Hey everyone, I just want to say I am so happy because we finally made it to 1,000 views. This is amazing, when I saw this I was squealing. I just want to thank you all for your support and the OCs. I love reviewing them and seeing the talents and uniqueness that each OC has. Now this OC is from SadiaRiaz4 and I'm happy to review them. Hope you like it.
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Genre: This idea just came to me out of nowhere. Well, not exactly nowhere... You see, I was thinking of Stuck in Naruto fanfics when it came to me. It was like "What if someone got stuck in a character's body?"

That is very unique. I never read anything like that before. I think you should make it.

Name:
- Real name: Yamazaki Honoka.
- Name after switch: Hinata Hyuuga.

Oh so she switches to Hinata. Alright that sounds cool.

Name meaning:
- Surname: "Yama" meaning mountain and "saki" meaning cape or peninsula.
- First name: "Hono" meaning harmony and "ka" meaning flower.

That's a cute name.

Age:
- Real: 18
- After switch: 12 (part 1),
16 (part 2),
20 (the last)
31 (Boruto)

Oh so she was older. Alright.

Gender: Female (obviously)

True

Family: Yamazaki Yuuki (father), Yamazaki Haruna (mother).

Ok so these is the original parents. Nice.

Appearance: Before the switch, her hair color is brown and her eyes are aqua blue. She is slightly obese but doesn't give a damn about it.

Oh, I have yet to see a chubby OC. Great job for being different.

Personality: Honoka is described as strange by Naruto and annoying by Sasuke. She is energetic and friendly. She is also a bit random and mischievous, often helping Naruto with pranks. Being a former scientist, she is very smart. However, her knowledge of the Naruto world is rather limited. Despite this, she adjusts the best she can.

Ok, that is great but if she is 18 how is she a scientist in the real world? To be a scientist you would have to go to college and since she is 18 she would just be starting college or is in her first year. Other than that question she is pretty good.

She loves to annoy people for the heck of it which often gets her in trouble. She has a habit of training hard and even recklessly, causing her to get many injuries. Honoka has a desire to improve her skills and always pushes herself. She is a bit of a no nonsense girl and can not take things lying down. She is caring about others' feelings as she works with Shino's bugs despite her fear of them. She is also shown to hate chores and tends to complain a lot about D ranks.

This is good. It shows how she acts in different situations and how she acts around other ninjas like Shino. She's a whiner which would make Sasuke think she is annoying and it makes her personality.

She is also a fast learner. She also shows a dislike for rude people. She is generally polite to her superiors but if she decides she doesn't like someone she won't hesitate to disrespect them. When she knowingly does something wrong, she uses pointless arguments to validate her actions. She hates it when someone contradicts her opinion and loves to explore.

This again shows her character and the best part her negative side. These shows her flaws.

Battle Style:
- Part 1: Her skill set is pathetic at the start, mostly due to not being used to intense ninja training. At first, she focuses on taijutsu as it is the most related to her world but later focuses on ninjutsu as well. At first, she stays away from genjutsu, viewing it as magic tricks, but after seeing Kurenai use it, she decides to give it a try. Later, when Kiba is hospitalized after a run-in with a missing nin after completing a C rank mission, she decides to learn medical ninjutsu and learns the basics by the Chunin Exams. She also works on her Byakugan.

This is good. Taijutsu is the closest to our world's Karate or other fighting styles so it would make sense that she would learn that first. I also like how she called genjutsu "magic tricks" since it would be in our world. It is also good at how a experience like Kiba's resulted in her learning medical ninjutsu. Great job.

- Part 2: In Part 2, her skills increase greatly as she continues training. She learns more than the basics of medical ninjutsu and even some senbon skills. Her accuracy also increases greatly from this training. Her ninjutsu and genjutsu skills also increase a bit (the former more than the latter).

Ok, it's good to see she Increased in skills. So did she train with Tsuande like Sakura or did she train herself?

- Weapon: In Part 2, she wields a sword.

This is the picture of the sword. Thank you for it.

Aside from this, she uses shuriken, kunai and senbons.

These are the basic weapons for a ninja. All the ninjas have them so it's good to see she has them too.

Past: Honoka was a scientist in her world. She was genuinely interested in the phenomenon of deja vu. Once she came across a theory that it was due to the existence of alternate dimensions, she performed a series of experiments in order to confirm it. One of the experiments goes wrong, causing her to enter the Naruto world as Hinata. A flashback shows that Honoka was not very close with her family.

This is good but how did she become a scientist at such a young age? She was 18 at the time so was she a helper? What did her parents do to not make their relationship good?

Relationships: I don't know yet. Maybe Naruto.

Ok

Others:

Rank:
Genin (12)
Chunin (16)
Jonin (20)

Trivia:
- Honoka tends to break the forth wall a lot, leaving her teammates confused.
- She once introduced herself to a foreign ninja as "Fu Mei", derived from 'fumei', meaning 'unknown'.

So Honoka makes it known she is in a TV show but wouldn't the creator of Naruto know about it if he sees it?
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Well here is the first of the OC Sprint reviews. Now for the final analysis.

Final Analysis- This is a good story but to many holes are left open and too many questions are unanswered. I love the thought of this story but there are questions that need to be answered. One is the 4th wall. If she is from the real world wouldn't the manga and the anime be cancelled? Also for a scientist 18 is a extremely young age to be one for you have to go to college and take tons of science classes. So how did she become a scientist? Also, what is the relationship with her parents? If it is bad, what happened? These are just a few questions that need answers.
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I hope you all liked this OC review. I will be going to the next OC Sprint now, peace.