Hey guys it's time for another OC, now I'm sorry that I took so long with this I had been sick and have been coughing for 16 days now, but I'm getting over a cold so that's normal. Well here is another Naruto OC and this one is by SnatchYourWig101  I hope you like it.
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This Is a crossover Naruto and Marvel fanfiction :'D 

That's cool, this is the first OC I ever reviewed with this crossover.

Name: Suhan Udaku (Suhan- Prince/Good looking| Udaku

Cool name

Gender: Female (Non binary)

Nice

Age: 13 (Part 1), 16 (Part 2), 19 (The Last), lastly 32 (Boruto)

Nice, so she's the Naruto group's age

Family: T'Chaka Udaku (Father) Shuri Udaku (Sister) T'Challa Udaku (Brother) Ramonda (Step-mother) N'Yami (Mother- Deceased after giving child birth to T'Challa) 

Cool and thanks for their roles and life statuses.

Sexuality: Pansexual

Nice

Love Interest- Hinata and Sakura 

Cool and I think this is first OC I reviewed that liked both of them as a love interest.

Appearance- Suhan has short curly/messy raven hair, although In the sun It's a mix of brown and blonde, she has oak brown eye's. She Is dark skin like the rest of their clan, they have dark bags under their eye's from staying up late reading books. They have a scar on their lip and across their nose. (Think of Iruka) 

Ok, this is really good. But why reading books late do you mean the whole clan or just her?

Part 1: Suhan always has her hair out, never thinking of hairstyle because they never cared to learn. Wears a dark grey jacket with a hood similar to Shino's but sleeveless and their clan symbol on the back, has rings around their neck and wrists made of vibranuim (Strongest metal ever made). Wears dark grey ninja pants that ends at their knees, bandages under her ninja pants or sweats that end at her light gray ninja sandals. Wears a black panther mask(Eye's glow In the dark), only the clan heirs wear this mask In battles. 

Ok, this is really good and it has that great crossover with Naruto and Marvel aspect. Good job

Part 2- Their hair Is now In a low ponytail, though It's very messy not the most prettiest sight. Doesn't wear the jacket anymore but a tight black shirt (Sleeveless), black fingerless gloves, still wears the dark grey sweats but got rid of the bandages In replacement are fisher nets. Barefooted, rock hard feet that can stand pebbles, glass, etc. Lost the rings since they were very uncomfortable In battle, still wears the Wakandian black panther mask. 

Nice, and this transition from part 1 to part 2 with her outfit is great as well.

Personality- Suhan Is very complicated person, she tend to hide what she truly feels and replaces It with an energetic, annoying little 13 year old girl. (Though In the future that changes).

Oh ok so this is for part 1? Nice

Personality- Suhan is a very organized, observant, and dependable person. She depends on reading peoples movements or how they feel, studying their actions and personalities to calculate their next movements. Although their not the smartest nor strongest person on her team she Is the most dependable on feelings or interrogation. He'll show respect to those who deserve It, and sarcasm to those they dislike. Suhan can be cocky at times.

Oh ok, this also shows how she matured over the years.

Likes- Reading books, or listening to stories form the past. Practicing her interrogating skills on criminals,

Nice, but what if she doesn't have criminals to practice on? Will she practice with friends instead?

Dislikes- Kakashi(Ever since they met him they could never read him), Naruto(Too talkative for their taste, annoyingly loud, and would probably end up getting her killed In a mission with his Everyone's a good person speech'), Yamanaka Clan (Thinks their bloodline jutsu's are 'annoying'), crying (Makes them look 'weak'). 

Nice, these are some good dislikes and are very different than what other OCs have as dislikes.

Team- Sensei- T'Challa Udaku, Teammates- Shuri Udaku, and Bruce Banner

Oh ok, this is cool.

Relationships with teammates- T'Challa: They love him to death and would risk their life for him, though he would never let that happen to his little 'sister'.
Shuri: Their relationship Is pretty good not much fighting but Suhan will risk their life for them.
Bruce: Protect him at all cost. 

This is nice and it also shows the great dynamic they have. This must be a team that gets along nicely.

Relationship with Konohagakure- The village hidden In the Tropics and The village hidden In the leaves have been allies every since the chunin exams. (Fun fact- They often send a team from each village on a mission together, reveling the crush on the two girls.)

This is good and I like how the relationship with the village tied with their crushes on Hinata and Sakura.

Clan Symbol - A panther face 

Nice

Clan Techniques(Though other people can learn It, If adopted into the clan.)-
Wakanda Forever (Forgive me Author): This ninjutsu will allow the ninjas teammates weakest ability (Genjutsu, Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, etc), a boost.
Panthers Last cry: Extremely forbidden technique only used at dire moments, will change the casters appearance. (Yellow eyes, dagger like teeth, black skin that starts at their fingertips to shoulder, claws, and high speed, and a tail, If used the caster will die hours later. Striped Away: Takes away opponents ninjutsu. (Learns In Part 2). Summoning Jutsu: This can be used for any animal but Panthers themselves are only loyal to the Wakandian Caln.

This is really good and shows great relation between Naruto and Marvel. The way their attacks is works great in both the Marvel and naruto world.

Battle Style: Suhan will test her opponent before actually battling them, checking their battling stance, personality, facial expression, and appearance before deciding on a approach of attack. Their defense and offensive are equally tied though offensive 2% lower. Depends on taijutsu even If It's their weakest fighting ability, though chakra will help with that. Genjutsu Is higher than all their abilities considering they test out opponents, ninjustsu Is above taijutsu and below genjutsu. 

Nice this all shows they are not only observant of her opponents but thinks really hard about their moves like a strategist.

Personal choice of weapon- Spear 

Nice weapon choice. I never really see spears used by OCs so seeing something different is nice.

Done!

Got ya.
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Final analysis- This OC is really good and has a nice balance between Marvel and Naruto. They don't have nothing really wrong with them and have a nice team to boot. I do want to know however is it more of a Naruto world or a Marvel? As you know Marvel is modern and have cars and using black panther tech is very advanced unlike Naruto, so the question is; is there a way to get to the Marvel world through Naruto or are they in the same place but maybe on different sides of the world? That is just a question I need to know. Other than that there are some more questions above that I would like you to answer. After that this OC would be completely done. Thank you for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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