OC 97 (Yurika Senju)

This OC is by EtoileCyber2 I hope you like it.
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Name: Yurika Senju (千手百合佳, Senju Yurika)


Nice name


Age:
12-13 (Part 1),
15-17 (Part 2)


Naruto age group, nice


Gender: Female


Nice


Family: Butsuma Senju (great great grandfather, deceased), Tobirama Senju (great grandfather, deceased), Suzuran Uchiha (great grandmother, deceased), Tenma Senju (grandfather, alive), Kazuo Senju (father, alive), Tsurara Yuki (mother, alive), Hashirama Senju (great granduncle, deceased), Mito Uzumaki (great grandaunt -through marriage, deceased), Kawarama Senju (great granduncle, deceased), Itama Senju (great granduncle, deceased), Tsunade Senju (cousin, alive) Nawaki Senju (cousin, deceased), Tajima Uchiha (great great grandfather, deceased), Madara Uchiha (great granduncle, deceased), Izuna Uchiha (great granduncle, deceased)


Thanks for the relationships and life status of each family member.


Appearance: As a child, her hair was shoulder length, styled in a bob with bangs that completely covered her forehead. At the time of her academy graduation, Yurika's hair had grown out considerably, to the point it reaches her ankles - when not pulled back in a ponytail; her trademark style.
Stemming from her Uchiha lineage, she has blue eyes, black hair with blue tint, and lightly tanned skin - Yurika inherited these traits from her great grandmother, Suzuran, whom she bears a strong resemblance to. Not that she minds, because she don't. 


This is good and the fact that her hair turned into rapunzel is very interesting. Before anyone say that's too long, The Mizukage and the girl from sound that Sakura and Lee fought in the forest if death had their hair to their ankles.


Part One: As a Genin, Yurika wore a simple, sleeveless, blue kimono top worn over a long sleeved mesh shirt, bound by a black obi and white ties, black form fitting pants, and black ankle length, open toe, ninja boots. When not on duty and just relaxing, she tends to wear simple blouses, shorts, and jewelry - a bracelet, maybe earrings. 
Part Two: - plot hasn't reached that point yet -


Nice, and thanks for the outfit jt's really nice and the description makes it a lot easier to imagine.


Personality: Yurika is similar to her great grandfather, Tobirama, in that she's diligent as a ninja in-training and as a kunoichi of the Leaf. Unlike the girls in her class, she did not prioritize boys over studies in the academy.Yurika is calm and composed - most of the time - when her patience isn't being tested by the actions of those around her; ex: Naruto's recklessness and pranks, Shikamaru's laziness, etc. Being born into the Senju, a world renown clan, and being the great granddaughter of the Second Hokage, she puts a lot of expectations on herself and wishes to live up to the clan name. 
She adores her great grandfather. That's why she, herself, wants to be Hokage - to follow in his footsteps and make him proud. 
Her time on Squad 7, being a teammate to Naruto Uzumaki, teaches her to loosen up and to not take herself so serious. The future is unpredictable, and things won't always go as she planned, this is what Yurika is exposed to and is forced to deal with whenever Naruto is involved. 


Great job, in her personality, she changes by learning and having influences from other characters. This is really really good and very realistic.


Notes: I left everything else out because its spoiler and I've changed a lot of info on the rewrite. All the info I wrote here, it won't be published as part of the work like most tend to do. Those who wish to know more, they'll have to read it on A03: 'Yurika - A Naruto Fanfiction'. 


No problem, it's good that you left out spoilers as well, I want to read her story.


I'm taking creative liberties; changing things a bit. It's got nothing to do with liking or disliking a character. The changes are for plot purpose. In my work, Squad 7 is a legacy squad, like Ino-Shika-Cho. The parents were in the same team, and so, that being said, so will the children of said parents.


Nice, and tha no is for telling me your plans, the fact that your planning ahead shows that this fic is going to be great, because you have everything in mind.
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Final Analysis- What can I say? This OC is really cool and is ready for anything you have for her. You make her learn and change depending on who she meets and works with and that's a first in the OCs I have reviewed. She's a great OC and I can't wait to see the plans in stored for her. Thank you for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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