This OC is by xQueenSlayerx I hope you like it.
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Name: Rinai Takeshi (Fierce Warrior of Romance)

Nice name

Age: 14-15 (Pt.1) 17-18 (Pt.2)

Oh so about Neji's age

Gender: Female

Nice

Sexuality: Bisexual

Oh

Family: Suri Kazane (Mother), Jun Takeshi (Father), Naomi Kazane (Maternal Cousin), Riku Takeshi (Paternal Cousin), Aimi Kazane (Maternal Aunt), Shun Takeshi (Paternal Uncle), Genzou Takeshi (Paternal Uncle)

Thanks for the family relationships

Goal: Avenge her mother and father, control her abilities, become a strong and respectable shinobi.

Nice

Personality: Very skeptical and suspicious of everyone she comes into contact with for a time until she deems them worthy of putting trust into. Her guard is always up. Short tempered and easy to get on her bad side, extremely sarcastic when annoyed. Rinai is a very private person in general and very secretive when it comes to her past. She likes to help people out but doesn't like to get too involved in their personal lives. She hates asking anyone for help and would rather do everything herself, being independant. Rinai doesn't like to judge people too much based of off their appearances but does get envious if she believes said person is privilaged. She doesn't get her hopes up to avoid being disappointed so shes very pessimistic. The way she talks to people comes off as foul and disrespectful but she means well for mostly everyone. Very impatient. Completely dauntless save for one or two things that would have her afraid. She cares a great deal for her team and friends but has a hard time showing or saying it, instead it shows through her protective actions- willing to throw herself in the mouth of danger to save another. On missions, she's determined to see it through til completed and can come up with a reasonable plan but can't control her emotions once taunted becoming very impulsive and reckless. Although she can be loud herself, hates being around loud people especially kids. Not outwardly emotional in positive ways and fears being completely vulnerable. Not being innocent, Rinai is a closet pervert. She is extremely vindictive and unforgivintowards anyone that has betrayed or wronged her.

Very nice and it's not like it's one or two traits and that's it, you showed the whole package

Backstory: Rinai's childhood was a happy one though very secluded. Living in the forest of the Land of Fire, the only people she knew in her life were her parents, the Uchiha boys, Itachi and Sasuke, and her maternal cousin Naomi. Until the night of the Takeshi and Uchiha Massacre, life was good for young Rinai. She had the basics of chakra down, training with her father. The night of the massacre, her mother had hidden her away with a note for Naomi if anything should happen while her father had confronted the masked man searching for Rinai. Both her parents fought him until they perished before Rinai's eyes. Their home was burned to the ground, Rinai escaping before she burned with it. The day after, Naomi had came around as Suri expected. Rinai handed her the note her mother wrote and traveled with Naomi from that day forward. They had found Rinai's paternal cousin, Riku who had survived the massacre. Naomi knew he was a prodigy being the only member of the Takeshi to reach the third stage of the Jaakugan, being able to travel between dimensions. Naomi had asked Riku to transport herself and Rinai elsewhere not within that world. Riku agreed, knowing the Takeshi law so it was for his benefit to be rid of Rinai. He informed her that the only way for the jutsu to be undone is either for him to undo it or them dying in the other world, resulting them in returning here. He also warned her that if he ever saw Rinai again in their world, he wouldn't hesistate to kill her. Naomi understood and placed a Memory Seal on Rinai to prevent her from remembering their world and prevent anyone discovering her. Years later, Naomi had died in the other world and returned her to the shinobi world. Wanting to keep her promise to her aunt, she sought out Itachi Uchiha to travel to the other world and bring Rinai back as well. Rinai, still having no memory of her childhood, relearns the shinobi world ways and finds her way to the Leaf, eventually joining Team Six. It is only after the Chunin Exams where she is reunited with Naomi and regains her memories, swearing vengeance upon the Masked Man for her parents death.

Wow this is a very intense back so but one that makes sense.

Relationships: Kankuro (Husband in Boruto) They first met when Rinai was brought back to the Shinobi World. Kankuro had found her outside of Suna and brought her to the village til she came to, she was only in the village for less than a week before she caused trouble and was sent to Konoha. They didn't like each other immediately but they grew to be friends and noticed their feelings for each other during the Chunin Exams. However, they have a rocky relationship throughout the years until right after the Fourth Shinobi War.

Wow I never see people pick Kankuro, i believe that he this is the first or second OC that had him as a mate.

