I know that I use this book for OC reviews but I may have to change this a little bit to add rants in here. The reason why is because some of these Naruto OC fanfiction writers are pissing me off. I have been going to book to book reading adventures about the writer's Naruto OC and their adventure in the Naruto world from the beginning to the end but there is always the things that piss me off in these books that I just needed to get a second opinion on to make sure I'm not crazy. I don't know about many of you but these things piss me off and I'll list them and then talk about them. But first I just want people to check out this story by NWO_FullMetal this person has a good story and has a naruto OC that is really good. Now let's get on with this.
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• The OC girl that loves training

This has been used so many times. The OC would love things like Naruto, singing, a certain weapon and.....training. This is so over used. It is also usually the girl OC. It's so annoying that when they announce their likes, dislikes, and name to Kakashi that one of those things is always training.
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• Replacing a member of team 7 with the OC.

Ok everyone on team 7 is important. It doesn't matter if you like it or not. I understand that it is a fanfiction but replacing Naruto, Sasuke, or Sakura is just plain stupid. They all have their role on Team 7. Just add your OC to the team too and give a good reason why you are on that team. I see people that replace one of the 3 with their OC because they hate one of them and don't want them in their story. The person I see this happen the most to is Sakura. You may not like her and for whatever reason you have to hate her you literally can't just get rid of her. It's just as simple as that. It really is because they hate the Character, well your just going to have to be a big person and get over it.
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• Makes Sakura and Ino the bullies.

Listen, you may not like what Sakura did in her genin years but she wasn't mean to really anyone else but Naruto and over time she wasn't mean and looked up to him. These writers would go out of their way to make Sakura and Ino the bad guys with abuse and bullying to their OC. Even worse they have them bully characters that they would never bully like Hinata and Tenten. The Naruto girls are all friends and Respect each other, they would never kill each other and bully each other. This makes me so pissed because their trying to make Sakura and Ino the worse people ever and they really aren't.
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• The OC is the strongest ninja ever

I know that their are some strong ninjas in the Naruto world from Itachi down to Neji but what I hate is when the OC is too powerful. The OC could be Jounin at 2 years old and Anbu at 3. Not even Itachi could do that. I hate this because it makes them so OP. Another thing is when they are as strong as Orochimaru but decide to become a genin because they were bored. It makes your OC OP and stupid if they just want to be a ninja for fun, they are not Saitama. This just gets me so mad because what was the point of them becoming a ninja then.
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• OCs that look perfect

This is mainly seen with girls. They will make their 12 year old OC for Naruto look like a slut with the most revealing outfit. They would make all the girls jealous and all the guys fall head over heels in love with them including Sasuke. At 16 they have bigger boobs than Tsunade and a even more revealing outfit. It is so stupid. You can't make your OC wear these revealing outfits, she/he is a ninja. They need to wear ninja accessories and clothes. Shaking my head.
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• 20 different love interest

I can see if you have 1 or 2 love interests in your Naruto OC story but if you have 20 different love interests than that's just stupid. The worse part about it is that it is usually Naruto, Sasuke, Gaara, Shikamaru, Choji, Shino, Kibaand even Kakashi... Ok almost every guy from part 1. This includes Kabuto. This is only part one, than in part 2 they add the whole Akatsuki minus Konan, Suigetsu, Utaka, Sai and even more people. This gets on my nerves because all these people can't fall in love with your OC. It is so stupid and not creative. You could have one or two love interests with one or two people having a crush on your OC and that is it. Also if you are the age of the Naruto group don't you dare make Kakashi a pedo by making him fall in love with a child.
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• Strong OC but is always getting saved

I can't believe this exist. The fact that your OC could be so strong and they train a lot and have the best jutsus in the world but they get captured by either Orochimaru, the Akatsuki, or Danzo. This makes me so mad because the only reason they make their OC in trouble is so ''prince charming'' could save them. These writers make the most Mary Sue character get in trouble just so Sasuke, Naruto, or their love interest can save them. Come on writers you can do better than that.
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• OC has many different personalities

I hate this because they give their OC 20 different personalities. Like for instance, their OC could be described as Shy, kind, sweet, loving, and quiet but then it also says loud, creepy, fearless, adventurous. But in the story they act mean, dark, sarcastic, rude, and bored. PICK ONE!!! Or one minute they are kind and the next they are rude and nothing happened to make them change personality. Why can't some writers just stick to their original work? Don't be this kind of writer.
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• Cannon's sibling and is much better.

