OC Sprint 28 (Yuhe Xing)

This OC is also by Ota-Kun316 I hope you like it.
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Name: Yuhe Xing (Healing)


Nice name I like the meaning.


Age: (I don't think of their future selves, I just go with the flow) 13-14


Got it, so they are the age of neji and lee.


Gender: Female


Cool


Family:
Parents: 
Ye Xing = Father = Alive
Chun Xing = Mother = Alive
Sibling(s):
Chang Xing = Younger Brother = Alive
Relative(s):
Yan Shen = Cousin = Alive


Lian Xia = Cousin = Alive


Qi Shen =  Uncle = Alive
Re Shen = Aunt = Alive


Shou Xia = Uncle = Alive
Xiao Xia = Aunt = Alive


Wu Shen = Cousin = Alive


Nice, thanks for the life status and their relationships to the characters.


Appearance: Yuhe is petite but slightly chubby. She has doe red eyes and mid-back slightly curly blonde hair. She wears a dark green short kimono that fades to light green by the end, pink sakura flowers adorned her kimono. Bandages wrapped around her legs, finishing off with tall geta sandals at the height of 10 cm. When she turned into a genin, she added green samurai-like armor on her chest, forearm and forelegs. Yuhe quite tanned since she spends her time outside and she's really insecure about her skin since other pretty girls have fair skin unlike her. She wears a sakura hair pin, she loves Sakura trees.


Her appearance is unique, I also like how she has a insecurity. However, I would recommend not making the insecurity skin because I did that once and people instantly called me racist. I'm just gonna tell you ahead of time so you don't get the same treatment. Take it from my experience.


Personality: Yuhe is a bright individual. She's always curious, outgoing and open-minded to new things. She's a helpful girl but only helps those who deserve it. She isn't loud and hyperactive, she's in the more social side. She worries and over thinks a lot of things causing her to ramble and panic especially in situations where she gets lost. Getting panic attacks are nothing new to her. She gets over excited over things too, screaming and squealing before talking about it for a long time. She's really talkative. She gets scared easily but has enough courage to keep going on missions.  Other than that, she's very perverted towards girls. She's very blunt and straight forward, speaking out her thoughts instead of keeping them in.When Yuhe gets mad, she has either a confused expression or a bittersweet smile on her face, pretending that she's not angry even though she is, she becomes colder when mad although she can quickly shift to her usual bright personality in a snap. Because of this, a lot suspect her to be Bipolar but it was never confirmed nor diagnosed. She talk in a flamboyant way, picking it up from her clan leader. Her confidence level over looks is off the charts, she knows she's pretty and she's proud of it, she's not the type to boast too much about it.


I'm sorry I love her personality but did you mean pretty or petty? The reason why I asked this is because it does say that she is insecure about her looks which would contrast with how she knows she's pretty. However, if it is that she is petty than ignore the comment.


Battle: Yuhe is a medical ninja but she really good in taijutsu. She uses Japanese and Chinese martial arts. She's not good with weapons and her genjutsu is terrible, she can't do it either. Her ninjutsu is very limited too despite having amazing chakra control, she can only do water clones. Like Yan, she's in the heir/heiress line so she's able to use her abilities without the use of chakra. The Xing clan specializes in medicine and that's what they're really good at, unlike normal medical ninjutsu, theirs glow a bright yellow. They can also manipulate water and ice but for medical and defense purpose only. Yuhe pretty fast in taijutsu but not as fast Lee. She can't handle rapid attacks. Her tactic is going slow then fast then slow then fast, there's a pattern but no one knows how long she'll each of it. She carries a small gourd of water just in case. 


It's great but the use of no chakra in a move is not. Everyone in Naruto, Everyone uses Chakra in Naruto for every jutsu. Except maybe Gaara but he has a excuse because he is the carrier of the 1 tails and it gives him sand manipulation but others have to use chakra. Even Hashimara and Madra use chakra and they are Senjus and the strongest Uchiha so of course everyone needs too. Her having yellow instead of green can stay but the chakra needs to be there as well. How about instead of none, little and they have special training for it instead of just being born like that. It would make it more believable and not a this person is the chosen one.


Past: Coming from the Zhong Branch (Middle Branch) or Xing Clan, Yuhe was treated like a princess but had more freedom than Yan. She was taught good manners only but other than that, she spends most of her time outdoors which was not allowed for the Shen clan heir/heiress line. During their arrival in Suna, Yuhe got lost and started to have a panic attack, scaring a boy who tried to help her but she quickly calmed down when she saw Temari. Temari was a girl she first had a crush on, Yuhe quickly became her friend after being saved from a boy named Daimaru. Temari then gave her a small fan as a remembraYuga After the Sunagakure during the incident, Yuhe was the only one who comforted Yan. Yuhe focused on her water manipulation during her stay back in Yugakure, not wanting to fall behind her cousins. (Their life in Konoha is what I'm writing so it's not included here)


Ok, this is cool and I like how her personality played a big role in her past. Also is Lian and her in the same story? If so than when did each of their events take place?


