Hey guys we have another OC and i have been so happy to see the requests that I have been getting for the OCs. All I got to say is keep them coming I love Reviewing the OCs. Now to start this OC.
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Name: Kimura Miyuki

This is a cute name.

Age: 
- Part 1: 12
- Part 2: 16
- The last: 19
- Boruto: 31

Alright, so we know she is as old as the Naruto group.

Gender: Female

Family: Kimura Midori (Older sister), Kimura Azumi (Mother), Kimura Atsuya (Father)

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Appearance: Miyuki, like her clan, is noted to have a cat-like appearance. She tends to have a spaced out expression, even when paying attention.

That's unique. I bet she gets in a lot of trouble even though she is paying attention. This is a good flaw in appearance.

- Age 12: Miyuki has black hair tied into two twin-tails with black ribbons. When tied, her hair stops just above her shoulders. Otherwise, it reaches her mid back. Her hair is wavy and tends to get tangled easily, to her annoyance. She has golden eyes which glow in the dark (clan trait). When she grins, two small fangs can be seen poking out of her mouth. She has a fair skin with whisker marks on either side. She wears a full-sleeves dark blue jacket with a black shirt underneath, a black skirt reaching her thighs and black leggings. In addition, she wears standard blue sandals. She keeps a small silver locket with her at all times, containing her family's picture.

She has a cute appearance but leggings aren't in the world of Naruto. There are other options though like bandages, fish nets, and tight shorts like how Sakura has in Shippuden. I like how she has the traits from her clan. It shows that she isn't special snowflake.

- Part 2: She ties a small part of her hair into twin-tails and leaves the rest open. Her open hair reaches her waist and the ties one reaches her shoulders. She wears a dark blue hooded jacket, blue pants and thigh high black boots.
She keeps this attire until she becomes a jonin, switching for a green flak jacket, black pants while keeping the same boots.

This is good. I am assuming that the shoes are ninja boots like Sakura in Shippuden and the hoodie jacket is like how Shino's is right? I also like how she changes to more protective gear when she becomes a jounin. This shows she knows that dangers of being a ninja.

Personality: Miyuki is noted to have a odd personality. She is generally quiet and reserved. She is confident but not to the point of arrogance. Although she doesn't usually give much hints about her personality, she tends to display strong emotions when she either likes something a lot or is angered/annoyed beyond limit. This usually comes as a surprise to the rest, although they slowly get used to it. At first glance, she is just another Kimura but unlike most of her peaceful clan, she doesn't hesitate to use violence, though she still says that she'd rather not.

I like how you called it odd but if she is quiet and reserved like her clan than why doesn't she hesitate to use violence? Also if she would rather not use violence than why is that her first option? It's good how she has strong emotions cause it adds to her character but which emotions tends to go over the top? Is it anger? Happy? Sadness? What are all the emotions that she over does?

She is generally the peacemaker of her team when her teammates get into (rare) fights. She gives threats that promise torture but never intends to carry them out. She is resourceful and smart but can be a bit oblivious to the things around her. She is skilled but tends to make trivial mistakes at the worst times.

If she is the peacemaker than why do she threaten them? Isn't the peacemaker the person that tries to stay away from the threats and violence? Why doesn't she talk it out with her team? Like before her personality is cool but the quiet with making threats, along with being the peacemaker isn't really a good combination.

In part 2, she retains most of her characteristics, but doesn't give torture threats...most of the time. She is a bit more attentive which is belied by her expression. She also becomes a bit more mischievous and tends to tease her close comrades. She tends to keep her emotions under a better check but sometimes lets them loose.

I love how she grows up more into a responsible woman. Also like how you added something new like mischievous. I can tell she really grew from her 12 year old stage. This is amazing.

Battle:
Her battle style is more focused on close range, though she still practices long ranges combat but not as much as the former. She is shown to prefer close combat. She uses taijutsu a lot more than ninjutsu. Genjutsu doesn't really interest her that much. She knows the basics of healing but due to not having the required chakra control, she does not go further than the basics.

