This OC is by grasseee I hope you like it.
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Name: Miyasaki Oyama (nickname is Miya, or Mitsue)

Nice that's a cute name.

Age: 12 and basically the same age and timeline as Naruto, though I might kill her off.

Oh ok, thanks for the information

Sexuality: She’s all over the place (bisexual like me).

Ok, cool

Birthdate: February 13

Nice

Looks: Long semi curly blue hair with a tint of grey that she dyed red but the red dye is fading so only the bottom half of her hair is red and she ties it in a loose-ish ponytail with a red hair tie, pupiless pink eyes, fair skin with immense body blushing as if she were too cold for too long, black long sleeved shirt, red sweater that is cuffed extremely baggy and unzipped that she only wears outside. She wears black leggings (though i know they aren’t supposed to be in the Naruto world) and brown leather tool belt, no socks, and red shinobi shoes. She has plain brown leather cuffs on her forearms with hidden blades (assassin's creed) over her sleeves. She has small scrapes littering her hands, worn down cracked fingernails, and slightly dry rough hands. She’s more muscular for her age and gender, and she has a bunch of multicoloured hair ties on her right wrist. When she’s working she has a metal helmet thing, with a type of one way plastic over her face, she also has fingerless tough gloves. She wears glasses when reading or having trouble looking at things.

Ok, this is pretty good but I don't believe there is dye in Naruto. At least you did note that leggings aren't supposed to be in Naruto and the way she looks makes her battle ready. So she has a more Male body than female? That's cool and makes her different.

This is a picture of Miyasaki. This is a very pretty and cute picture. It sums up how she looks as well.

Personality: A mostly neutral person, she fidgets when she's nervous, she a bit quiet, she’s a ambivert leaning towards introvert, she’s extroverted to Sasuke, she’s cool, chill, laid back, kinda a tomboyish personality, awkward sometimes, she likes swearing, she’s bad liar and laughs nervously sometimes, she’s smiley…? And not a lot of things piss her off but sometimes… she’s pretty sarcastic, and a little comeback-ish sometimes. She can be scary when she wants to be.

A lot of different things just happened here but I was able to group it all and put it into a perspective personality group. However, it does say that she is nervous twice so does that mean that she is nervous a lot or not?

Backstory: She was born in Suna into a civilian family and was pretty good friends (not best friends) with Gaara and the sand siblings, until she was 5 and she was experimenting with bombs and blew up a building, killing her parents and a couple that was living near them. She was kicked out of Suna leaving her older-by-one-year-sibling-to-another-mother to hate her.

Ok but how did a 5 year old get their hands on a bomb? Her being friends with Gaara is ok if it's before his incident but I'm just wondering how did she get a bomb? Who gave it to her? Why didn't she blow up? And if she didn't blow up wouldn't the building crashing down kill her under all the rumble? There are a lot of questions that need answers for this part.

She went to Konoha ‘cause why not when she met Sasuke and they were instantly best friends. As in he remembered your period schedule better than you did. She see each other naked and not bat an eye. He drinks out of a water bottle that she just drank and you guys think its normal.g jksvgufheuy434 bESt frIENdS!!!

Ok now if she was to go to konoha. She would be interrogated by Ibiki. If they knew she killed those people they would have turned her in without a second thought, she wouldn't have gotten into the village to be friends with Sasuke. With Sasuke I can see it being a little easier to be friends before the Uchiha massacre because he was a happy child back than but;
1. The Miyasaki wouldn't have had her period at the age of 5.
2. We don't even know if Sasuke would drink after his own mother. So why would he drink off of a girl he just met? Plus where is his family, it's not like she's living in the Uchiha compound so what is she doing there naked and seeing Sasuke naked? Just because they are best friends don't mean there ain't boundaries.

When his clan got killed she were with him and was there for him and shit. So she moved into the Uchiha compound with him or whatever. She isn’t a ninja and won’t get her headband or ‘anything, so she's technically not a ninja…? She didn’t want Sasuke to feel lonely so she asked mr. Hokage if she could create a puppet and control it with puppet strings from inside the walls of the classroom (because that's the most logical, I’ll extend on that layer on in the story) so that her puppet could be a ninja, Hokage said yes. Except that she required to be on a team with Sasuke so he feels safe or whatever. So here she is. She’s not a ninja, she's just… there and helping kinda.

Ok, there are many things wrong here, first the hokage wouldn't accept something such as have a puppet posing as a human. Second if she wasn't living in the Uchiha compound than where was she living? Third, why don't she just become a ninja than? It's not like it's not a fanfiction, she could become a ninja that's a puppet master.

Just so you know: Well she’s a good puppeteer. Like, making her way up to Sasori’s level fast. She has higher than average strength, flexibility, and stealth but that's it. She’s ok at cooking and she only learned for Sasuke’s sake, she has to be a good drawer for her puppets… She’s very intelligent (‘cause designing things or whatever) she’s pretty good at reading people and observing stuff. And she’s ok at Ninjutsu, but better at genjutsu. She experiments a lot, with bombs, woods, acids, healing stuff, etc. She’s a ok healer and has some knowledge in medicine, but has a lot of knowledge in poison and antidotes. She is about the strength of a average Chunin, ninja-wise. (minus the freaking good puppeteering skills.)

