Ino back at the academy for her strong will and Hinata after relating with eachothers past. Yvette met up with Sasuke after she was captured by Obito to be used as Kaguyas helper for later on and was by Sasukes side supporting him from the shadows, she helped him and convinced him to make a better change in the world. A reason why Sasuke went back to help, he saw a new perspective of what his brother had actually done so his death wasnt in vain. Yvette kept Sasukes humanity from him being a ruthless killing machine but not completely, the two fell in love and where eachothers first in every thing before the war.

Nice, and In her story I would recommend having many events because it's going to take a awful lot to make Sasuke fall in love. That's just how he is as a character. So be prepared to write a lot to make him and your OC fall in love.

After the war Yvette disappeared after being used as Kaguyas helper against her will, she decided to remain low, she was going to have a baby after her first time but felt she was gonna have complications after what had happened (she was pregnate during the eat) so she went after Orochimaru and asked him for help after finding out he was in Konohas care, thats how she managed to save the baby but the only problem was the baby would have to grow slowly and was born two to three years after its actual birth date so it wouldnt die, but this was risky since Orochimaru had to make a deal with her in order for this to happen, Orochimaru would test on the baby not physically or mentally crucial but train it to see what its abilities are capable of as an Uchiha and part of the Tenji clan. Sasuke didnt know about this so he didn't know anything about him having a son and Yvette being alive after the war. Up until the Chunin exams came.                                   

Wait wait wait, please don't tell me she got pregnant at 16. Another thing for Sasuke is to make sure that he falls in love after the war and the fight with Naruto because that is when he actually gives life and love a chance.

Other: The Tenji clan is named after Kaguya's lover Tenji, he tried protecting her but betrayed her, Kaguya made their clan to serve her on command, their eyes were made to purposley try and defeat the Hyuga and Uchiha eyes, so their eyes are a mix of both but come in 3 levels. The clans morals are to train and become strong but after severe loss in war they focused on repopulating. Kaguya can control and use her chakra to posses any clan member with pure blood as a servant, protector and healer for her without any consent given as become basically a puppet for her, the clan has huge chakra reserves in order to use their eyes and were made to kill an Uchiha or Hyuga, the reason why Obito chose Yvette instead of the rest of her clan was because she wasnt to young  and more powerful, the rest of the clan was old and withering, one of the reasons why her father is older than most normal dad's in the village.

Nice, as a creation of Kagaya's I would expect the clan to be strong but have to work. Good job going into detail.

Many of the clan members couldn't repopulate due to the woman having infertility or major problems with the baby as a side affect of using their eyes to the extent during the war. This was a major problem but those who could reproduce were not kunoichi  so the clan was starting off slowly, Yvette was amongst the lucky few but if she had cousins they would most likely be baby's at her age of 16. A dominant trait in the family is having females. 

Wait how is having female babies a dominant trait? Dominate traits are things like eye color, skin color, and height determining if you are tall or not but having females aren't dominant it's truly luck when it comes to having a baby. Maybe instead they have jutsu or something to alter the Y chromosomes in the woman when she gets pregnant so she does have a girl. I'm sorry for using biology in this but it's true.

And im sorry i forgot to mention that after Yvette dissapeared after the war to try and have a safe pregnancy Sasuke thought she was dead so he moved on with his life.

Oh ok.
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Final Analysis- This OC doesn't really have anything bad to her. She has a  good story, a great appearance and personality. The only thing I have to say is events for Sasuke so they do fall in love and hopefully she doesn't become a manor teen mom. It was a honor to review her. Thank you for choosing me to review her.
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