This is great. The fact that she is still improving gives her character. The way she isn't interested in a certain style and knows basics but not a lot is perfect too. I also like the idea that it is because of the required chakra that she doesn't go further. This is great.

Weapons: Unlike most of her clan, Miyuki, like her sister, shows interest in weaponry. She usually uses twin swords.
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Aside from these, she uses throwing weapons like shuriken and kunai.

I like how she is different in her own way. I also like the picture. These twin swords seem like they fit her too. From her quietness to her loud outbursts. It shows both sides to her.

Stats:
> Part 1:
- Ninjutsu: 2.5
- Taijutsu: 3
- Genjutsu: 1
- Intelligence: 3
- Strength: 3
- Speed: 2.5
- Stamina: 2
- Chakra Reserves: 2.5
- Chakra Control: 1.5
> Part 2:
- Ninjutsu: 3.5
- Taijutsu: 4.5
- Genjutsu: 2
- Intelligence: 4
- Strength: 4
- Speed: 3.5
- Stamina: 3
- Chakra Reserves: 4
- Chakra Control: 2.5

The stats are great. Not to strong, not to weak. They also match how her battle style is too.

Past: Miyuki was born in the Kimura clan, widely known as the clan of cats. At the age of 9, she started showing interest in her sister's weapons, who was a jonin at the age of 15, much to the clan elders disdain. Being a ninja was not considered appropriate for girls in the clan.

This is a good inconvenience. The fact that she still wants to be a ninja regardless of what the elders say is showing good character and the person she is. I also like how she took interest in the swords at a young age.

However, since her sister had bypassed the rule, they had hoped that she wouldn't be one. Yet, Miyuki had started the Academy when her sister and father be...convinced... the elders. She met the Rookie 9 at the Academy and became friends with Sakura and Ino. Later, when their friendship was torn due to Sasuke, Miyuki and Hinata sort of bonded over a spar. Miyuki once caught Naruto executing a prank on a villager but, as opposed to what he believed, let him do what he wanted. Heck, she even gave him a hint to make it better. After that, she and Naruto occasionally hung out and became friends...sort of. She lived a rather peaceful life and graduated from the Academy at the age of 12.

First I want to say this is good. Your one of the only people I met that had their OC become friends with Sakura and Ino. You don't have to worry about the cannon characters and your OC's relationships with them. Remember this is your story. If you want your OC to be with Naruto then by all means put her with Naruto. The only thing is that you have to show how your OC and him fell in love and show communication between them. But I love how she met the main cast. Never be afraid to have your OC meet cannon characters.

Relationship with Characters: None so far. (This character is a work in progress)

Alright. I hope to see the finish result.

Others:

Clan Traits: Cat-like appearance, retractable sharp nails/claws, golden eyes that glow in dark, small fangs, pupils that can be dilated into slits, whiskers and cat-like hiss. The clan doesn't really have many noticeable jutsus and mostly use the elemental ones. The clan has a rivalry with the Inuzukas for obvious reasons, but not as prominent or deep as the Uchiha-Hyuuga rivalry.

This is awesome. I also like how the clan is rivaled with the obvious clan instead of a clan like the Uchihas or the Naras. Not to mention it makes sense why they are rivals. I also like how the clan has the appearance and it is up to you if you want to give the clan any special abilities but I can see great potential in this clan and the OC.

Elemental Affinity:
- Wind (from Part 1)
- Fire (Part 2 onward)

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Trivia:
- Miyuki and Midori have an age difference of 6 years.
- Miyuki's teammates are Matsukaze Tenma and Tsurugi Kyousuke.

Nice little fun facts.
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Well here is the next OC. Here is the final analysis.

Final Analysis- This OC has great potential. The clothing with leggings are the only thing for appearance. There are also the personality of this character that has a few questions. Such as the peacemaker that contradict with threats that contradict with quiet. Other than that she is great and just fine. This OC has such amazing potential to be a highly loved and amazing OC. If you ever make a story for her, I would love to read it. It was a honor to review your OC.
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That's the last piece of information. I have another OC request that I will be getting to today as well. It should be ready by today but if not it will definitely be up tomorrow. Thanks for reading this Naruto OC review.