This OC is by KakikomiSama I hope you like it.
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[Kaname Itsuki was 2 years older than Uchiha Itachi’s generation, making Itachi 12 at Itsuki’s death]
[Kaname and Itsuki are both Japanese given names and surnames. At first, this character was named Kaname, but I had lots of trouble with the appearance and personality afterwards, so I decided to switch the names around]

Nice and this is very different, he's about Shisui's age. Nice.
 

General

Name:
[Surname][Given Name]
Kaname Itsuki
[English: Itsuki Kaname]

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Age:
::Academy Student; 5-6 years old
::Genin; 6-7 years old
::Chunin; 7-10 years old
::ANBU; 10-14 years old
::Death; 14 years old

Oh dead at a young age. This is different and interesting. Great job.

Species:
Human

Good

Gender:
Male

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Sexual Orientation:
Homosexual

Nice

Blood Type:
AB

Cool

Birthday:
December 30th

Oh, so pretty much the end of the year.

Personality:
Itsuki is quiet and reserved person, but isn’t against socializing with others. He is soft-spoken and gentle, not liking to hurt others, but isn’t against it since there are times that call for it. While he is reserved, Itsuki doesn’t mind talking to others and asking for advice, as long as they do not bother him when he wants to have his alone time. Because of his gentle and soft-spoken nature, many mistake Itsuki as a female, which Itsuki is annoyed at, but doesn’t quite mind it as he is open-minded to using his feminine appearance to his advantages. He also doesn’t hurt others unless necessary, which tends to get him in trouble and injured because of this. One of the major things people recognize him for is his avid day-dreaming.

This is great, his personality matches well with nothing contrasting. Not to mention this soft nature he has is pretty interesting.

Good Trait(s):
Itsuki is patient and intelligent, knowing that to gain knowledge, you must be patient. He is also very willing to lend advice and ask advice from others, and uses his feminine appearance to make male opponents underestimate him during missions. While reserved, he is also willing to socialize because he knows if he doesn’t socialize, it messes with one thoughts and mind.

This is really good and the fact that he uses his features to trick men is great.

Bad Trait(s):
Because of Itsuki gentle nature, he tends to get injured relatively easy as he hates hurting others without reason. He tends to stay quiet and only speaks when absolutely necessary to others or spoken to. Even though Itsuki doesn’t seem like it, he can become angered when provoked, mostly by being called ‘short’ or being teased by his feminine appearance. Though unlike others who blow up with anger, he is the type to be calm and yet very terrifying when angered. He also tends to overthink things, which when he should think simply and not overthink so much. When someone who is very precious to him is in danger, he tends to throw caution to the wind and become quite reckless, not thinking things through and becoming more injured. He is also a deep day-dreamer, becoming lost in thought most of the time.

These traits are amazing and goes greatly with his personality.

Like(s):
Sweets [mostly castella, dorayaki, and dango], Reading, Training, Taking Walks Around The Village, Making Medicine, Learning About Flowers, Painting, Hanging With His Best Friend, Shoji, Go, Winter, Snowy Days, Rainy Days, Night

These are really good.

Dislike(s):
Spicy Foods, Being Teased About His Feminine Looks, Hurting Others, Being Told He Is Weak, Being Forced Into Doing Something, Summer, Humid Days, Dry Days, Morning

Nice

Hobby(ies):
Playing Shoji/Go, Planting Herbs/Flowers, Walking Around The Village [Mostly During The Night], Training, Creating Medicine and Poisons

Great hobbies

Fear(s):
-He fears he will end up hurting someone because of his reluctance to hurt others

This is really good fear and can come up a lot in his missions. Awesome.

Strength(s):
Seduction, Control Over Emotions, Strategist, Fuinjutsu, Iryo Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Speed, Medicines, Poisons, Senbons

Very great

Weakness(es):
Hesitating To Hurt Others, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, Stamina, Strength, Chakra Reserves, High Frequency Noises, Recklessness, Wind Release Users

This is really good

Personal Quote:
“Always have hope, because with hope, you live to see another day.”
 
