Hey guys what's up. We have another OC here and when I say I was ready to throw my phone out the window and into the grand canyon, I really was. I could not believe this OC when I saw her. But Don't just take my word for it. You can read it yourself. Here she is. Another OC.
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Name: Tsukiko (Moon child) Yukimura (Snow village)

I like the name. It is very pretty though when you put it together it's Moon child Snow village. It's nice but a bit much.

Age/birthday: 12/ December 5

Height: 144 centimeters (4 foot 7 inches)

Clan: Yukimura clan

I like how you have your own clan. It's good.

Kekkei Genki: Ice dragon, god and devil Slayer, and ice make (kind of like Yuki clan)

Ok now I think i'm mad. Why the hell is your kenkei Genkei for slaying gods and demons. The only God in Naruto is Kaguya. So unless this OC is going to handle the dirty work for team 7, I don't want to see another krantos. The ice dragon and ice make are ok but the god and devil Slayer already screams marysue.

Family: Tadashi Yukimura (father,  the 4th Yukikage, deceased.) Lunahibana (mother, deceased)

I like the way you labeled them but what the heck is the Yukikage? Did I miss a kage? I'm sure I didn't so what is a 6th kage doing here.

Alliance: The land of ice, the village hidden in the snow (yukigakure) Konohakure, and the kages of the hidden village.

I have no problem with your OC being in a village but why make their own village just for the clan. There is no Uchihakure or Hyugakure for the Uchiha Clan or the Hyuga clan so what makes this OC's clan so special.

Abilities: Ice dragon, god and demon Slayer, and Ice make. (Main)
Yin and Yang (secondary) summons foxes, and heavenly body magic. (Only in dire situations) reequip into Yukikage.

I am fine with only two abilities here. Ice dragon and ice make but again with the god and demon Slayer. No just no. Hell no. Those should not be in the Naruto world at all. Yin and Yang is also bad. The reason why is because the Hyuga clan is already like the yin and yang. For God's sake their symbol is the yin and yang sign. Neji had the yin and yang sign under him when he does 8 trigrams 64 palms. You just took from the Hyuga clan. Body magic? Naruto for sure don't have no damn magic. What the hell is this, Magi? You can't have magic in the Naruto world. It is just common sense.

Rank: Jounin (2 years old). Anbu (5 years old), Anbu leader (6 years old) Sannin (7 years old) Yukikage (7 years old; only the 5 main kages and trusted others know.)

You just pissed me off and got me screaming Mary Sue. Why the hell is a 2 year old a jounin? Did she just skip chunin and genin? Not to mention academy. This screams Mary sue to the max. You are not a damn anbu at 5 years old. Not even Itachi and Kakashi was that talented. For sure you ain't no damn kage. Gaara wasn't even that talented. Now that I think about it why the hell is there a Yukikage. You really created a whole kage spot? Why can't she just become Mizukage or Tachikage?There are 5 kages not 6. Also how the hell are you keeping the secret that she is a kage? I'm sure people would know that a 7 year old Mary Sue overpowered OC is kage. No just stop.

Note: She is in the bingo book as the 'balance fox' and is ranked S-ranked. (Her mask when equips into the Yukikage, she has a seal on her body which prohibits her to use her powers untill someone kiss her and the seal disappears for a maximum of a day. Her eyes darkened when she goes through full Anbu mode. (Doesn't happens often) or when she is angry. She also does not like people underestimating her. She has a bad fear of Orochimaru and is weak against him. Also a bit with Sasori but not as much.

I doubt anyone is going to underestimate this snowflake. Why the hell is she in the bingo book at such a young age? That don't make no sense. She is a whole S-ranked ninja but this snowflake shouldn't even be a ninja. This OP bastard should be in the academy. I will call the Mary Sue police. I have them on the line.

Background: When she was 7, she became the Yukikage and a Sannin on the same day. The land of ice used to be part of the page which is how the kages knew that she was the Yukikage.

How can I say this in a polite way....Hell no. There is no way you can become a kage and a Sannin on the same day. I refuse to believe that bullsh*t. I'm pretty sure I wouldn't want a eight year old president. So why the hell would these idiots want a 8 your old kage? She hasn't even had the talk yet. No, I fact I'm calling child services and getting this Mary Sue some parents.

