This OC by Indigo_Rays I hope you like.
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Name: (幸子) Sachiko (越水) Koshimizu
Meaning: Happiness over the sea

This is a very cute name

Genre: Fanfic (Hopefully)

I hope to see it.

Birthday: March 4th

Very cute

Gender: Female

Nice

Chakra nature: Water

Nice, and it's very simple being one.

Age pt 1: 13
Age pt 2: 16
The Last: 19
Boruto: 32

So the age of the Naruto group huh? Nice.

Family: Emiko Koshimizu (Mother-Deceased) Hisoki Watanabe (Step-Father-Deceased) Kairi Koshimizu (Grandmother- Alive) Ren Koshimizu (Step-Brother-Deceased)

Nice and thanks for the relationship status and the life status of each person.

Sexuality: straight

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Village: Suichūigakure (made it up)

Oh a made up village, very interesting.

Past: When she was two years old her step-father found out that she wasn't his biological daughter and was furious with Sachikos mother and Sachiko herself. He went and summoned a demon water dragon (Mizuchi) To kill Sachiko however, it ended up possessing her instead and threatened to kill Sachiko, do things against her will and ever annihilate her village . After four years of living in fear and anger her step-father completely disowned her and kicked her out of the village vowing the next time he see's her she will die. To make a long story short- The clans people forced Sachikos mother to give her up and live on her own, Emiko (Sachikos mother) left her with but one parting gift; A golden jade anklet in the shape of a fish. However what Sachiko failed to tell them because well haha lil b*tch forgot was that literally the one thing that the Mizuchi told her not to do was to leave the village-ANYWHOOO Sachiko wandered around until she landed up in Konoha 5 years later, Naruto spotted her sulking on the banks of the konoha river and helped her out even going as far as taking her to the Hokage so that together they can help Sachiko find a home again.

So I can understand the fact that her father is made and had to go to Maury to find out he is not the father but kicking her out the village is a little extreme. Not to mention a clan kicked out someone for cheating. I know it's a sin and you could be arrested for it if your married. (I'm serious it's a law) but why did they agree to kicking the mother out. Is it a sin against the clan? Also why Is it that he's first response to finding out Sachiko isn't his daughter is to summon a demon? How did he know how to summon a demon? Why didn't he just leave the family? Why is he pissed at Sachiko? The only person he should be mad at is the mother but not Sachiko so why is he trying to kill her and not the mother? These are questions that need answers. Also she would still need to be interrogated by Ibuki even if she was with Naruto, she's a outsider and they have to check them.

Love Interest: Naruto- this is because when Sachiko was lost and trying to find her way and purpose in life again Naruto was there to help her when no one else would.

If they get together I hope it explains how and makes sense because he had to love interests being Sakura and Hinata so there has to be a big reason why he chooses Sachiko.

Personality: pt 1- extremely shy from not knowing who she can trust after her step-father & clan (whom she adored) turned on her so suddenly, hardly talks to anyone except for Naruto, Iruka and Tsunade, Extreme trust issues, High-key depressed but tries not to show it, Polite, Witty, overly-emotional, forgetful pt 2- once she grows up and becomes more at ease and friendly with the people of Konoha she becomes more outgoing and talkative but still has points in time where she reverts to her old ways and becomes a hermit for days not wanting to see or talk to anyone...she usually spends that time crying, ultra depressed but covers it up with excessive- sometimes annoying happiness, extremely gentle and compassionate...maybe even motherly.

So she hides her actual feelings under a mask? This is actually pretty good because she's putting up a act.

Appearance- Skin- Fair Hair- Long snowy white half down and the other half in a top bun
Eyes: Amethyst purple Body shape- Pear Pt 1-
Height: 5'0
Clothes: Usually barefoot wearing a grey-blue dress with a slit down the side that's covered by a short metallic petty coat tied by a black satin ribbon as a belt and also she wears a bandage up her left arm and right ankle. over her left ankle she wears a jade and gold anklet. she doesn't usually wear her headband because she is very forgetful but when she does its around her right arm.

Nice and this is a pretty good outfit to imagine.

Appearance- pt 2
height: 5'1 grey blue flowy crop top with black fishnet covering her stomach, tight black skirt that reaches a little below fingertip length, bandaged going from her wrists hands all the way up her shoulders, still barefoot with the jade anklet. Headband is now around her waist.

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This is a picture of Sachiko and it's really good. Thanks for the picture.

Kekkei Genkai: Iyashino namida (癒しの涙) Which literally translates to healing tears. She uses this to her advantage being overly emotional she cries A LOT so whenever a comrade needs to be healed she can just cry on the wound and wa-bam healed. However there is a certain extent to this; they have to be real tears of sadness, they can't bring people back from the dead, and if she uses them too much or on the same person she can use the ability to use it completely .

These are good restrictions and the fact that you used that she's a crybaby is a amazing. This is very unique.

Battle: Another part of the Mizuchi possessing her is that it gives her an amazing amount of chakra as well as chakra control, she prefers not fighting in general as she is a medical- nin but if or when it comes to it she uses long to mid range defensive and offensive water based jutsu. Such as
Water Release: Water Whip and
Water Release: Water Heavens Convergence.

Very nice, and the fact that she only has water means she can advance in that more than having 5 different affinities.

Hobbies: Perfecting her medical ninjutsu, chilling with the bros (Naruto, Sai, Sakura), Dancing even if she's at it horrible, thinking Sorry for making it so long! you don't have to review her if its too much of a burden! but if you do thank you! <,3 heh also sorry if theres typos I'm somehow managed to write this until 3am

It is alright and I will review any OC that comes my way. Never think it is a burden because I am here to help no matter what. Thank you for getting it to me at 3am.
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Final Analysis- This OC has little work that needs to be done but other than that she's good. There are a couple questions that need answers. Other than those she's ready for a fanfic. Thank you for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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