Beautiful

History:
Itsuki Kaname was born in the Kaname Clan secret village Sakuhana Village during the Third Shinobi World War, his mother being a gentle natured civilian named Yuri Kimura and his father being a shinobi for Konohagakure named Ryuunosuke. Because of his father being a shinobi for one of the hidden village, Itsuki never saw him often and always admired his mother, who in his eyes, was the most gorgeous and graceful woman he ever seen. Many of the clan members saw Itsuki as a genius and always treated him as such, pressuring him to be just like his father. This caused Itsuki to become reserved, not wanting to interact with others since they only talked about him becoming just as great as his father. But in reality, Itsuki didn’t want to be exactly like his father. He wanted to become a shinobi who was gorgeous and graceful to honor his mother, who told him she once dreamed of becoming a kunoichi, but couldn’t because of her disease she obtained as a young child. At the age of 3, Itsuki witnessed his first trauma, which was his mother dying right in front of his eyes in a hospital. After hearing the news of this, Kohaku Kaname, Itsuki’s grandmother, took him to Konoha with her and her husband; Akihito Kaname so he could become a shinobi like his father. Once arriving at Konoha and settling in, Itsuki met his father for the first time. While nervous, Itsuki soon warmed up to Ryuunosuke and always had fun whenever they could, Ryuunosuke even introducing Itsuki to Shoji, Go and Gardening. A year later and Itsuki was shattered, as news returned from the frontlines in the war. His father was killed, protecting his teammate from crossfire. Itsuki became more reserved after this, never speaking at all unless necessary or talked to. Kohaku was always in the hospital because of her weakening health and Itsuki was stuck with his grandfather, Akihito, who always forgot who Itsuki was and always mistaken him for his father.
On Itsuki’s fifth birthday, he went to wake Akihito up only to have found him dead, his old age having caught up to him during the night. Itsuki, though was always looked at as Ryuunosuke, still cared or Akihito as the elder man treated him like a son and though he always felt guilty about it, loved the feeling of having a father dearly. Not much happened after that, Itsuki training through his father’s scrolls and steadily becoming the Rookie of The Year in the Shinobi Academy, which caused some hate from others since to them he looked weak and girly. After turning 6 years old, Itsuki became a genin because of the war and joined the genin team 18, consisting of Kaede Kobayashi, a female who was 10 years old and thought of Itsuki as her rival, and Hirofumi Ito, who was Itsuki’s closest friend. Their sensei was Kazuki Aoyama, a high ranking jōnin. Itsuki trained with these three for a year, quickly looking up to Kazuki as his father and looking at Kaede as his sister, and Hirofumi as his brother. Within that year, Itsuki was promoted to chunin after defeating one during a mission, leading his other teammates well because their sensei was severely injured, and managing to heal Kazuki from the wound until it only became a minor scar.

After being promoted, Itsuki decided to visit the hospital to see his grandmother and show her his promotion, only to witness a young child around the age of 5 looking slightly afraid and confused. Not being able to resist other children, especially ones as cute as this one, Itsuki wondered over to the other. The two talked, Itsuki founding out that the other child was Itachi Uchiha and he was here because his mother was delivering his baby brother. Now understanding the other’s fear, since he could hear his mother screaming from the pain, Itsuki helped calm down Itachi and stayed with him until his mother was done giving birth, telling the other he will see him around when Itachi’s father came to get him.

A few months past after that, and the Kyuubi Attack happened. Itsuki was at home, getting ready for bed only for him to freeze, becoming highly terrified as the Kyuubi’s presence appeared. Soon, Itsuki managed to snap out of it and quickly gathered things he needed, rushing out of his house to direct civilians towards the safe houses. After seeing everyone was safe in the house, Itsuki rushed around, healing the most serious wounds to the minor, spotting Itachi with a wailing baby and a trembling girl. After making sure everyone healed and bandaged up, Itsuki joined Itachi, learning that the baby was his younger brother, Sasuke Uchiha, and the girl was Izumi Uchiha. There, he took Sasuke from Itachi and calmed the baby down, humming gentle lullabies he remembered hearing from his mother. After getting Sasuke asleep, Itsuki asked Itachi if he and his friend was okay, which Itachi answered that they were fine.