When she turned 8, a fox beast named Kitsune, who had no control over herself, Invaded the land causing destruction. The whole land decided to sacrifice themselves for Tsukiko so she can seal it inside her. The next day, the remaining people started going insane from sickness, and she used Nirvana to kill them. She became Anbu to only the hokage and her code name is 'fox'. Currently, the only people who knows that she is the Yukikage is the kages.

Did you just take Naruto's 9 tails story, sprinkle some Mary Sue powder over,  and add your own little twist? No. That bull sh*t is not going to happen. How the hell you going to use the god of thunder Thor Nirvana to defeat a fox beast. And fox beast? Really? Where have I heard of that before? Oh yeah NARUTO!!!. You just pulled that sh*t out your ass and called it your own.

Kitsune powers- Yin activate: Her turns darker and one eye turn yellow. She can use yin/dark power. Yellow eye can be used as Sharinngan (only genjutsu). She becomes quicker and agile but not strength wise. She can also use her blood to get weapons. However, the eye that is yellow starts bleeding if used too long.

Like I said before the Hyuga's are the Yin and Yang clan. Also why is she transforming because of this? This should not be the case. She even got a bootleg sharringan. No. I like how you added a weakness but she is still OP and unbelievable.

Yang activate: Hair and eyes are turquoise. She can summons wings. Gains the ability to fly and healing. She can use heavenly body magic with yang. Gets a tail causes balance when flying and cat ears which increases hearing. Can't attack with a lot of damage. Healing takes a lot of chakra.

I don't even think there is anyone in Naruto who has a tail on the regular. So you not only have a fox transform but also a transformation with wings? What the hell? Mary Sue is the only thing that is coming to my mind.

Fox activate: One eye turns red and can both also uses Nirvana. However, it starts damaging her body causing exhaustion which is why she doesn't use it often. It also loosen the seal for Kitsune. She gets extra chakra, so she only uses it if she has none. She can transform into a fox and summon them. Strongest fox is Kitsune.

HOW MANY TRANSFORMATIONS DO THIS MARY SUE HAVE?!! You have one with cat ears and wings for some reason. One where her ass got the sharringan. And this one has a fox tail. I'm pissed at this sh*t. So you have more than one fox because Kitsune is the strongest? I bet your OC could have saved the third hokage, Defeated pein in one hit, knocked out Kayuga with a flick and become Hokage all in the 2 years she was a jounin.

Jinnchuuriki: It is when Kitsune takes over. She has no control and it comes out for a glance when her Mark acts up. Her tails can go up to 9 but it never went that much. Her eyes are spirit eyes, explain more later. Kitsune takes over when Tsuki is in danger or in a life to death situation and goes back when she is safe enough or when Tsuki stops her Kitsune is close to Tsuki and follows Tsuki's order no matter what. Once she gets control of this f, she can unlock special abilities.

So you have nine tails? There are only two thing I have to say about that. 1 is bull and 2 is sh*t. This is terrible. I hope that this is your very first OC because damn. I doubt that this OC could ever get in a life and death situation because she would just unlock her special powers. I am shaking my head right now because this is sad.

I got the kenkei Genkei idea from fairy tail.

I have no problem with using another anime as a reference but come on. Don't take the whole damn idea. It's good that you used a reference but damn it seems like you took more then just one idea.
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Hey guys so this is another OC review and I can't believe this. Here are the final thoughts.

Final thoughts: This OC shouldn't even be considered a Naruto OC. This OC has magic, god and devil moves, and everything. It's sad that this OC is nothing more than a Mary Sue and I hope that the author fix this damn OC. Take a Mary Sue test for a Naruto OC. They are good. I take them for my Naruto OCs and they are great. But this OC is by far the worse I have ever seen in the Mary Sue department. You have a lot to work on and if you want we can work on it together. But damn this OC. You had some good ideas but the things that made her a Mary Sue the most was the fact that she was a jounin by the age of two. She should barely be walking let alone killing. Other then almost everything it has the potential to be a good OC.

I hope you all liked this Mary Sue I mean OC review. Till then see you next time.