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Inobi Yamanaka/Ushinawa HanaSecond

name meaning: "Lost Flowers"

Nickname: "Bush Thistle Princess" (common among family friends)/ "Inobi the Shinobi" (a teasing nickname made by her younger peers)/ "Lazy Sword" (her referred title among the samurai)

These names are very good and the definition is perfect. The nickname also goes great with it.

Age:
8-9 (Orig. Ser.)/
11-12 (Shippuden)/
15 (The Last)/
27 (Boruto)

Oh so she's a little younger like Konohamaru, cute.

Species: Human

Good

Gender: Female

Nicr

Sexual orientation: Closet lesbian

So Bi but prefers girls? Nice

Birthday: May 13

Cool

Life Story: Inobi Yamanaka, considered to be among one of the prettiest bush clovers covered in thorns and thistle of the Yamanaka clan. She was born four years after her cousin, Ino Yamanaka, meaning that she was already placed in the shadow of her family. While growing up she was often talked about in the third person by just about anyone who cared: Would she grow up to be as pretty as her mother or Ino? Could she be another prodigy like her uncle, Inoichi? Could she...? Would she...? When will she...?

You get the picture.

Yeah I get it.

This led her to retreat into herself for a couple years and not really put much effort at all into fine tuning her chakra. It was almost like dealing with a shell of a person, she was just barely there. In time the people who put the up on such a high pedestal began to just accept her as just another sub-par member of the family, and it was like a breath of fresh air.

This is great, it's very realistic.

Inobi would often sneak into the Akimichi compound to do some rough and tumble kind of training, focusing particularly on wrestling. Chōza Akimichi was considered a personal mentor of sorts for her, and taught the young Yamanaka how to focus her chakra into large, devastating attacks.When she was too sore to strongarm with the Akimichi men, she found solace in working on swordsmanship from the special jounin, Hayate Gekkō. This particular bond of teacher and student was no more than a random occurrence next to a riverbank. Inobi had walked in on Hayate's downtime exercises, and the jounin just didn't have the heart to make her leave.

When not training, Inobi could often be found playing ninja with the boys of the village, like Konohamaru for instance. In their younger days, the two could barely stand the sight of the other. Konohamaru believed that Inobi was a selfish jerk, and would often berate into her ears. On the flip side, the young Yamanaka had a dislike for Konohamaru because she thought of him as a loud mouth. As a result of this tension, the two always fought. However, it wasn't until they joined the academy that Konohamaru and his gang found out that Inobi was a girl, and it was well into Shippuden that Konohamaru actually saw Inobi as a girl. 

Once becoming a genin, Inobi was regrettably forced to wear some form of proper mission attire. With age came a noticable difference in her outward appearance, such as the appearance of more feminine facial features and a more slender build. This built a severe kind of awkwardness between her and the other kids she used to play with when they were younger. This all came to a head when one of the boys confessed his feelings to her and, in a fit, she grabbed him by his collar and held him up off the ground. After that point, she seemed to almost instantly cut all the ties she had to her old group of friends. The boys wouldn't hang out with her out of fear, and the girls, while secretly admiring her strength, kept their distance to protect their social status.From then on, Inobi then became known as a sort of drifter inside the village. Most times she would hang out with the older kids, like Ino and her team, since they were family. Inobi wouldn't admit it, but the fact was that she was lonely, and just wanted things to go back to the way they were.

Eventually, when Inobi got older, and Mai had left the village for Dōro, the young Yamanaka decided to leave the village as well. It was during a mission to the Land of Fangs, where a group of rogue ninja attacked her squad near one of the nation's many waterfalls. It was then that she enacted her plan, faking her death at the hands of a well placed kunai, and taking a tumble down one of the largest waterfalls. Of course, this was all planned, as there was a secret cave hidden behind the falls that allowed her to escape the sharp rocks at the bottom. 

