A OC i needed to do.

Hey guys I told you all that I would be back with a OC that I needed to review. Now for the OC which is by SadiaRiaz4 I hope you like it.
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Name: Tsurugi Kyousuke


This is a nice sounding name.


Age:
- Part 1: 13
- Part 2: 16
- The Last: 20
- Boruto: 32


Oh so he is the age of the Naruto group. I haven't seen that in a while.


Gender: Male


Nice another male.


Sexuality: Straight


Cool.


Family: Tsurugi Yuuichi (older brother), Tsurugi Daisuke (father), Tsurugi Ayako (mother)


Nice and I believe they are all alive. Do correct me if I am wrong.


Appearance: Kyousuke has sharp black eyes, short dark blue hair and a slightly pale skin.


Oh ok, it's nice to see his features are simple.


- Part 1: In Part 1, he wears a black jacket with a black shirt underneath, dark blue pants and dark blue sandals. He wears his forehead protector on his forehead. He also wears a kunai pouch on his right leg.


This is very simple and very easy to imagine on him. Thank you for also saying where the forehead protector is, it let's me know a little more about him.


- Part 2: In Part 2, while most of his appearance remains the same, he wears a dark green flak jacket, black pants and black ninja boots.


Ok so his appearance changes sightly. That's good considering he's growing. I love how he did change up too to show that he is older.


Personality: It is easy to mistake Kyousuke as arrogant and cocky. However, he is actually simply confident in his and his team's abilities, sometimes even overconfident. He is prideful and can not take things lying down. Usually, he only states his opinion when he has to, although this changes around his team after spending some times with them. He has a soft spot for his family, a contrast to the tough front he puts up in front of others. He can be pretty blunt. Due to this, he can come off as edgy and rude to others. Kyousuke is loyal and cares for his comrades, which he shows more through his actions than words. He is bad at comforting others but not as much as Miyuki. Contrary to what anyone might think, he is trustworthy and reliable. He is a natural leader and acts as one when their sensei isn't around. He is good at formulating plans on the spot and has an aura that makes others follow what he says. He is quite knowledgeable about weapons (mostly swords) and can understand about a weapon's construct by looking at it enough to see how to counter it. While he generally avoids conflict with his peers, he sometimes gets into argument with Tenma, which are usually dissolved by Miyuki. At first, Kyousuke is a bit startled by Miyuki's sudden outbursts but later gets used to them.


Alright, i am glad you had him stay in the same category of hype and emotions. I also like how he is the definition of don't judge a book by his cover because he is caring for the ones he love. How he is confident in his team and shows it. This shows what kind of character he is. The way he has knowledge and a born leader adds to his confidence level. You did great planning him.


In Part 2, he retains most of his personality traits but loosens up a bit more around the Rookie 9. He tends to get annoyed at Miyuki's trivial mistakes but overlooks them. He doesn't hesitate to hit his teammates wen they annoy him. Kyousuke also gets a bit sarcastic at times. While he becomes more playful (which is not really much but still a big change), he knows when to be serious.


It's great to see not a lot of change happened in two and a half years. It makes him a realistic Naruto character. I also like how he has ties to the rookie nine. Not a lot of OCs do so it's great to see something fresh.


Battle Style: His battle style is a bit of an all-rounder, but he tends to unconsciously focus more on ninjutsu. Like Miyuki, Genjutsu doesn't really interest him that much. His taijutsu is alright, but not as good as his teammates. He is rather good with weapons but doesn't have a permanent one.


So I see that he is a little like Tenten with the weapons right? It's also good to see a OC that isn't better than his team. It's also great to see a ninja that focuses on ninjutsu without knowing it. Nice battle style.


Stats:
> Part 1:
- Ninjutsu: 2.5
- Taijutsu: 2
- Genjutsu: 1.5
- Intelligence: 2.5
- Strength: 2.5
- Speed: 3
- Stamina: 3
- Chakra Reserves: 3
- Chakra Control: 2.5
> Part 2:
- Ninjutsu: 4
- Taijutsu: 3
- Genjutsu: 2
- Intelligence: 3.5
- Strength: 3.5
- Speed: 4.5
- Stamina: 4
- Chakra Reserves: 4
- Chakra Control: 3.5


These are good stats. I wonder however, did he get a sudden like in Taijutsu since he is fast and has great stamina? It seems like it a little since his speed and stamina are high.


Past:
Kyousuke's clan mainly focuses on weaponry. From a young age, he was interested in weapons. When he was 8, his brother, jonin at 18, became paralyzed in a mission. Yuuichi made him promise to not hate ninja's because of it and to become one for him. Due to this, Kyousuke paid much more attention to his training. At the academy, he met the Rookie 9. He used to avoid them for the favor of his own training but had some respect for Naruto for not giving up even with the village's unfair treatment and Shikamaru for his intelligence. He was surprised when Sakura, Ino and Miyuki's friendship was torn but didn't think much of it. He and Tenma used to get into unspoken competitions but were still friends at the end of the day (mostly due to Tenma's inability to give up). Later, Miyuki joined their circle of friendship when Iruka put the three of them in joint training (which was actually an attempt to see how the teams should be made). He graduated from the academy at 12.


This is great. The way he idolized Naruto and Shikamaru for their own unique traits. Also how you explained a little background for each of his teammates but mainly focused on him. You did amazing in this. I also like how they all became friends during the academy and knew who each other was instead of meeting when they all became a team. I think this is a great past.


Relationship: None so far but I might pair him with Miyuki.


This is cool.


Clan Traits:
He comes from a minor clan of Konoha. His clan has dark hair and eye colors, a lot of knowledge in weaponry and ability to tell a weapon's construct at first glance (sort of a kekkei genkai)


This is a unique kekkei genkai. It isn't OP and it shows how it ties him with weapons. You did great tying those together.


Element Affinity:
- Fire (Part 1)
- Slight Earth (Part 2)
So mainly fire.


Nice to see it's small and simple.


Trivia:
- Kyousuke and Yuuichi have an age difference of 10 years (a lot, I know)
- His teammates are Kimura Miyuki and Matsukaze Tenma and sensei is Kimura Midori (might change)
- He had Miyuki's twin swords specially made for a birthday gift.


These are some great fun facts. Don't worry about age differences because even in the real world there are people who are 30 years apart from their siblings. Now that's alot. Anyway thanks for also giving us the whole team and telling us a little more about Miyuki's twin swords origin.
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I hope you all liked this OC as well. These OC reviews are very fun so I hope to get more soon. Now for the final analysis.


Final Analysis- This OC has little to no flaws. However, I would like to know how he opened up to team 7 over time for I do recall reading he does stop avoiding them. Did he become friends with Naruto and his friends or did he become friends with just Shikamaru and Naruto? Just some of his ties with the rookie 9 is what would need more information, like if he did get to know them better and stuff like that. Just basic stuff. That's really it. Other than that you did a amazing job.
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I hope you all liked this OC and I hope that Miyuki and this OC has a story to them. Their book is something I would be completely happy to read it. Till than thanks for choosing me to review your Naruto OC and I can't wait for the next request. See you all soon.

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