I can't tell you how many times I have seen a Sasuke, Naruto, or Sakura little sister and the OC is always better liked. If it is Sakura's sibling, she would have Sakura torture and abuse them. If it is Sasuke's sibling, they would have Sasuke so jealous and hateful towards their OC. Not to mention Itachi would love them more than Sasuke and some even have the sibling go to the Akatsuki with Itachi. If it is Naruto's sibling they are better liked, they have the other half of the nine tails and is darker than Naruto. Why? Just Why? It makes no sense.
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• Creating a tailed beast

There are 3, 6, 9 tailed beasts. The 10 tails is literally all of the Tailed beast combined. So why do half of these writers give their OC the ten tails? There is no point. You could literally create something different. Like Sakura has her inner Sakura and in some Naruto games she was able to use her inner Sakura as a ultimate attack. In storm games when your 12 year old Sakura and do your ultimate a giant inner Sakura as big as the nine tails come from the sky, lands, and punches you. You could do that and make it a Kenkei Genkei. That would be better than making a tailed beast. Also if you do for some reason give yourself a tailed beast don't make them friends with you. They are monsters not friends.
(Fish are friends no food. Tailed beasts are foes not friends.) I love finding Nemo.
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• Making a OC that isn't human

When I say this, I don't mean like Kidomaru or Kisame. I mean writers making their OC a half fox or some stupid crap like that. No, don't do that and point at Naruto saying he's part fox because he has the fox demon inside of him which gives him characteristics. Please think, these writers can't just make a human? I'm not saying a jutsu can't make you transform but don't make them born half fox or half wolf or whatever you could put in front of half. Like half table or something.
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• OC has clan that looks the same but she/he looks different.

If you make a clan for your OC then please follow that clan. You don't make a clan just to be different from that clan, it makes no sense. I get annoyed at this because the clan could have White hair and gold eyes but the OC has Black hair and purple eyes. It is so stupid, don't make them different. Even if you kill off your clan at least make your OC look like they belong to that clan. Otherwise what was the point of making the clan. So you could have the abilities but none of the looks? No just don't!!
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• Worst past of anime History

''My clan has been killed by Orochimaru but I escaped only clinging to life by a thread. The Akatsuki found me and they wanted my power so they tortured me everyday. I snuck away 5 years later and lived in the forest where Anbu ninjas attacked and nearly killed me. They made me prisoner in Wave and after another few years of torture I escaped and was Orochimaru's experiment and guinea pig before fleeing to hidden leaf, where Sakura and Ino bullied me. God I have the worst'' You really do. You guys may think I'm lying but this is legit how a lot of their pasts be. Nothing but torture. 1 they should be dead. 2 how did they get pass the Akatsuki? And 3.....Why the hell are you doing this to your OC!!? This makes no sense and it really be like this. It's sad because when you see this past you should know that the OC is going to be a carefree and boring moron that doesn't even try. Please don't make your OC's past like this. I mean the killing of the clan is fine but if you have to have this past then pick one thing and not everything.
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• Orochimaru killing the clan

The most annoying thing I have ever seen is the Orochimaru killed my clan cliche. It is always Orochimaru, it's never anyone else. I even had my OC's clan killed but not by Orochimaru. Please be original with how your clan gets killed. It could be you killed them or a illness that killed them or something like that. You don't have to stick to Orochimaru, you can explore different ways to be oh I don't know....unique.
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• Best Kenkei Genkei but no weakness

This is the last thing for now. I hate when these OCs have the strongest clan jutsus, doujutsus, Ninjutsu, and Genjustus but they never have a weakness. No one said they couldn't be strong but if your going to make something powerful than you better add a weakness. Otherwise it is OP and Mary Sue to the top of Kakashi's hair all the way down to Sakura's ninja boots. These are the worse Because people actually do this, or they will just copy another doujutsu. Someone tried to give their OC the yin and yang. First of all the Hyugas are the yin and yang clan. The symbol literally appears under Neji when he does his 8 trigrams for Pete's sake. All I am saying is don't make them over powered. You will get hate real quick.
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Hey guys I hope you liked that rant because it was all true to me. I just had to get all of that off my chest. Anyway I'll see you all for the next OC review. I may do a part 2 to these Naruto rants. Thanks for reading.
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