She escaped, her friends, family, and the village believing her dead as nothing more than a scattered pool of blood drifting through the rivers. She then began her journey, going off in search of purpose, until she found herself on the doorstep of the samurai in the Land of Iron.About her-

I had to go to the end to say this. I couldn't stop reading it and forgot to makes notes because it's so good, it has a realistic approach in the Naruto world.

Personality: Inobi is an odd case, seeming to have a split personality of one being being a rough tomboy, and the other being rather charming and motherly. These behavioural changes can happen in the blink of an eye depending on who she's talking to. 

Growing up, Inobi was almost always seen with either a cocky smile or angry glare, as playing mostly with boys had that effect. While always mouthing off when no adults were looking, she instantly change her tone the moment her actions came to attention.

Inobi didn't care for playing with dolls or getting into make-up, but ever since she was young she did like the idea of making herself look good with clothes. It didn't matter who they were meant for, boys or girls, she would usually try on most anything in her home, with her parent's help of course. This also led to her minor fascination with shorter hair, as she believed that it went much better with most outfits.In her later years, Inobi was led to harden her heart ever so much. She kept her more girly aspects pushed aside to maintain her authority over her underlings. She's can be seen as aggressive towards her men, but she'll be quick to say that it's "tough love". In the public eye, however, she's always mannerable, and usually quite accommodating to even the most absurd requests, as most of her shame withered a long time ago.

This is good, it shows her playful side and serious side. When to be serious and put up a good behavior verses goofing with friends. She definitely not only show how she acts but her maturity.

Good habits: 

1. Never wastes a thing from a battle. She will often search the area for any leftover weapons, usable clothes, or provisions from fallen enemies.

2. She will take as much time as needed to properly train her subordinates. It doesn't matter when or where she is ordered to be, she will not go until those she is directly in control of have a clear grasp of their mission.

3. Inobi is, without doubt, selfless. On the rare occasions that she and her men are outmatched or outnumbered, she will tell them to run while she's the distraction.Bad habits:

1. While good at training others, she has been rather lax in her own training. Not because of laziness, but because of not having been presented a real challenge in a long while.

2. She's a recreational smoker, and oftentimes puts out her cigarettes in windowsills.

3. She will often lash out at most people whenever they mistake her for a boy. However, the same can be said if someone treats her too much like a girl.

These are great with a wonderful balance of good and bad habits.

Likes: her tightrope training; stormy weather; body pillows; fashionable, mostly loose, clothing; eating cattail shoots; her gifted katana, named "Saishūka" or "Final Mirror", from an old, and nearly decrepit, Mifune; water cashews; barbecued lamb; the "Dancing Dragon" movie series

Dislikes: cocky little shits; people who look at her differently than her underlings; potshots; perverts (like a lot); anyone asking to use her sword; anyone using her sword; the people who don't clean off the blood after using her sword; corsets; fish cakes; spoilers

These are great likes and dislikes that shows the little details about her. It makes her more of a character.

Hobbies: sewing; tightrope walking; tai chi

Nice

Fears: being dragged back to Konoha in chains; that tingling feeling she gets on her back when she senses someone behind her, but when she looks there's nobody; her corset busting apart during combat; crossing blades with Sasuke Uchiha, or any of the original Seven Swordsmen of the Mist

Perfectly justified fears especially the one with sensing someone behind you.

Strengths: monstrously strong; adept taijutsu; gifted bladesman; keen eye for trends in clothing fashion; gives good haircuts; attentive trainer; good chakra control

Weaknesses: slacks in her own training; her strength is a combination of both her teachings from Chōza Akimichi and Sakura Haruno, who was feeding her fragmented lessons from her time with Lady Tsunade, however it lacks the refinement necessary for most of her clan's mind jutsus; she almost always wears a corset along with the bandages that cover her well endowed chest, so she never adapted to fighting with her breasts almost free from restriction

These are good strengths and weaknesses, not to mention that fact that she has more flaws than strengths are a nice touch. Also the struggle at the end of her weakness is something many girls can relate too making her realistic and relatable.