Because of this event, Itachi and Itsuki quickly became friends, Itachi’s friend Shisui Uchiha also quickly becoming his friend, the trio training together whenever they have spare time, most of the time only being Itachi and Itsuki sparring since Shisui was an ANBU, and even going on missions together sometimes if the village was low on chunins for Itsuki to take. At 10 years old, Itsuki became an ANBU under Kakashi Hatake, the two becoming friends, but not close enough to be good friends. This is where they learned of Itsuki’s gentle nature, always hesitating and risking many lives because of him not wanting hurt others. This part of him shattered when his teammate, Aizen Abe was killed after protecting Itsuki from the ninja he tried not to hurt. Learning that he had to hold this part of him away during ANBU missions, Itsuki chained it away and cried behind his mask silently as he killed others. 2 years in and Itachi joined the group, Itsuki having literally hugged the other when he walked in [said weasel blushed pink from the hug].
After training together and going on missions, the two became widely known for their combinations. They never failed a mission when together. Nothing much happened after that besides Itsuki slowly falling for Itachi, said weasel not helping when he gave him a bouquet of flowers containing blue hyacinths, hyssops, pink carnations, and white jasmines for his birthday. Itachi didn’t know what these flowers meant, but Itsuki sure did and he blushed brightly once the other left [pink carnations mean ‘I’ll never forget you’, blue hyacinths mean ‘constancy of love’, hyssops mean ‘sacrifice, cleanliness’, and white jasmines mean ‘sweet love’]. At the age of 14, Itsuki and Itachi was given a misson from the Hokage. This mission was to capture a group of shinobis around c-b rank. The two accepted the mission, not knowing that this would change everything.

The mission went well at first, the two managing to subdue most of the shinobis and sending off shadow clones to bring the hostages back to the village. But then they were attacked by the last ninja, the shinobi being the last they were looking for. It turned out the shinobi, named Hiroki Mizuna, was the leader of the group and was a-rank, which they were not use to. The two fought the other one, Itsuki managing to get injured with a stab wound in his shoulder and Itachi having many gashes littering his torso, the worse one being a large gash on his arm.

Itsuki sent a clone off to Itachi to heal him up, holding Hiroki off as long as he could, only for him to suddenly manage a hit on Hiroki. This showed Itsuki that he was fighting a clone, as his kunai stabbed into Hiroki’s chest, the man then exploding in smoke. Instantly knowing what Hiroki was going to do, Itsuki turned around and saw the man charging his arm with lightning chakra, eyes glinting maliciously as he stood behind Itachi and his clone. Without a second thought, Itsuki used the body replacement technique with his clone, holding his arms out as he stood in front of the other. Within a second, Itachi’s crimson eyes widening, Hiroki’s arm shot straight through Itsuki’s left side of his chest, said arm sticking out of his back and only inches away from Itachi’s masked face. While Hiroki was shocked from this, Itsuki weakly placed his hand against Hiroki’s chest, senbons sticking into them and letting deadly poison inject in Hiroki’s body, which will kill the other quickly and painlessly.

Once Itachi registered what happened, he quickly summoned a clone to burn Hiroki’s body while he himself picked Itsuki up and rushed back towards the village. While Itachi traveled, Itsuki was fading in and out of consciousness, the only thought going through his mid during this being ‘I have to tell him…’
With this, Itsuki managed to weakly tell Itachi that he loved him and to always take care of himself, and to always follow his beliefs. Before Ituski died from blood loss, he gave Itachi his black stringed necklace with the three metal loops.

