This is by ramenbbit
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name: soran (no lastname)
Oh, this is the first OC without a last name.
age: twelve
Cool
gender: male
Nice
appereance: blemished tan skin, black hair, rounded face (as well as body).
Oh so he's a bit chubby. Cool
clothing: black, fitted jacket. shorts with many pockets. worn-out sandals.
A very simple outfit and easy to imagine. Great job.
personality: timid, sometimes rude, cocky (in a way), underestimating and overestimating oneself and others
Timid and cocky doesn't go in the same personality category. If he is cocky he would be more of a loud and over hyped person but if he is timid he would be more in the shy category and quiet.
-isn't the best, nor the lowest
-most likely a side character
-gets bullied by superior classmates
-orphan
-has crush on ino yamanaka; obviously one-sided
-closet pervert
Oh ok,
Iimited jutsus– not including academy's
ameratsu: hell fire, low-level*
thunder: lightning, low-level
scald: water, fire, low-level
How can he use ameratsu if he isn't a Uchiha? I am assuming he isn't.
*levels depend on chakra and chakra nature
What is his chakra?
ninjutsu: 4/10
genjutsu: 0/10
taijutsu: 1/10
If he is 12 how did he learn ameratsu? Not even Sasuke learned that till he was 16.
bonus facts:
-loves dumplings
-allergic to feathers
Cool. Nice trivia.
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Final Analysis- This OC is very confusing. He knows jutsus that he shouldn't either because he is not from the clan or is at a very early age. Not to mention that he most likely is a supporting character so he shouldn't really know high level jutsus like the main cast. Other than that he is fine. It was a honor to review him and thank you for choosing me to review him.
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Well here is the next 8 OCs. I can't wait to get more OCs after I ice my fingers. Thank you all for your OCs and support I truly love reviewing and you guys help me out a lot. Thank you.