This is by kris4ever I hope you like it.
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Genre: I may use her for a fanfic but I’m not sure yet, and she is still a work in progress. I would like a second option on her development so far. I would love for you to review her, any ideas and tips are helpful.

I will assist you the best I can. Thank you for trusting me with your OC.

Name: Mari Uchiha

Oh a Uchiha. Cute name.

Age:
Part one: 6-12

Oh ok

Birthday: September 16th

Oh I don't usually get the birthday. Cool

Gender: female

Nice

Family: she doesn’t remember

A family she don't remember. That's new. Cool.

Appearance:

Skin: looks mixed,

Ok, what kind of mixed? Like a light mix or a dark mix?

Hair: has black curly hair that it’s a little below her shoulder, she usually puts it in a bun for missions and battles

Nice. It's cute

Eyes: Sliver, has a scar over her right eye

Oh a scar, that's new, it's good seeing a OC that doesn't have flawless skin.

Ears & tail: black with white spots and white tips She also has a mark with 4 animals sitting together on her lower abdomen.

Wait, why do she have a tail? If it's for a animal clan than shouldn't she just be a Inuzuka like Kiba? There is already a animal clan maybe she has a condition or a jutsu or awakening that changes her. However, even so she shouldn't really have a tail sense non of the Naruto characters not even the ones with the tailed beasts have tails that are visible.

Clothing: torn pants, torn shirt (on the street) black shorts, dark Grey sleeveless hoodie normally with her hood up, with fishnet underneath her hoodie.

So does it go fishnet, torn shirt, than hoodie? Or is it a different style?

Personality: self-Reliant, courageous, strong-willed, clever, loyal, untrusting,

How is she untrusting if she is loyal? Shouldn't it be trusting? The loyal and untrusting doesn't go together.

like: eating, being in nature, animals, playing piano, reading,

I have seen some instruments in Naruto but Piano might not be a reasonable instrument. For instance Tayuya uses a flute. Hand held instruments would be be better suited for this OC and the Naruto world. I would suggest a wood wind instrument or a small instrument. Some instruments would be flute, violin, viola, clarinet, and oboe. Those would most likely be in the Naruto world.

Dislikes: people who disturb her peace, feeling useless, her past, getting left behind

Cool.

Battle: she well rounded, but favors Taijutsu and doesn’t like genjutsu.

Ok

Chakra type: Lighting(primary), Fire

Cool lightening.

Past: lived on the streets until 6 years old she had to steal to survive, the village citizens didn’t make her life any easier they would say no one would want a monster like a her. When she was 6 she made the mistake of trying to steal food from Itachi, after looking her over (seeing the mark on her stomach). Itachi brings her to the Uchiha compound to convince his father to adopt her which he agrees to because of her clan. (this may change instead of having Fugaku, and Mikoto adopt her, I may have someone else do to change it up a little bit Goals Know why she was abandoned, Show the world she not worthless, Help Sasuke get rid of Itachi

That's fine but I would recommend noting having her fight Itachi with Sasuke and to leave that to him. He pushed many people away to kill Itachi so it would be best to leave killing Itachi to Sasuke.

Relationships: None for now

Ok, take your time.

i forgot to add one thing my bad.

Its fine

Clan: Shizen-ai Clan

Oh a fan made Clan.

Story: Four people who loved the nature so much they were gifted with traits, and features of 4 animals; wolves, foxes, cats, and birds. These people lived in harmony together in the wilderness until some of its clan members started to believe that the people near their land should not be left alone and started to murder innocent people. This Causes people from other clans, and villages to kill members of the Shizen-ai clan to ensure their safety. Seeing that the clan was going to be destroyed the first 4 members instructed the few good people left to go in hiding. The people of this clan hide their animal features and lived among the other clans, now only few know of this clan, and fewer know its exist. There is only one sure way to visible see if a person is a part of this clan which is a mark of the 4 animals together.

This is good but I would still recomend just being a inuzuka for it would save more time and give you a better reason to include animals to your OC.
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Final Analysis- This OC has only a few things to work on. Like I said before, you should have her be a Inuzuka and make Jutsus that would favor the selected animals. Such as maybe a summoning and different enhancers. Maybe she has a bird's eye and can see far, while she has the top speed of a fox and the agility of a cat and the intimidation of a wolf. Than having some jutsus that goes with those. Also, maybe she should also get to know Itachi better before he just meets her and on the first day decides to have someone take her in cause remember he did kill everyone but Sasuke in the massacre including his parents which means he would most likely kill her as well. Especially sense he knew her a lot less than he knew his best friend and family. Other than that this OC is good and could use only a little tweaking. It has been a honor to review her and I hope I helped you make her the best you want her to be.
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