OC 99 (Tenshino Datenshi)

This OC is by xXStarMangleXx I hope you like it.
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Hello sorry to bother you, but I updated my OC a bit....


No problem


Name : Tenshino Datenshi, Nickname is Tenshi


Nice name


Age: Around the age of naruto, whatever that might be.


Oh ok


Personality: This is difficult. She has split personality disorder, so technically, she can't be classified as only one thing..But all of her sides are decently smart, and some type of friendly ness.


Oh ok, that's a good idea giving her split personality.


Past: The same...


Ok


Love: She actually fell in love with the one tails, shukaku..


Ohhhh, that's interesting


Battle: The same..


Ok


Special jutsu: the same, but she only knows one of these (Multi Scythe Tornado), when she is a genin. The rest she learned when she was a chunin.


Nice and thanks for spacing it.


Extra: She gets her eye from her mom, who has a similar scar across her hand. Because of this, she can talk to demons. Also, she can not command any demon to do anything, unless she signed a contract prior. If she happens to summon a high level demon, (one tails) She can get physically damaged from the inside out.


A very nice flaw. You did good with it.
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Final Analysis- Like before she is really cool, the updated version of her is better and really improved her. If you have any other improvements on her please let me know. Thank you for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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