Ok, how is she making her way up to Sasori's puppet skills without a legit trainer? Her stats don't even fit chunin with or without the puppet skills because she is stronger in strength, stealth, and flexibility than the average ninja making her just as good as a hand to hand fighter as she is with a puppet. Also how is she learning about bombs and stuff at her age? Where is she getting these from? How did she not blow up the compound like how she did her building in Suna? Her stats add up to her being high jounin and even higher to like special anbu when putting her puppet and regular skills together. I would recommend lowering her regular stats and only being good with a puppet so she would seem chunin level. Other than that she would need to have great chakra control too because she's controlling puppets.

Fun facts: She and Sasuke take a bath together every night (not fully naked, they have a towel covering their ‘essentials’)(still thinkin’’bout this one because when I was smaller I took baths with my guy friend and it was adorable and it's pretty normal in japan according to google, but i wouldn’t know.),

It's fine when kids are 7 and under but once they hit that age of 8 it's time to not have them take baths together no more. Also in a bath you would be naked so do they bathe with towels still on? As I said before best friends can have boundaries.

she needs glasses but doesn’t wear them, she is considering getting brown contacts so she can look more normal and have better eyesight, every school day at lunch she will talk through a walkie talkie that she installed with him, she haaates training, she made a human puppet before, she was briefly taught by Sasori.

What? Ok, I understand the first part about her wearing glasses but when was she taught how to use puppets by Sasori if she was out of Suna by 5? I can understand the walkie talkie part because Kakashi and Lee had walkie talkies. Not to mention this was no where in her past so when could she have been taught by him?

she god damn loves junk food especially fried chicken and treats herself sometimes, she hates needles, her hair gets oily very quickly so she showers at least 2 times a day, she breaks out like crazy but it's very rare, her body is god damn hairless (i wish that was me), she loves scented candles, she has standard jounin amount of chakra, and she wants a cat.

Wait ok a lot of it was good. In fact all but one thing was good and that was her amount of chakra. Why do she have a  jounin's chakra amount? How did she get a jounin's chakra amount? Please explain how she did because the only training we heard of was a brief one from Sasori which I don't know when and where it happened, and everything else has been helping Sasuke so why do she has so much chakra for her age and level?

Kekkei genkai: None

Ok

Family: Chen Xueyi (mother, dead.), Daisuke Oyama (father, dead, Akira Oyama(slightly older sibling from another mother, alive).

Cool, thanks for the life status and role of each person. Is her mother not married to her father? Is that why her last name is different?

Relationships: Sasuke (bEST frIEnD), Shikamaru (acquaintance), random other background characters (met them, talked with them, completely forgot their existence).

Ok, but it doesn't say when she met Shikamaru, when did she meet him and get acquainted?

Puppet profile:

Name: Karin (pronounced ‘car-eene’)

Ok, thanks for the way it is pronounced. I was calling her Karin form team Taka.

Looks: Shoulder length thick curly black hair, black eyes, perfect mocha coloured skin, freckles‍, she wears a cream coloured blouse, black standard ninja pants, and blue shinobi sandals. Basically she’s pretty af.

Ok, but she's a puppet. I understand that she is made pretty by Miyasaki even having freckles drawn on her. Is she made to look like a full human? She is made in a way how Sasori basically is? A human puppet?

This is how the puppet look. This is very pretty and fits the description nicely.

Personality: To everyone she is pretty stoic and a mystery.

How? She's a puppet, she can't walk, talk or anything without her creator. She's not even alive so how can she have a personality? The only way this could happen is if Miyasaki controls her and speaks for her.

Fun facts: Some are pretty suspicious about her, after feeling her hands were rough and hard like wood. This is just for a fanfiction

Ok, so no one has figured out that she is a puppet. Isn't chakra strings visible though? So can they not see those? I'm sure she's be cool for a fanfiction.
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Final Analysis- This OC has a lot of questions that need answers and many things to be explained. She has a pretty good thought to her but the fact that she for some reason have bombs and is somehow not wanted (because it's obvious if one is alive that they told on her and should be after her) is beyond me. Another thing is her and Sasuke's relationship, no one can have a relationship where they have no problem being naked around each after a month or two after being friends. Some more things is her stats which makes her OP. She has the best fightings stats along with being a amazing puppeteer and having jounin level chakra, none of the which screams chunin. They all scream jounin, and anbu. The puppet is good but I don't understand one thing. Is she supposed to look like how Sasori looks? Looks Human or not? Also I wouldn't call her personality a personality instead; how Miyasaki protrays her. That would clear up confusion as well. Please go through and answer the questions I asked above and explain the things that are needed. Other than that this OC has amazing potential. Thank you for not  only letting me review your OC but her puppet as well. It was a honor.
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