This OC is by UmbreonTrainer06 I hope you like it.
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Genre: I made this oc for a fan fiction I’m doing with my friend. (who’s not on Wattpad)

Oh ok, this is still cool

Name - Akari (light) Hatake (I couldn’t find a meaning, sorry)

Hey it's fine don't worry

Age -
Part 1: 6-7
Part 2: 9-11
The Last: 13
Boruto: 26

Oh ok so she's really about Inari's age.

Gender: Female

Nice

Family: Kakashi Hatake (Father, alive) Kumori Fujimori (Mother, dead)

So Kakashi had her at 20 or 21?

Appearance: Akari has silver hair and dark blue-ish green eyes. 

During Part One, she wears her hair in two braids that go down to her elbows. She wears a light blue dress that goes ¾ down her leg with a silver ribbon around her waist and ninja sandals. She also wears a smaller version of the jonin vest.

During Part 2, she wears her hair in a side ponytail that goes a little bit below her shoulders. She wears an gray jacket that goes down to her mid thigh with a silver-y blue zipper. She wears black pants underneath. She wears her forehead protecter around her neck. 

During The Last, her hair is in a single braid that falls to her mid back. She wears a dark blue t-shirt, a a grayish blue jacket that goes midthigh without any sleeves and tight black pants with ninja sandals. Her forehead protector is around her neck. 

Finally, at the time of Boruto, she wears a dark blue sleeveless top, a jonin vest, black pants that go to her mid-calf, navy blue fingerless gloves and ninja sandals. Her forehead protector is on her forehead. Her hair is in a ponytail that reaches down to her shoulders.

These are all good outfits and really shows how she matures.

Personality - Akari is a very shy girl, and prefers not to talk to anybody if they don't approach her. She looks up to Kakashi and thinks he is the best person in the world. Akari idolizes him, and becomes very worried and scared when he is injured. She doesn’t speak up when something happens, causing injuries and the like to go unnoticed. As she gets older and grows, she begins to become a little more outgoing, with Konohamaru and Kakashi’s help, but remains soft spoken. She also tends to overthink things, like thinking she will have to go back to the academy because she failed a d-rank mission. She’s a gullible girl and will believe many lies, and is a very bad liar. However, she treasures anybody who becomes her friend, and will never abandon them. She fights fiercely for the ones she loves and does everything she can to make them happy and smile. She is easy to manipulate, something that she’s working hard to stop.

This is really good, you really shows her flaws very well.

Battle: Akari becomes a genin before shippuden and a chunin a little before the war (against Madara and Obito). She is a jonin in Boruto. She prefers close combat, and is very skilled in weaponry and ninjutsu. She is a little below average in Genjutsu and a bit above average at Taijutsu. She prefers to keep the fight short, and prefers to not kill her opponents. However, if she must, she does it in a clean and quick way, usually with poisoned kunai/shuriken or slitting the throat. She combines her water and lighting chakra natures to use Storm Release. She made up her own jutsu, called Storm Release: Muting Rain of Venom. It causes a storm to build in the area, and creates extremely loud sound waves that cause temporary deafness and rains a poison that causes temporary paralysis for everyone in the area of the storm except the user. However, it uses up massive amounts of chakra. At first she always fainted for a few days once she used it, but by the middle of Shippuden, she only coughs up blood.

This is really good and the fact that she combines elements to make new jutsus are really good too.

Past (whoo, here we go) - Akari was the product of a drunken one-night-stand. Her mother, Kumori Fujimori died in childbirth, so she was to live with Kakashi. As she grew, she looked up to Kakashi as he was her only parental figure in life. Since she was a shy child, she started at the academy two years late, preferring to be home-schooled. Kakashi also preferred this as he knew that she would be uncomfortable with so many people, but once she turned five, he decided that it was time for her to interact with the world. At the academy, she stayed by herself and avoided talking to the other kids. At recess, Konohamaru confronted and asked her why she wanted to be alone. She just shrugged her shoulders. He asked if she had any friends, and she shook her head, and then Konohamaru decided that he would be her first friend. Akari and Konohamaru always played together at recess. By the end of Akari’s first year, her progress had grown to that of an eight year old year old, so she was allowed to move to Konohamaru’s year. She met Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke later during the encounter with the sand siblings. She liked Sakura very much and thought that she was nice and pretty. She thought that Naruto was funny and he made her giggle. Sasuke...she thought his hair looked a bit like a duck, but he still scared her because of his mean and cold demeanor.

This is really good and the fact that you even had her encounter team 7 is perfect. She is looking great.

Relationships - 
Kakashi - Akari loves her father, he is the most important person in the world to her. She loves to spend time with him and wouldn’t pass up on an opportunity to spend some time with her father. Kakashi always wants the best for Akari which is why he forced her to go to the academy when she was five.

Very good

Konohamaru - Akari begins to develop feelings for Konohamaru when she is about 13 years old, because she realizes that he’s always been there for her, and he always made her smile. At first when she tells him her feelings, he says that he doesn’t feel that way about her, but thinks about all the times he had with her and how much he enjoyed being with, and not wanting the moments to end, but he didn’t understand it very well, so he went to ask Ebisu for his advice and realized he liked Akari in that way after all. (idk if I was supposed to put that here or in her past)

A justified reason to why she would gain affection towards Konohamaru. Nice

Sakura - Akari really liked Sakura ever since she met her, and looked up to her. She took the habit of attaching -nee, when saying her name. Sakura thinks that it’s nice to have somebody look up to her for once. Akari was also one of the few who hoped that Sakura would have a chance with Sasuke.

Very cute

Other - Akari has 2 signature jutsu (other than Storm Release: Muting Rain of Venom)
1 - Lightning Release: Thunder Flash
It creates a storm with lightning strikes that are so bright and powerful, they can cause blindness for 10-30 seconds, allowing for a quick escape. It doesn’t take up much chakra to do since it doesn’t do anything much other than that.
2 - Water Release: Raindrop of Death (inspiration taken from Juvia’s water bubble)
She causes it to start raining, but all the raindrops come much larger, heavier and faster, on to the opponent, and once it’s about to end, a raindrop large enough to encapsulate the opponent is dropped on them, but doesn’t break. It takes them inside the raindrop instead to restrict their movement or drown them, whichever the user prefers. It takes up almost all of the users chakra so it’s pretty risky. Her kekkei genkai is Storm Release. She has no doujutsu, and she is part of the Hatake clan.

These are amazing, you really gave her some great jutsus.
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Final Analysis- What can I say? This OC is really good, I don't know what else to say. I have seen Kakashi daughter OCs and they were terrible but this one is one of the few to be really good. She has amazing jutsus and so much more that just makes her loveable. I would suggest however making Kakashi 21 when she's born making her 6 if not than 22 so she can be 5 but I think 21 is perfect. Other than that this OC is really good and ready for a story. Thank you so much for letting me review your OC, it was an honor.
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