OC 30 (Kiri Nowaru)

This one is also NWO_FullMetal I hope you like it.
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Name: Kiri Nowaru 


Nice name


Translation: Kiri = Fog  Nowaru = Noir which translates as Black (Black Fog) 


Cool, it has a nice ring to it.


Gender: Male


Cool


Sexuality: Straight


Nice


Classification: Assistant Mechanic / Medical Ninja trainee 


Oh ok so he is the stay in the back kind of ninja and the working type.


Current Occupation: Mechanic / Student


Nice


Affiliation: Uzushio


Cool


Family: Amato Kuro, Uncle (Alive), Haruka Kuro: Mother, (Alive)  Yasuo Nowaru: Father, (Alive), Taira Nowaru: Older brother, (Alive) 


Nice and thanks for the life status and the relationships to him.


Current age: 10


Part 1: 22


Part 2: 28


2.5 (The Last) : 30


Part 3 (boruto years): 47


Nice and for anyone that is confused. This OC's story takes place where Kakshi is 12 so when Kakashi is 12 this kid is 10. I hope that clears up anything.


Birthdate: January 16th


Nice, and I never get the birthdate so I'm happy to get it.


Hair color: dark brown


Cool, a wonderful and common color.


Eye color: light blue


Nice, another color less common but common color.


Clan: Nowaru. 


Nice.


Clan History: The Nowaru clan is a distant cousin of the Kosaka clan. During the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd Shinobi wars the Nowaru clan repaired the weapons of the Kosaka clan and while also were used as the Kosaka clan's medical division. The Nowaru clan is one of the many clans to reside in Uzushio which in my fanfic is basically used as a village of nomads that have detached themselves from their countries of birth. Members of the following clans are located in Uzushio. 


Oh ok so they are like a mechanic clan more than a fighter clan. That's cool and unique.


Just to name some of the clans affiliated with Uzushio are the following


Nowaru


Kuro


Senju


Uzumaki


Tenshi


Roka


Nakano 


(There may be more depending on how many ocs I create. In my story Uzushio has the nickname "The Land Of Freedom" (Hint hint) Of course it is going to have that nickname for a reason, it's not going to be all sunshine and rainbows in Uzushio though so... just be prepared for an interesting role that Uzushio plays. I have a few plans for it, and I think people are going to like it.)


Ok, I like how you have real clans as well to make it more in place with the Naruto clans.


At times he will not agree with the way Akashi handles himself and certain situations, and like Amato does for him he continues to be a sort of a life coach for Akashi. After a tragic death to someone close to him he shuts himself out from other people and eventually seeks guidance from his family (Will he go down a path of self-destruction and filled with darkness or will will he come into the light?)  I'm not telling you the answer. And have I already? Not a chance. You will be guessing wildly for quite a while. 


Oh ok, and I guess that means I have to stay tuned for another episode of Naruto's fanfic Akashi.


Kiri is among one the five other ninja to join Akashi in a very important storyline. Along with my other oc Tori. With that being said, expect the other ocs for review at some point. Now the other's won't be mentioned in the book for quite some time, so don't expect it to be anytime soon. (unless I get to a certain point in the boook where it would be necessary to review them which won't be for a while.. 


Oh ok, well I'm ready to review them anytime. So Kiri is going to have a big impact on the story? I can't wait to see where it goes.


 Appearance: He's often seen wearing a red t-shirt and navy blue shorts and black sandals. As he develops through the ranks he continues to wear the standard uniform. Although when he's lounging around on his days off he continues to wear his comfortabe attire. 


Oh ok, so he wears the regular clothes except for when he relaxes. That's cool and great cause than you can imagine him in the outfit.


Likes: Being lazy when he can be, but he also enjoys being around other people depending on what kind of mood he's in. I have big plans for Kiri and hopefully those plans work out. I believe he is going to be a great addition to this story I'm writing. He enjoys playing games with Naruto and learning more about Naruto's likes and dislikes.He enjoys conversing with others, but he enjoys the stunning silence and a good book even more. He likes to stay active and keep moving


Ok, one thing though, at the top it stays he likes being lazy in his free time but at the bottom it says that he likes to be active in his free time so which one is it? Does he do half and half? Does he do one one time and one the other? These are just questions I need the answers too.


dislikes: being surrounded by a huge crowd of people, being treated as if he’s infurior. Fangirls (because the squealing, the constant obsessive need for attention etc;


Ok, those are some great dislikes and it is relatable to characters and real life. Like just reading it now, I said yes loudly when I read his dislikes.


As for his fighting style I have yet to decide that. I’ll send a character revision within a couple of weeks this is what I have so far and if you feel it’s not necessary for my oc to have a second review just say so. :)


No I have no problem reviewing him again and I'll just name it Kiri part 2. So when you are ready you can send it and I'll get right on it.
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Final Analysis- This OC has nothing wrong with him. There are some questions here and there that I asked but that is about it. He has a great appearance, personality, and I can't wait to read how he impacts the story. In fact I can't wait for the next chapter of Akashi's story. It was a honor to review him and thanks for choosing me to review him.
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