OC 105 (Kazu Nara)

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Name: Kazu Nara


Nice name


Birthday: May 7


Cool


Age:
- Part 1: 26


Oh so she's a adult


Gender: Female


Nice


Family: Shoin Nara (Older sister), Gin Nara (Mother, dead), Koto Nara (Father, dead)


Thanks for the family relationship and life status.


Appearance: - General: Kazu has ear length brown hair, a scar from underneath her left eye that goes to her forehead, light brown hair, pale skin
- outfit: Kazu keeps her hair down with her left eye being mainly covered by her hair, and wears her ninja headband around her neck. Kazu wears a pretty relaxed outfit, a plain black t-shirt with her jounin vest above it, she wears black ninja pants with her weapons pouch on her right thigh, and she wears blue ninja sandals.


She looks really good, and has a outfit that is short sweet and to the point.


-height: 5'9
-weight: 125 pounds


Nice height to weight ratio


Personality: Kazu is rather kind and will listen if you need someone to talk to, but she is serious when it comes to missions and her team and their safety.


Oh so she's sensei, she definitely has the personality of one good job.


Battle: Kazu uses all three, ninjutsu, genjutsu, and taijutsu, it depends on the situation for which she uses. For her weapons she uses kunai and smoke bombs.


Very nice and has a team leader it's perfect cause now she can help all her students.


Past: Kazu was born in The Hidden Leaf Village and raised there. She was born with an older sister, Shoin Nara, with her mother. Her father was already dead when she was born, having died on a mission while her mother was pregnant with her. Kazu often would practice her skills with her older sister, who she had her pointless arguments like normal siblings do. When Kazu graduated from the ninja academy, she was placed on the same squad as her sister's since they were lacking a person. Kazu was 19 when she became a jounin but waited to try to take on a team for the first time until she was 23. For her first team, she passed, but later they had to be moved to a different sensei due to Kazu being assigned to a solo mission that would take a while. She never returned to her first team but does still talk with them and give them pointers. She didn't take another team until she was 26, which were Tsuki Aki, Tenshi Abe, and Shizuko.


This is a really good past, thanks for showing her road to a jounin. Great job.


Other:
- Sister lives outside of The Hidden Leaf Village
- Mom died from illness


Nice trivia
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Final Analysis- This woman is really good. She is perfect for a sensei. Her tie to the other 3 OCs is really cool. Now I just want to say it was amazing that you created a whole time including a sensei for Naruto. It really shows your dedication and creativity. Thank you so much for letting me review all your OCs, it was a true honor.
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