OC 87 (Yuna Inu)

This OC is by Flammenstern I hope you like it.
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Name: Yuna Inu


Nice name


Age:
Part 1: 12
Part 2: 16
The Last: 19
Boruto: 30


Naruto group age, nice


Gender: Female


Cool


Family: Yuma Inu(father - deceased), Yukina Inu(mother - deceased), Mika Inu(older brother)


Thanks for the relations and life status.


Appearance: Part 1: simple long-sleeved green shirt, short black pants(like Sakura had), black ninja boots, forehead-protector around her neck, long brown hair ties in a bun with a few bangs falling out, dark green eyes


Part 2: simple green t-shirt, short black pants, black ninja boots without sole, forehead-protector around her neck, longer brown hair tied into a ponytail that reaches the middle of her back and a few bangs falling out, dark green eyes, black elbow protectors


This is really good and simple,


Personality:
Part 1: shy, listened to everything her parents told her to do to be a perfect daughter, tries to ignore her emotions so she doesn't show any weaknesses, fearfully, keeps her problems to herself to not bother anyone, looks up to Mika a lot because he's a great fighter of their clan, secretly emotional(because she keeps it to herself)


Part 2: still a bit shy but more confident, protective over her best friends and family because she's scared to loose someone again, doesn't hide her emotions around friends anymore, left her parents wishes of a daughter behind.


Her personality is great and different. Her flaws with emotions is amazing.


Battle style: mainly uses taijutsu, which she is best with, sometimes ninjutsu. She doesn't use genjutsu(like her brother does) or weapons because she's not good with it at all. She often combines some ninjutsu with her taijutsu.


Nice


Jutsus:
Shadow Clone Jutsu(Academy years) Healing(like Tsunade teaches it but a bit more specialized on her clan)
Inu Jutsu(Jonin years)


So like clone jutsu or Naruto's because Naruto learned his from a scroll not the academy.


Earth style: Hidden Capture Jutsu(Chunin years) Fur Jutsu(Chunin years) Basic earth style jutsus(Genin years) [struggles in general a bit in ninjutsu but she manages over time]


Nice


Relationship: / (I'm open for any suggestions)


That's up to you


Clan Traits: brown hair, dark green eyes, very emotional


So their all emotional? Ok


Element Affinity: Earth


Nice


Ninja Rank:
Genin(10 years)
Chunin(14 years)
Jonin(20 years)


So she graduated early like Itachi? Two years early? She doesn't show anything to make her graduate early.


Past: When she was 4, she was enrolled into the academy, alongside Kai Ryu and Misaki Akuma, which later turned out to be her teammates. Their village always made teams, where every clan(of the three) was represented to represent the bond as a village. They've all been trained to be ready when a new war breaks out, because they'll have to participate if they want or not. Yunas parents treated her like she couldn't achieve anything, to help her be prepared for a war, so that she wasn't so emotional. One day she came home from a mission with Kai and Misaki to find the whole village slaughtered except for the kids of the clans, that were kidnapped instead. Because the village isn't safe anymore, the three have to leave to their allied villages, where they have to split up. Since then she kept searching for her missing clan members.


So she never went to leaf? What village is she apart of because you need to be part of a village to have a headband remember it's to a village not a clan.


Trivia:
- got trained to fight blind(is pretty good at it)
- awakens her kekkei genkai with 11, after her parents died
- sees her teammates as siblings
- father is a leader of the village
- learned to fully control her kekkei genkai with 20
- joins Kurenais team after the Hokage accepted her being in the village, Konohagakure (her allied village)
- between her and Mika are 4 years


Oh ok, this is really good.
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Final Analysis- This OC is good and has a little hiccup but that's it. She's really good and is ready for whatever you want to do with her. Thank you for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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