Special powers/abilities: her family's mind alteration abilities

Good

Extras: whenever she goes out on a mission she's always in her fitted samurai armor, but within the armor she usually wears a brightly colored hakama with the top kept open for breathability

Nice

Dreams: To live a life of her own, and create a name for herself to rival her cousin, Ino!

So she wants to prove herself? That good especially sense she was being compared to her in the past, its justified.

Talents: She is rather flexible in her body, and has developed the necessary muscle strength for pulling off several acrobatic techniques that are considered impressive even by top-class shinobi

Good, flexibility is good for ninja and Ino is one of the most flexible of them all. Not only in the anime but the games as well.

Ambition/Life-long dream: Inobi wants to be the best person she can be, the way she wants to do it, as a samurai.

The fact that she wants to be a samurai is already amazing, it's so different and makes her more unique for not wanting to be a ninja.

Occupation:
Ninja Academy student (Orig. Series)/ Genin (Shippuden)/
Chūnin (The Last)/
Samurai captain (Boruto)

Great

Best classes: taijutsu, camouflage, interrogation, sewing, and fashion

She shows great diversity in her talents.

Worst classes: genjutsu, flower arrangements, and postured walking (having to practice how to walk like nobility for infiltration missions)

These are also good because the last one is for a mission and could go bad if she does it wrong.

Family and Friends

Parent(s): 

Kagami Yamanaka- (Mother, alive)
Inoki Yamanaka- (Father, alive)

Siblings: Inobi is an only child

Relatives:

Inoichi Yamanaka- (Uncle, alive until 4th Ninja War)

Ino Yamanaka- (Cousin, alive)

Inojin Yamanaka- (Nephew, alive)

Pets: She did once have a stray bear cub, but once it got old enough she released it back into the wild. She had named him Fuzzy.

Best friends: In this sense, the only person she would truly consider a "best friend" would be Mai Hyakuki, as they had been rather close before she left for Dōro, and even trained together.

Friends: Konohamaru, Moegi, Udon, Mifune, her old teammates Shinra and Yuru, and her lieutenant Shīrudo

Crush(es): It's rather difficult to say if she has a crush, or even has romantic feelings, towards anyone. During her younger years in the academy she didn't really view boys romantically, just as another person to beat up if they cheated. Though she still does not view boys as romantic, she can't help but stare at Shīrudo whenever she decides to strip down to bare essentials for sparring practice.

Rivals: Mai Hyakuki, the only person she feels that deserves to be her rival

Enemies: rogue ninja, the feudal lord of the Land of Bears

The relationship is good and the fact that you made her crush complicated shows that she has options.

Ninja Information

Birth village: Konohagakure (the Village Hidden in the Leaves)

Current village: the Samurai Castle in the Land of Iron

Rank:
Academy student (Orig. Series)/ Genin (Shippuden)/
Chūnin (The Last)/
Samurai captain (Boruto)

Ninja status: missing-nin

Akatsuki?: No

Teammates: Shinra Hidari and Yuru Migi

Sensei: Inoki Yamanaka, Chōza Akimichi, Iruka Umino, Hayate Gekkō, Mai Hyakuki, Sakura Haruno, Mifune

Nindo: Protect all those that can't protect themselves!

The ninja information is all great there are no problems here.

Chakra Element(s): Fire, wind, Yin(mental energy), Yang(physical energy)

Learned Jutsu:
  -Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu
  -Fire Style: Phoenix Flower Dance
  -Fire Style: Burning Sword
  -Wind Style: Razor Leaf Dance
  -Ninja Art: Dance of the Crescent Moon
  -Ninja Art: Mind Destruction Jutsu
  -Ninja Art: Mind Transfer Jutsu

Nice and the use of having both known jutsus and made up ones is a nice touch.

