OC 109 (Miharu Uzumaki)

This OC is by Little_Ms_Uchiha I hope you like it.
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Name: Miharu Uzumaki


Nice name and I see a Uzumaki.


Age:
Part 1: 13-14
Part 2: 17-18 (she's the same age as Gai's team)


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Appearance: bright, blood red hair. Blonde at the roots, NOT because she dyed her hair red but due to a weird genetic quirk, as if she was going to be a blonde but her hair grew out red instead with the blonde at the roots. Blue violet eyes, tan skin(a light bronze colour), several deep scars on her body, 4 feet 8 inches in height and weighs about 109 lbs.


Hey that's fine that's actually a thing. Another thing is when people's hair change color as they get older from blonde to brown or vice versa. Also nice skin and good height to weight ratio.


Personality: calculating, smart, reserved but shows caring and affection through actions rather than words. Easily embarrassed, especially when lots of affection and attention is being thrown her way. She becomes extremely shy when this happens. Though her shy demeanor can quickly become jaded bordering on psychopathic protectiveness when her loved ones are being threatened/injured. The reason for this is due to all the losses she was forced to witness as a young child. When she's around people she doesn't respect/like, she becomes rude and sarcastic unless they are a higher up she must be respectful to. Slow to anger unless you speak ill about her family. If you do, you need to run after. Suffers from PTSD.


Very good and nice job working in PTSD. It makes her more realistic because of the horrific things they see as a ninja. Great job.


Clothes:
Part 1: dark grey sleeveless turtleneck made of a butter soft material, over black ninja pants(like what the Jounin wear), kunai and shuriken pouch on her right leg, two pouches on her waist, one to hold medical items, and the other to hold wires, bombs(smoke, poison and explosive), weapon and sealing scrolls. Black sleeveless jacket made of the same material as the cloaks they use but sleeveless and has the Uzumaki symbol on the back. Wears black sleeves to hide the scars on her arms and black ninja gloves with the metal plates(like Kakashi's). Headband around her neck.
Part 2: black and navy blue off shoulder thin strap top, low hanging ninja pants that stop just after her knees, black ninja sandals, same black, sleeveless jacket from part one. Kunai and shuriken pouch on her right leg, two pouches on her waist holding same items as part 1. Headband around her neck.


These are good outfits and really shows her growing up.


History: she was born a year before Naruto, on the 12th February. When they were children, Naruto would constantly ask her what she remembered about their parent's. She would always tell him, "We were loved". And it was true. When Kurama was released when Naruto was born, the Third Hokage and unfortunately, Danzo as well found out that Miharu had a beast within her as well. One more powerful than the nine Tails. They forced her to run dangerous missions from the age of 6 since she showed exceptional skill and promise. Danzo then convinced the Third to recruit her into the ROOT foundation at the age of 8, where he attempted to break her and mold her to his will. While Miharu became traumatised by what she experienced such as losing someone who was a sister figure to her brutally, and Danzo forcing Itachi to kill his own clan and bragging to her how the clan was dead, she also came to hate both the Third for putting her in that situation in the first place, and Danzo for making her the way she is today. She never allowed them to manipulate her again, making sure she was permanently on the Solo missions roster and ensuring her name remained there(there is a reason for that). Until Danzo decided that he wanted her placed on the same team as Naruto with both the Last Uchiha and Kakashi of the Sharingan. It was his last attempt and final attempt at manipulating her. What better way to lead the mule than with the carrot on the stick? But what Danzo did not count on, was the deep bond she had with Sasuke, Sakura and Naruto. She finally became free of Danzo. And while she could not redo her past, she began accepting what happened and learned to live with her scars and memories, as she always considered them signs of her greatest failures before.


Beautiful the way you have her past really shows her traumatized state and everything. Great job.


Weapons: two short swords, kunai, shuriken


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Final Analysis- This OC is very good for the information I got. She was short sweet and to the point. I honestly can't say nothing else but I would recommend adding more if you haven't already. She is great don't get me wrong but I would love to see a story of her. Thank you so much for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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