This OC is by ReindeerEliese I hope you like it.
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Hello, I want to submit an OC for your book. This OC is used for fanfiction! I actually modeled this OC after me, I'm very tall and her height same age and birthday too.

Nice, so this OC is a self insert of you in the Naruto world. That's pretty cool.

Name: Kiahi Baline (The first name is inspired by Hawaiian names, and the last name is rooted from Balenciaga, a famous clothing line. I choose it because I wanted her name to be a little fancy.)

It does sound quite fancy and the origin of her name is cool.

Gender: Female

Nice.

Age: 11 Years old in Pt1 (Naruto), 13 through 15 Pt2 (Shippuden), 35+ (Boruto)

So she's a year younger than Naruto?

Personality: Quiet, Observant, Thoughtful, Problem Solver, Not lazy and Not particularly hardworking, foodie, Kindhearted

All of these go hand in hand with each other and compliments each trait nicely. Perfect.

Looks: Dark skin, Silver short curly hair, 5'11 feet, A little chubby, black beauty mark on the bottom of face where Kakashi has it (I, the creator of her, have it too!!), eye color is black

Nice and it's great to see some diversity in this OC and a different body type than a hourglass figure.

Outfit: A black long sleeve shirt with a collar like Sasuke, Black knee length shorts, fishnet leggings that stops at her mid calf, blue ninja sandals, blue headband tied around her neck, bandages on her hands. Ninja pouch on her right leg.

This is a great outfit, I can picture it in my head, I also like how you said fishnet instead of just leggings.

Family in PT1: Kishi Beline (Father) Hota Beline (Older Brother) Jin Beline (Older brother) Nimotaishi Beline (Older brother) Ikujo Beline (Older brother) Kirishima Beline (Older brother) Juneka Beline (Mother) DECEASED
FAMILY PT2: Kishi Beline (Father) Hota Beline (Older Brother) Jin Beline (Older brother) Nimotaishi Beline (Older brother) Ikujo Beline (Older brother) Kirishima Beline (Older brother) Juneka Beline (Mother) DECEASED Jūgo Beline (Husband) Juni Beline (Daughter)

Wonderful and thanks for the roles and life status of each member in part 1 and 2.

Relationships: Konoha 11 (Comrades) Team Taka (except for Jugo, Comrades) Jūgo (Husband) Jugo and Kiahi fell in love surprisingly slowly. Kiahi admired him and his ability to stay calm when he wasn't in his fits of rage. Also, she thought he was very handsome when she first saw him because of his gorgeous hair, strong features, and height of 6'5. Jugo didn't notice her feelings because of kiahi's shy nature. However, he does pay some attention to her because she was the only female close to his height.

Nice and I like how you used her personality when he noticed her to get them together and the height similarity.

Backstory: Kiahi grew up in the village hidden in the cloud with her father, her brothers and her mother. One day, from a sickness her mother died, leaving her father to raise them all. Because she was surrounded by so many boys, she became less and less feminine which reflected in her clothing choice. When she turned 7, her family moved out to the leaf village so her father could open up business as a merchant. As Younf Kiahi was strolling through the village one day, she sees a man throwing a mask at a young blonde boy, she freezes and dosent know whether to help protect him or walk away. That day she gains her thoughtfulness and ability to face a situations. But she also gains her quietness and inability to be gutsy. She joins the academy, having precious ninja training and meets Konohamaru, Moegi, and Udon her future friends. Years go by and she is kidnapped by traffickers and sold to the akatsuki l where she meets Team Taka and joins them in exchange for her life. There she meets Jugo, her lifelong partner.

Oh so she was sold to the akatsuki when team Taka was there and that's how she met Jugo? That's actually some rather good thinking. The rest is also really good.
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Final Analysis- This OC is really good and has a nice take on the Naruto life. I would say that the aging is a bit confusing because she's eleven which is closer to Naruto than Konohamaru but she is best friends with Konohamaru and his friends more than Naruto. Other than that everything else is great and is ready for a fanfiction and I can't wait to read it. Thank you for letting me review your Naruto OC, it was a honor.
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