Personal Jutsu-

#1- Ninja Art: Mind Mirror Jutsu

Hand signs: ram, snake, bird, specific sign

Description: Working much in the same vain as Mind Destruction Jutsu, Mind Mirror Jutsu has the ability to temporarily offset the brain's connection to the body's nervous system in such a way that any and all actions an opponent may make are reversed, such as: throwing, walking, punching, jumping, etc.

The jutsu has no weakness in execution, but it still requires a certain level of precision and time to focus, something not usually given in the heat of battle

Rank: C

Range: twenty feet

Type: Yin ReleaseWeapons: (Orig. Series.)- a couple throwing stars as a gift from her uncle, Inoichi / (Shippuden)- standard ninja tools, a wakizashi sword in memory of her old blade mentor, Hayate Gekkō / (The Last)- she now mostly uses a combination of her sword skills, smoke bombs, and bolas, with very little room for kunai and stars / (Boruto)- her katana, Saishūka, a new wakizashi sword to replace the one she left behind, and she still uses weighted bolas to trip up enemies. 

Strength in Jutsus-

Ninjutsu: 5/10
Genjutsu: 2/10
Taijutsu: 7/10
Kekkei genkai: 4/10
Dōjutsu: 0/10
Kinjutsu: 3/10
Fuuinjutsu: 1/10

Strength in missions-

Accuracy: 8/10
Weaponry: 5/10
Stealth: 5/10
Speed: 7/10
Traps: 2/10
Tracking: 5/10
Chakra Control: 4/10
Analytical Skills: 4/10
Strategy: 6/10
Leadership: 9/10Clan: Yamanaka

Great and thank you so much for giving it a weakness and the attributes fits it perfectly.

Clan history: The Yamanaka clan is one of the three legendary families that form the "Ino-Shika-Cho" clan formation, one of the true staples of the Hidden Leaf Village. Their mastery of mind techniques have made great use in areas like: interrogation, espionage, and intelligence gathering. As a bonus, they display aptitude for sensory abilities, telepathic communication, reading minds, and transferring their consciousness.

The flower insignia of the clan, a bush clover, is the symbol for "positive love".

As a right of passage for each clan of the Ino-Shika-Cho formation, each new generation will receive special earrings from a member of the Sarutobi clan once they become chūnin. These earrings symbolize that they have become adults in the eyes of their respective clans, and show that they are ready to lead the clan if the need ever arose.

Clan status: The Yamanaka clan is currently going strong in the leaf village, and has a bright future ahead of it.

Thanks for the recap on the Yamanaka clan.

Kekkei genkai: none

Tailed Beast: none

Good

Looks and Appearance-

Body Type/Appearance- creamy skin tone; platinum blonde hair, usually kept in a ponytail of some form; light blue eyes; full lips, usually kept in a resting sneer; her nose has a small amount of permanent swelling, after having it broken so many times; Inobi has a toned, strong woman's physique after being allowed to fill out her body due to becoming a samurai and the lax in needing to maintain a small figure for ninja missions, which has also led her to fill out her curves; large 36DD bust size; wide hips; long, toned legs

Ok so we have tsunade over here. Well not really sense Double D isn't rare especially where I'm from.

Orig. Series: 8-9; 76.7 lbs. (35.7 kg.); 4'8"; platinum blonde hair kept cut short, just over her ears; rounded facial features; button nose; she has a lone freckle sitting on the right of the bridge of her nose; she more often than not has a few scratches and bruises covering her body from playing with the boys

Shippuden: 11-12; 94.5 lbs. (42.9 kg.); 5'2"; hair has been allowed to grow slightly longer, now almost reaching her shoulders, and is usually kept up in the signature Yamanaka ponytail with bedraggled bangs covering her forehead; She still has a lone freckle at the bridge of her nose; while growing taller she also built up her muscle accordingly

