Here is another OC. I forgot to mention in titles now I may just put the OC name unless I have many OC reviews in which I may put OC rapid fire or OC Sprint. Now to continue. This OC is from dancegirl222 and if you guys remember, my very first person who had me review her OC. I am still very happy to do any of her OCs and I thank her for bringing me far in the OC reviewing business. Now let's review this OC.
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Genre: I like doing these. It helps me get my plans straight for my story's characters.

Thank you, it also helps me get better at reviewing.

Name: Akemi Amane (brilliant beauty of the heavens)

A beautiful name.

Gender: Female

Age: 24(in my story before Naruto) 36 (Part1) (I'm not sure if I want her alive in Part 2)

Ok, I never seen a dead OC so if you do I think you might be one of the first.

Family: Haruae Amane( mother, alive) Dai Amane (father, alive)

Thanks for the life status.

Appearance: maroon hair that goes just past her shoulders, normally wears it in a ponytail, green-gray eyes, wears a red long sleeves shirt with a Jounin flak jacket, wears her hitai-ate like Sakura, wears a black skirt with thin black shorts understand with bandages on her right leg.

This is a cute style. It also feels like her personality would go with her clothing style.

Weapons: shuriken, bow and arrow, kunais, and senbon needles

Nice.

Past: Since she was an only child, Akemi was lonely and wanted brothers and sisters, she has come to think of Team 5 like her brother and sisters. She tries to be motherly to cover up the fact that she's really quite bitter. She became bitter because in school, she, Naori Uchiha, and Maiko Yamazaki were good friends towards the end of their Academy years. When they were placed on different teams, she was upset but still made time to hang out with Naori and Maiko seeing as they were still friends. Although, it was one-sided with Naori because he was a typical Uchiha, thinking that everyone who wasn't at his level was inferior. While they hung out, she started getting feelings for Naori and decided that she was going to confess to him, no matter how scared she was. If he rejected her, then she would just stay away from him and tried to move on.

This shows a lot about her character. It also shows how she sees life. If life rejects her she still moves forward. However, actions speaks better than words. I hope she does move on and continues with life. Her style also shows her motherly like tenderness towards her team. Another thing is her want of siblings. It's sweet to see her think of team 5 as her siblings, i think this is pretty good.

She and Maiko talked about it but she warned her that he was no good and he was a complete jerk to her. But on the night of the Uchiha massacre, she confessed to him a few hours earlier right before Itachi killed his clan. He rejected her and she went home broken-hearted. (She's like 24) When she found out about the massacre, she became even more hurt. Yes, she was angry that he didn't accept her feelings but she didn't want him to die. But a few weeks before, she was speaking to Maiko about maybe confessing to him, since she has a boyfriend that she confessed to, so she figured she might be able to help her.

It's nice to see that she did go forward. Also how she is with Maiko. It shows that Maiko is her best friend and that she can put aside her heartbroken state to help her.

Maiko told her it was a bad idea because she heard from some others that Naori liked someone else from his own clan and that they were caught kissing somewhere. Akemi was determined to not let Maiko's warning get to her because she felt that it was something she had to do. So she tried to cover up the fact that she was hurting and bitter and became a tokubetsu Jounin because she had always wanted to help kids but didn't want to stay still in a boring classroom.

It is nice to see that Akemi moved on and did what she wanted to do. It shows she's strong and that not everyone has a happy ever after. Great job.
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We are going to go straight into the Final Analysis.

Final Analysis- This is a good character and I love seeing that she got over her crush and still went to achieve her dream after he rejected her. It shows She's strong mentally to the point that she was able to get over it and help her Maiko. This is a good OC and has great potential.
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