Relationships with characters:
Temari = First love = Yuhe fell in love with Temari the moment she saw her. Yuhe acted like a friend in order not to be called weird. In a one-sided crush with Temari. She slowly got over Temari when she met Sakura.


Oh ok, so she liked Temari but didn't know if Temari swung that way. Alright, that's good.


Sakura = Crushing on hard = Yuhe loves Sakura Trees and meeting Sakura whose hair was as pink as sakura flowers and her name IS Sakura. Yuhe fell for her hard, not just because of those traits but how dominant Sakura can get. Yuhe finds it cute.


First a round of applause for being one of the first OCs to be friends with Sakura. There aren't many which I don't know why the reason but the way Yuhe fell for her Is cute. It's also cute how she views Sakura and her personality which is another reason why she fell for her and the cheery blossoms were another great attribute. Nice.


Sasuke = Rivals in terms of love = Yuhe bothers Sasuke a lot on how he got Sakura's attention. At first, it annoyed Sasuke but thinking how it could stop Sakura clinging on him. He tried to help Yuhe catch Sakura's attention in subtle ways.


I can just tell that they two would have a lot of funny moments. Yuhe's personality makes it perfect on why she bothered Sasuke and the reason why Sasuke helped her was perfect. Awesome.


Haku = Admiration = Yuhe admires Haku's ice crystal mirrors and wanted to learn it, Yuhe also admired Haku's beauty and felt sad when Haku passed away. Yuhe slightly blamed herself for not healing Haku. 


Oh, how did her and Haku meet? Is Yuhe apart of team 7? I just need to know to verify her relationship with Haku.


Anko = Love & Hate relationship = Yuhe complains on why they have to get "wild pig" as a team leader and preferred Kurenai instead. The two bicker a lot but got along well with food. 


Oh so Anko is her sensei. Nice, I can see the relationship between Anko and Yuhe being funny and having it's moments. Good job.


Hinata = Girl crush Friday =  Hinata has a special place on Yuhe's heart. Just how sweet and innocent Hinata is made Yuhe want to protect. Yuhe is very protective over Hinata.


Adorable. Hinata's shyness would make someone overprotective. Well, if you are which Yuhe is. Nice.


Hanabi = "Adopted child" = They only met once but Yuhe claimed Hanabi to be her adopted child and sometimes uses Hanabi as a replacement for Hinata who would be going after Naruto. Yuhe would say "Look at her! Naruto-san is going to claim her one day *sniffles* at least I have you Hanabi-sama~"


Cute, the way Yuhe is makes this relationship work.


Chouji = "Adopted child 2" = Yuhe and Yan would bicked who gets to claim him. Yuhe loved Chouji because he looks so soft and because he likes to t eat too. Yuhe said "If I was never royalty, I would've became like Chouji-sama and I'll be proud of it!"


Huh I never see Choji in these great job using more side characters. It's a great relationship.


Kakashi = Icha Icha Paradise Buddy = They don't interact much unless it involves the book they both read. They become really close because of it. Kakashi was a bit weirded out by since Yuhe was too young to read but Yuhe managed to talk him into it, threatening to cancel the making of the book.


Yup, Yuhe and Kakashi bonding over Icha Icha Paradise is something I can see happening actually even guessed before reading this part. I can even see the funny moment where she threatens Kakashi she'll cancel it and he freaks out. This Is great.


Others:
- Yuhe is more attracted to girls. She has a thing for cherry blossoms and when she first met Sakura, she had the biggest crush on her. Her possible attractions or crushes are Sakura, Hinata, Hanabi, Kurenai, Temari, Chouji and Rock Lee.


Cool but what is relationship with Rock Lee and Kurenai sense they are possible attractions. We have the others but not them. Other than that it's great.


- Yuhe has her own collection of Icha Icha Paradise books and is close friends with Kakashi.


I can see it. That is something Kakashi would bond over with someone.
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Final Analysis- This OC is very good and has a lot of character and a unique design. The only thing I have to say is that even though she was born the heiress that she still uses Chakra. Maybe as the heiress she gets special training to make it possible to use a smaller amount of chakra instead of no chakra. Other than that everything is great. It was a honor to review her. Thank you for letting me review her.
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