The Last: 15; 100 lbs. (45.4 kg.); 5'5"; her hair has gotten much longer, now trailing down past her shoulder blades, though she's taken a cue from Mai Hyakuki and has it kept in a thick braid (her bangs have been managed into a boyish side do); she continues to pack on meat and muscle, which puts her in the running as one of the physically strongest kunoichi in Konoha

Boruto: 27; 127.7 lbs. (57.9 kg.); 5'10" hair is now cut military style, about an inch left almost the whole area, save for the little ponytail she still keeps as a reminder; she has gone beyond keeping a smaller physique for ninja work, having now built up both intimidating size and muscle massBlood type: A negative

Everyday outfit: When she was a part of the village, Inobi often sported a simple loose t-shirt and grey cargo shorts. She was still a stickler for personal style, so her clothes were more often than not matching for a certain mood she felt, activity she was going to do, or even based on what weather was outside.

As a samurai, the times where she's not geared for a fight usually has her wearing a dark blue and purple hakama, with the main covers being a double cotton weave and the ties being made from silk. She doesn't wear her corset during these times, but the bandages are still clearly there.

Mission Outfit: As a ninja, Inobi wore a dark purple vest and compression shorts, a testament to the fact that, while she had respect for her cousin Ino, she wasn't exactly going to follow in her footsteps. Bandages are loosely wrapped around her ankles up to her mid-calves, and she wears the standard blue shinobi sandals of the village. On her forearms she wore off white arm warmers, this being one of the biggest things she copied from her cousin's wardrobe.

Nowadays, as a samurai captain, she is almost never in a battle without her armor on, if she can help it. It's a standard suit, complete with respirator and a horned helmet to mark her status, but Inobi did have a hand in decorating it. The side plating is painted with colored brambles and thorns, amidst them are bush clover flowers. The front plate depicts a rather simple, abstract decal of a water lily. 

Underneath the armor, Inobi still wears her everyday garb, however now she wears her corset along with the bandages. This restrains the bouncing of her chest, allowing more control in her movements.Accessories: Since becoming a samurai she has had her ears pierced with small, blue studs. After obtaining the rank of captain she replaced them with silver.

All the outfits and looks fit perfectly, not to mention the fact that you gave reasons for things like cuts and bruises are great.

Makeup: Inobi distastes the idea of makeup, though begrudgingly relents with using light colored lipstick, small amounts of mascara, and minimal natural blush.

Nice, and before anyone says anything yes there is makeup in Naruto, Hinata wears it at the wedding.

Scent: Inobi has always smelled earthy, even from an early age. She smells of the Autumn trees, pine, dried soil, and lemongrass.

Thanks for the scent, now when I smell autumn trees and lemongrass I'll think of Inobi.

Jewelry: Since becoming a samurai she has had her ears pierced with small, blue studs. After obtaining the rank of captain she replaced them with silver.

Nice

Scars: Inobi has a small puncture scar just below the left side of her ribcage after a surprise attack involving a pitchfork.

I can just imagine someone getting stabbed with a pitchfork and having that wound especially sense it's a weird but notable choice, that's definitely a story to tell the grandkids.

Extra information

Quote: "I don't care anymore that people won't know the real me. Inobi Yamanaka of the Leaf died nine years ago, and her body was never recovered. The fact that a blonde haired girl the same age joins the samurai only weeks afterwards is just sheer coincidence."

Yes yes yes, this shows that she has had enough and with the life story she has I can see why.

Favorite food: sticky pork dumplings
Favorite number: 3
Favorite season: Autumn
Favorite holiday: New Year
Favorite time of day: between 10:00 and 11:00 p.m.

Awesome.
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Final Analysis- What can I say, this OC is mad good. She has it all, her story makes sense, everything matches up and she's different from a ninja being a samurai. She is great and really well thought out, I can tell you put a lot of thought in her and I commend you on your hard work and dedication because this is not a character that you make over night, this character took days and months with consent changes. Amazing, that's all I can say. Thank you for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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