OC 71 (Suzuki Nekromi)

This OC is by Sasuke1234321 I hope you like it.
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Genre - Role-Play


Nice, hope you have fun in your roleplay.


Name: Suzuki 


Cute name


Clan Name: Nekromi 


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Clan Symbol: A four pointed star. In-between each point is a diamond shape. 


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Age:
Part 1; 10-11,
Part 2; 13-15,
The Last; 17,
Boruto; 31


So a little younger than the cast, cute.


Gender: Female 


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Family: Yako Nekromi(Father) and Asoka Nekromi(Mother) 


Nice and thanks for the relation.


Village: Hoshigakure(Hidden Star) 


Oh from that Naruto filler.


About Hoshigakure(Diverts from Naruto Filler with Hoshigakure): Hoshigakure is a small hidden village in the mountains in the Bear Country. The Bear country is neighboring the Earth country and is made up of many rocky mountains. Although not lush in green scenery, the Bear country still has some trees and bushes. Hoshigakure is in a part of the mountains that has some trees and a small lake. This lake is the village's main water resource. The houses in Hoshigakure are styled like traditional Japanese housing. There is only a population of around 1,000-2,000(including Shinobi). 


That's really cool and then fact that you went further into detail shows the effort you put into this.


—Appearance—
(By the way, I'm not sure how well my height and weight correspondence is with both each other and the age). 
She has light brown hair and dark blue eyes(like, midnight blue). Her skin color is beige. 


You don't have to worry about the height and weight, also do you just mean light brown for skin tone? Everything is fine I was just wondering why you out beige instead of light brown or light skinned.


Academy Ages: 
8-9: At this age her hair was shoulder length and she usually wore it with a light blue headband. Her outfit consisted of a light blue short sleeved dress that went down to just above her knees. The dress was over a long-sleeved white shirt and she wore black shorts along with black sandals. Her dress faded to a darker blue as it got closer to the knees and it had her clan symbol on the back. Her height is about 4'1"- 4'5" and her weight is around 65-79 pounds. 


Nice, it's easy to imagine as well.


10-11: Her brown hair is now to about mid-shoulder blades and instead of using a headband, she uses two dark blue slips to keep it out of her face. She wears a sky blue shirt with white flowers on the bottom. The sleeves go down to right above her elbows and her clan symbol is on the sleeves. She has black pants and black sandals. Her height is around 4'6"-4'9" and she weighs around 83-93 pounds. 


Nice like the one above this is easy to imagine.


[Continued]
Ninja Ages: 
Genin(12-14): Her brown hair now reaches to her mid-back and she wears it in a low pony-tail. She ties it back with a black hair band. She wears a sleeveless shirt that’s white on the front and sky blue on the back. Her clan symbol is on the back of her shirt and there’s a zipper running down the middle of the front. She has black shorts and a short-dark blue skirt except it has slits down the sides that allow more mobility. She wore black sandals and has fishnet leggings. She also has sky blue fingerless gloves. Her headband is around her forehead.(The Hoshigakure symbol is just a five-pointed star). She is 4'10"-5'1" and weighs around 98-104 lbs. 


This outfit Is pretty good but fishnets are already tighter so theirs no need for the leggings part.


Chunin(14-17): Her brown hair is now braided and reaches her mid-point while braided. She wears a fishnet shirt under a white and sky blue shirt. The skirt is the same as her genin one except it does not have a zipper and instead is just split down the middle. The fishnet is thick enough to not be able to see any skin. She still has her gloves and now she also had fishnet that comes from her gloves up to high under her elbow. She has black shorts and a dark blue skirt that still reaches her mid thighs and has slits on the side only this time the slits has two silver clamps each that case the skirt to part lower down. She has black sandals and she wears her headband on her forehead. She's around 5'2"-5'5" and weighs around 107-115 lbs. 


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Jounin(17-20): She cuts her brown hair to shoulder length. She wears the standard Jounin uniform in Hoshigakure which consists of a long-sleeved dark purple(almost black)shirt, black pants, a chest plate, and arm armor(much like the Anbu). She wears her headband in the same spot and has black sandals. Her height is 5'6"-5'7" and weighs around 120-124 lbs. 


