OC 12 (Aria Lanka)

This one is by LiaHatake12. I hope you like it.
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Name: Aria


Oh so she doesn't have a last name.


Gender: Female


Nice


Age: 10


Oh so around Konohamaru's age.


Birthday: April 13


Oh ok, nice


Family: Lanka (Deceased, mother)


Wait, where is the father?


height: 5'1


weight: 90 pounds


The height and weight ratio is a bit off unless she is extremely skinny.


Skin tone: pale


Cool


Hair color: pure white


Cool


Status: Orphan


Oh ok


Appearance: short white hair, dull-ish baby blue eyes, tattered light blue qipao dress, tattered black ninja shorts, and Aria never wears shoes.


Oh ok, she seems like a adorable little girl.


Personality: You'll see~ (Sorry Shoko--Instano)


It's fine. I love the mysterious.


Ninjutsu range: Unknown


Oh as in she doesn't know yet?


fighting style: none


Oh


Chakra natures: Unknown


Same as the question above. Because she doesn't know yet?


weapons: none


Oh ok


Past: Aria was born in the Hidden Valley Village, Aria's mother, Lanka while giving birth to Aria died from child birth leaving Aria alone and put in an orphanage. While growing up in the orphanage Aria quickly found out that the people that run the orphanage are decently opposites. Sera Romiko is the sweet, kind, and caring one and Rita Monija is strict, hates children, and doesn't give the orphans proper treatment. There isn't really anything else to Aria's past.


Oh ok, so I am assuming that she would be a side character in a story than. She has enough information to be a side character but no where near enough to be a main character.


Other: Aria doesn't know how to use chakra at all and hasn't ever stepped out of the orphanage besides of when she was being brought to the orphanage.


Oh ok, that's nice extra information.
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Final Analysis- I really have nothing to say but that, if she is a side character, that she is perfect. However, if you plan on using her as a main character than she would need a lot more information regarding more about her past and details on what happened to her father because you can't make a baby on your own. (Unless you're Orochimaru.) But that is besides the point. It was a honor reviewing her. Thank you for choosing me to review her.

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