After Itsuki’s death, Itachi was in shock, having stopped rushing to the village after Itsuki uttered his love for him. With a few seconds of registering what happened, Itachi eyes welled up with tears before they slipped past, running down his cheeks while choked sobs escaped his lips. He then fell to his knees, holding Itsuki’s body tightly against his chest, Itsuki’s head nestled in Itachi’s neck. The one noticeable thing was the soft little smile still tugging at Itsuki’s lips, making Itachi sob even harder. The poor boy never even got to utter his love for Itsuki back, having been in too much shock at Itsuki dying and telling him his last words.

This is what Kakashi Hatake found after getting worried, his picture of himself, Itsuki and Itachi having cracked over Itsuki’s face. Itachi kneeling over Itsuki’s now cold body, raspy sobs still leaving Itachi’s lips.

This backstory is amazing and captivated me by the 3rd sentence. I have nothing to say here.

Clan Info

Clan Name:
Kaname

Nice

Symbol:
Silver and Gold Circle with a White Star in the middle
 
Cool and it's very easy to imagine.

History:
During the Clan Warring Eras, the Kaname clan was widely known for its chakra control and iyro ninjutsu, using these to dominate some shinobis. It never really allied with the hidden villages once they were made, rejecting each offer as they preferred to be left alone and lived in secret. During the first two Shinobi World Wars, many of the Kaname clan’s ninja fell. After each end, the Kaname clan finally decided to become a civilian clan instead, using their knowledge on herbs, medicines and poisons. Only so few members decide to become shinobi after this.
 
Amazing, the fact that the clan deals in herbs and poisons like Itsuke is awesome. It shows where he got it from.

Specialty:
Chakra Control and Iyro Ninjutsu
 
Great

Jutsus/Techniques:
N/A

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Kekkei Genkai:
N/A
 
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Status:
The Kaname clan used to a fully functioning shinobi clan, but later on, many of its people died in battle and instead became a civilian clan instead, known for its medicine and poisons. Only a few people in this clan become shinobis.
 
This is very interesting. The fact that they went from fighting to civilians is amazing. I never saw something like that before for a OC clan.

Clan Appearance

-Skin Tone:
Creamy or Pale, Some Having Fair From Outsiders Marrying Into The Clan

Nice

-Markings:
N/A

Nice

-Hair color(s):
White, Silver, Light Blue With White Tips, White With Light Blue Tips, Rarely Pastel Pink

This hair color scheme is really cool.

-Eye color(s):
Light Blue, Lavender, Aqua Green, Rarely Lilac
 
This is really good.

Looks and Appearance

Body Type/Looks:
Itsuki has long, wavy white hair with light blue tint to it, becoming more noticeable at the tips and soft lilac colored eyes with a darker ring around his pupil, his eyes having long eyelashes. He has creamy pale skin and a lean/slender build with nimble fingers, his hands covered in callouses from working in the house and fighting. His hair reaches to his waist and is usually seen tied together in low ponytail with a soft lavender ribbon which has golden bells attached to them. His bangs are parted towards the right side of his face, curving slightly too only cover half of his eye from view. His bangs reach to his jawline and all the way down to his chest. Strands of these bangs that reach his chest are tied together with a silver ribbon, weaving into a braid. There is also a silver and gold feather hair piece which is attached to the left side of his bangs. He wears a loose-fitting pastel blue kimono shirt with white outlining and billowing, long sleeves which keeps his hands hidden from view. A white obi is tied around his waist to keep the kimono shirt together with golden embroidered on it. He wears tight black pants with white bandages wrapped around the bottom of each leg with calf length shinobi boots with a steel toe. He has two kunai pouches on both of his thighs, and another pouch attached to the back of his pants, hidden from view because of his kimono shirt. He also wears black fingerless gloves which reach to his elbow, a tiny pouch strapped to the edges of them which are holding senbon needles. He is seen mostly wearing his black clothed hitai-ate on his forehead, around his neck, or holding his hair into a low ponytail. He always wears it on his forehead during missions. He also wears a black stringed necklace on his neck which has three metal loops and small silver and black feather earrings.