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Temporary Leave: She leaves to raise her daughter until she's old enough to join the academy. She wears a light blue kimono with white flower designs and a black obi. She's 5'7 and weighs around 124-126 lbs. 


Cool


[Continued]
Personality: Suzuki hates large groups of people, she's not social. For this reason she's glad she was born in a relatively small village where everyone knows everyone. Whenever she leaves for a mission she tries to focus on that and doesn't talk too much. She's mostly a nice person but can be sarcastic if in a bad mood or around people she dislikes. She's also very stubborn and insists she's funny even though she can't be funny even if the world depended on it. She doesn't like loud noises and although she doesn't like competition, she doesn't hate it either. She's had to get over her fear of loud noises since she's a ninja but every now and then it will catch her off guard in battle. 


This is really good, her personality isn't all over the place and shows good flaws such as loud noises and funny little gimmicks like believing she is funny.


Battle: She can use her Kekkei Genkai(Crystal Realse - will be explained later) and ninjutsu fairly well but can't use weapons efficiently at all. She can't do any sealing or medical ninjutsu. She can however do some Taijutsu. She isn't the best, but she can use it somewhat when needed. Her Earth style Justus consist of:
Earth Style: Mud Wall,
Earth Style: Mudslide,
Earth Style: Fissure,
Earth Style: Flying Thrown Stones, Earth Style: Rock Shelter. 
Crystal Realse Jutsu:
Crystal Style: Raining Shards(This causes shards of crystal to rain down on the opponents),
Crystal Style: Crystal Pillar(This causes a pillar of crystal to emerge from the ground under the opponent),
Crystal Style: Crystal Hardening(This allows the user to have crystal form on top of an area of skin for a short amount of time. This jutsu although seeming strong breaks almost immediately on impact and cannot be used more than once until rest otherwise it will drain too much chakra),
Crystal Style: Crystal Prison(This is the Nekromi's clan most powerful jutsu, it creates numerous crystals that then incase the opponent thus capturing them. It then creates razor sharp crystals meant to kill the opponent. Using this jutsu will drain immense chakra and can be deadly to the user). 


This is great and the fact that her some of her abilities have flaws and consequences makes it better.


[Information Continued]
Past: Suzuki was born and raised in Hoshigakure. She grew up with both of her parents along with her aunt. As a some-what prominent clan in Hoshigakure(not as much as say the Hyuuga and Uchiha in Konaha though) they had a neighborhood of houses with a training area and a courtyard between them. Although there were only around 20-25 members of the clan, they still trained to be Shinobi and protect the country. She trained with her parents and aunt mostly although sometimes with other members of the clan as well. Shen she was 6 she met her best friend, Hanomi. They met at the lake and began talking. Being kids, becoming friends was as simple as just asking. They hung out a lot together and even got their favorite food together a lot, sukiyaki! Hanomi came from a clan that specialized in weapons, and Suzuki often asked to be taught but it never went well. They entered the academy together and were quite sad when they weren't in the same team. They decided that it didn't matter though as they would always be best friends. When Suzuki was 14 her aunt died from exhausting her chakra by using their clan's most powerful jutsu against a strong enemy. Hanomi was there for Suzuki as was both of their teams. She thanked them afterwards and they decided to get Dumplings. Hanomi and Suzuki argued but they were outvoted. Suzuki being stubborn had to be physically dragged their before finally giving in when the food came. 


This is really good with nice detail, It explains the her past greatly without spoiling anything for her story if you ever decided to make a story for her but I got the gist.


Crushes: She began developing a crush on Hanomi when they were 13, and the love kept growing. She never acted on it and they were 19 when Hanomi got married to one of her teammates. A year later while Hanomi was pregnant Suzuki decided it was time to let it go and decided to adopt a child while they were in the Land of Tea. 


This is really interesting, the fact that she doesn't end up with her crush is something not really seen in stories or roleplays. This is great.


Other: Crystal Release is like any other chakra type just with crystals. She only ran into the canon characters a few times while on missions of visiting other nations. She did however meet them later in Boruto during the chunin exams.


Nice and the fact that they made small appearances is cool.
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Final analysis- This OC has nothing really wrong with her. Everything fits in greatly with this OC and I believe she is ready for a roleplay, story, or whatever you decide to put her in. Thank you for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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