Appearance: Pale skin, violet hair falling past her elbows, bangs forming a V on her forehead reaching her nose. Large ruby red eyes. Two black talon markings of Kirai also on the left side of her face. Burn marks on her left arm from escaping her burning home. Before becoming a Genin, she wears a dark grey tanktop and a separate piece of sleeve hanging off the shoulders. Stopping just above her belly button with a white trim. Black shorts under a dark grey half skirt wrapping around her right leg also with a white trim. A mesh leg warmer on her right knee. After she's officially a Genin, She has a black crop top with the sleeves being mesh and reaching her elbows, the cuff trimmed red. Black capri pants with the hem also red.
In Pt.2, her hair is longer reaching just below her butt, she brushes her bangs onto the left side of her face where she covers a scar that goes from the corner of her left eye across her nose she aquired during a mission. She now sports a low cut light grey sleeveless kimono style blouse held closed by a navy obi, matching her navy capri pants, under a long black hooded jacket with two silver bands on each sleeve. She also has two silver bands on each leg of her pants. Also having sandals similar to Hinata's.
Later in pt.2 as an ANBU, wears her hair in a high ponytail but reverts to her previous hairstyle during the war. In The Last, she pins her bangs back, revealing more of her face. Wearing a low shoulder light grey kimono style top with a black obi and light grey shorts. The hem of her top and shorts are black and she wears mesh under her shorts to her knees along with heels.
In Boruto, she cuts her hair to a wavy short bob and her bangs are back into a V shape down to her nose. As an adult, she wears a high collared grey slim dress just barely touching the ground. Occasionally wearing a black haori over it alongside her heels.

This is good and doesn't really have anything from the modern world except for the crop top. I am assuming that the crop top is the same style as Ino's in Shippuden so it had a pass.

Basic Skills: Rinai is naturally strong and has a high tolerance for pain. Also very flexible. She's not a genius or prodigy but is very observant of her surroundings and situations. She also has a knack for creativity.

Thank you for not making a prodigy for the love of god. She is great like this.

Abilities: Rinai has a affinity for Fire Nature chakra like the rest of her clan, later is trained after the Chunin Exams in Wind Style by Naomi. Between Pt. 1 and 2 she is trained by Kakashi in Lightning Style. She also has the Jaakugan as a member of the Takeshi. She is well adept in Taijutsu and Ninjutsu. Her Genjutsu is average but never relies on it too much.

I can't wait to see how she gets trained by Kakashi because he has his own team to look after so I wonder what made her stick out to him to the point where he wants to train her.

Hobbies: Photography, training, inventing new jutsu, visiting the hot springs, stargazing Notable

Training isn't a hobby in the Naruto world it's a requirement. If you want to be something you have to train or in our world practice. You don't have a choice to train or practice if you want to get good so it can't be counted as a hobby cause you have to do it. I would suggest a different hobby one like training but that can also improve her skills.

Quirks: tapping her foot when impatient, biting the inside of her cheek.