His appearance is really good and is easy to imagine due to your amazing description skills. His appearance goes greatly with his personality. It is also cool to see that you can have common hair with rare colored eyes from the clan. Nice touch.

Height:
::Academy Student; 117.9 cm
::Genin; 118.4 cm
::Chunin; 123.2 cm
::ANBU; 141.8 cm
::Death; 168.2 cm
Weight:
::Academy Student; 21.3kg
::Genin; 23.7kg
::Chunin; 24.1kg
::ANBU; 33.4kg
::Death; 49.9kg

These are great height to weight ratios.

Makeup/Facepaint:
N/A

Nice

Hairstyle(s):
-Low Ponytail with Small Braided Bangs [Mission Hairstyle]
-High Ponytail with His Bangs Clipped Back [Doing Chores/Working On Garden Hairstyle]
-Let Down Naturally with Only Small Braided Bangs [Walking Around During Free Time Hairstyle]
-Tied Into A Low Ponytail Over Shoulder With Braided Crown [Formal Hairstyle]

These hairstyles are really good.

Accessories:
-Soft Lavender Colored Ribbon With Golden Bells Attached
-Silver Ribbons, Silver and Gold Feather Hair Piece
-Black Stringed Necklace with Three Metal Loops
-Silver and Black Feather Earrings

These are beautiful and goes great with his outfits.

Scent:
Musky pine trees [He usually covers his scent when on missions]

That's cute

Scars or Tattoos:
-ANBU Tattoo on his right shoulder blade
-Has a scar on the left side of his chest which was caused by a lightning release technique during his last mission

It's great to see a OC with actual scars from fights.

Jewelry and/or Piercings:
-Black Stringed Necklace with Three Metal Loops
-Silver and Black Feather Earrings
 
These are cute.

Relationships
Parent(s):
Yuri Kaname | Mother | Deceased, Disease, Itsuki was 3 years old
Ryuunosuke Kaname | Father | Deceased, Killed In Third Shinobi War
Sibling(s):
N/A

Thanks for the life status and relationship to the OC.

Relative(s):
Yuki Kimura | Aunt on Mother’s Side | Travelling Between Villages
Natsu Kimura | Uncle on Mother’s Side | Merchant in Land of Water
Akihito Kaname | Grandfather on Father’s Side | Died By Old Age, Itsuki was 5 years old
Kohaku Kaname | Grandmother on Father’s Side | Lives in Hospital

This Is really good and the fact that you added the extended family is great.

Best Friend(s):
Itachi Uchiha, Shisui Uchiha and Hirofumi Ito

Nice

Friend(s):
Kaede Kobayashi, Kazuki Aoyama, and Kakashi Hatake

Nice

Sensei(s):
Kazuki Aoyama

Cool

Student(s):
N/A

Ok

Crush(es)/Spouse/Bf/Gf:
Itachi Uchiha [Crush]

Nice

Rival(s):
Kaede Kobayashi [One-sided]

The fact that it's one-sided is also interesting.

Enemy(ies):
N/A

Ok

Pet(s):
N/A
 
Ok

Favorites/Least Favorites
Favorites
Least Favorites
 
Food(s):
Castella, Dorayaki, and Dango
Seaweed and Sushi

Drink(s):
Tea, Water, Milk
Soda/Pop

Color(s):
Silver, Gold, Black, Blue, Lilac
Green, Red, Gray

Season(s):
Winter
Summer

Time of Day:
Night/Midnight
Morning

Weather:
Snowy/Rainy Days

These are all great and are nice fun facts.
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Final Analysis- There is no way I can make this OC better than it already is. This OC has amazing detail, a great backstory, and so much more. The time, effort, and dedication is clearly shown through this OC. Not to mention this oC doesn't get a happy ending. This OC has such a interesting and unique take that I was instantly pulled in. I don't know what to say but amazing, the flaws were amazing, the appearance and personality matched, everything was just great. You have created a great OC and the fact that you let me review him is amazing. Thank you for letting me review your OC it was a honor.
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