This OC is also by AnimeGoddess2 I hope you like it.
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Genre: Fanfiction

Cool

Name: Aqua Mizu

Nice

Age: Part 1 (12) Part 2 (17)

This age also isn't justified. It's the same gap as Amber's just a year younger.

Gender: Female

Nice

Family: Sister (Amber Kasai)

Ok, but where is the rest of the family.

Appearance: Long Blue hair and Ocean blue eyes

Ok

Battle: The Mizu clan can only use water style jutsu. Aqua learned Taijutsu from her now deceased mother.

Ok, is there more to go off of for her mother?

Past: Even after her parents passed away, Aqua was a normal girl living a normal life with her sister, Amber. Then one day, she and her sister are brought to Naruto's world under mysterious circumstances and figure out that the place they called home never existed and both the Mizu and Kasai clan have disappeared.

Ok, this is a little different from Amber's but it does give a little more detail.

Personality: Nice, friendly, and sometimes smart.

Ok so she's the opposite of Amber. Cool but where is the flaws and negative traits?
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Final Analysis- Like Amber I don't have much to go off and I have even less to go off in this one. So I seriously can't say anything about Aqua but the fact that she is the opposite of Amber does say something. Thanks for letting me review your OC. It was a honor.
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