Nice

Clan History/Values: The Takeshi were known and feared let alone hated by many across the land for being a mercenary clan. They would do any job for anyone at the right price, some killed their employers. They indeed were cold, ruthless and merciless shinobi. However, females weren't allowed to be born into the clan. Long before the First Great Shinobi World War, there were a family of phoenix's. The youngest, Kirai, was constantly overlooked and considered the weakest of them. She strived to prove them wrong, to be powerful and gradually began to hate her family. Her brother, Takehiro, saw this change in Kirai and wanted to console his sister but she was so consumed in rage on how she'd been treated and shut him out. Takehiro, fearing what actions she would take, seeked out the humans for help. He asked a small family for their cooperation on being a vessel should the worst happen. The small civilian family whose name were Takeshi agreed, having nothing to lose and felt honored with this role. The family chose their daughter to be the vessel if the time came. Over time, Kirai indeed became powerful and proved her "worth" by killing off her family, saving her brother who was once so close to her for last. A great battled ensued between the two as the young Takeshi girl hid nearby waiting for her moment. At the very last second when Kirai seemed to have the upper hand, Takehiro sealed away his sister in the girl's body, never to be released again. A contract was signed between Takehiro and the Takeshi, promising to keep Kirai sealed within their family. At some point in time, they concluded that Kirai wasn't compatible with any males within the family being everytime they sealed her within one, the male would die almost immediately. The Takeshi had a large red and black urn made specially for them to seal and contain Kirai in. However, the urn would only last for six consecutive years before it would weaken and release Kirai. Therefore, needed at least one female to hold Kirai until the urn was renovated, being a less advanced version of the Amber Purifying Pot. Over the years, Izuna Uchiha had got together with a Takeshi and they had a daughter.which they named Chitose. Soon after Chitose was born, the urn was weakening in the seal and the Takeshi were forced to seal Kirai into the baby Chitose to prevent Kirai escaping. Being an Uchiha, Chitose later developed the Sharingan however, it was different. Due to having Kirai sealed in her and altering her chakra, the Sharingan was "corrupted". The Uchiha, including her father, saw her ruined Sharingan as a deformity disowned her as a clan member. This broke Chitose's heart and Kirai took advantage of this, using Chitose's emotions to give into her possessing her body to wreak havoc. This awakened the Tsune (Endless). After Chitose gained control again, she wanted nothing to do with her father or the Uchiha, altered her Sharingan to Jaakugan (Corrupt Eye) and went from Chitose Uchiha to Chitose Takeshi. Throughout the years, she had birthed sons who had saw the monster inside her, deeming her as one as well. They formulated a jutsu to kill Kirai specifically, not caring if their own mother died alongside the beast. When they failed to get close enough to do so, they extracted and sealed Kirai back into the urn. Knowing Kirai could only be sealed within females and is her outlet to possess them, they made the law to never allow females be born into the clan. To renovate the urn as soon as possible before Kirai is able to escape. This plan had worked... temporarily. Kirai had developed the ability to escape the urn at the first sign of the seal weakening and inhabit a newborn girls body. All she had to do was wait. Many years later, the Takeshi were an established clan of male mercenaries residing in the Leaf Village, working closely with the Uchiha, the two never to speak of the affair between their clans all those years ago. Jun Takeshi had met Suri Kazane who had visited the Leaf often in regards to her childhood Uzumaki friend, Kushina. In time, Jun and Suri had fallen in love and birthed a baby girl. Jun, knowing his clans law, feared for his newborn daughter and his wife. His daughter, Rinai, had bore the black talon marks of Kirai upon her cheek. So he fled the village with his wife and child settling down in the wilderness of the Land of Fire, wanting to give his family a happy life. The Takeshi presumed the urn had gained a tolerance for sealing Kirai and left it alone, fearing what would happen if they dared opened it. Eight years later, the Takeshi and Uchiha planned a coup detat against the Leaf being they were both not trusted in the Leaf and felt as thought they were being ostrasized. Unbeknownst to Jun, Suri and Rinai at the time, the Takeshi and Uchiha were massacred. Another member and prodigy of the Takeshi, Riku, survived the massacre being how he was away on a mission at the moment.

Very hood I got lost in the history and value of the clan as in I couldn't stop reading. It's well planned out.

Clan Personality: Seemingly emotionless except for anger. They're a "Keep to oursleves" clan. Only worried about what's best for the clan, uncaring of others feelings or opinions. They revel in the fact that others fear/hate them.

Nice so it's like a political stand.

Clan Characteristics: All Takeshi have pale skin and different shades of purple hair. More often than not always having red eyes. Normally wearing dark colored attire.

Cool

Unique Techique: Jaakugan, the Takeshi's doujutsu. In the first stage, the pupils of the user form into an 8 pointed star while the iris remains red. This allows the user to visibily see chakra auras and predict movements. Within eye contact, the user can make their target feel any physical pain or put the scenery in their mind, leaving them in a tempory paralyzed state. The first stage is awakened through the user experiencing extreme physical pain to the point of near death.
In the second stage, the pupils is still an 8 pointed star except the color is now red while the iris turns black. in this stage, on command with eye contact, the user and the target go into a paralyzed state. The user enters the targets mind and searches their memories, making the target relive their worst one. The second stage is awakened when the user experiences intense mental torture. The third stage is known as Tsune Jaakugan. The pupil is still red but instead of a star it is now a sun, the iris and sclera are completely black. For the females, this is the danger stage and more than likely means they are possessed by Kirai. When in use, the target is sent to an alternate dimension with demonic clonesof the user, of Kirai or of the target. For males, they are only able to travel to different dimensions. The Tsune is awakened when the user experiences emotional pain such as a heartbreak or grief.

Very good and the way that it differs from male to female is a nice touch that way you have to learn from multiple masters.
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Final Analysis- This is really good and has great ground to stand on. However. The part with Kakashi still needs answers. Kakashi has to train his team and even in Shippuden he trains Naruto and Sakura and goes on missions. I don't see how he can train her when she has her own team and a sensei that can train her. Not to mention Kakashi wasn't even present in the backstory to even get a feel for why she went to him in the first place. We may know who Kakashi is because we're the readers but the characters don't and it doesn't look like she met him let alone talked to him to even get him to train her. Other than that there was the crop top thing but as I said I just think of it as Ino's top in Shippuden so that's that. I would recommend adding kakashi to her background or making him more involved in it so that she has a reason to go to him cause right now it looks like she just goes to him out of the blue. Other than that this OC is great and I can't wait to see all the good things you do with her. Thank you so much for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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