This OC is by AngeelBbang I hope you like it.
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Genre :

Genre : Same as her husband (My other OC, Akinori) that bis for the 'What If' or AU Naruto fanfiction. Which is a bit difficult to do as there's a lot to think about. But it's funny and good !

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" After Minato and Kushina's death, Naruto is not left alone, as his parents' relatives will take care of him. That will change a lot in the plot of the story (not that I dislike the original one ! )

Your fine, it's a fanfic you can do whatever you want.

Name : Masako Uzumaki
Kanji : 雅子 うずまき | Translation : ► Masako Means Proper Child

Nice names

Age :

Pre-Naruto (Kyuubi's attack) ; 21 Years
PT 1 ; 33 - 34
PT 2 ; 36 - 37
The Last ; 39 [Tho, it can not occure at all]
Next Generation ; [It will depend on how of a Jump I will make, between 6, 10 or more years, started from the end of PT2] between 43 and 55 (I take it between 6 and 18 years)

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Birthday : October 1st

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Gender : Female

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Family :

• Uzumaki Akinori (Husband - Alive - Pre-naruto age : 20 and a half)
• Uzumaki Akisa (Daughter - Alive - PT 1 : 11 - 12 )
• Uzumaki Rinji (Son - Alive - PT 1 : 5 years old)
• Uzumaki Waikiji (Son - Alive - PT 1 : 6 months ♦He was named after Akinori's late father♦)
• Uzumaki Genkei (Nephew - Alive - PT 1 : 22 - 23 years)
• Uzumaki Naruto (Nephew/Son - Alive - PT 1 : 12 - 13 years)
• Namikaze Minato (Cousin-In-Law/Brother-in-law - Dead)
• Uzumaki-Namikaze Kushina (Cousin/Sister - Dead)
• Namikaze Hiroko ( Mother-In-Law - Dead)
• Waikiji (Unknown name) (Father-in-law - Dead)
• Uzumaki Shizuko born Senju (Mother - Alive - Old (She might tell her name but will kill you after. She is in Tsunade's age range)
• Uzumaki Yuu (Father - Dead)
• Uzumaki Yushiako (Brother - Unknown, supposedly dead)

This is a great family tree. Thanks for the life status of the members and their relations to her.

Appearance :

Masako is a strong and beautiful woman with her 166 cm and 58 kg and her fair complexion. She have long red hair, that are a bit paler than Kushina's red hair, and that she ut on a high ponytail or in a easy braid. She now can release them, as she please. Her eyes are Green-yelowish that look like Tsunade's eyes, with a brown circle around her eyes' iris.

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Outfits : [Just to tell, I still need to improve it a bit as it's hard to explain it totally and I am not really sure about the colours too]

Don't worry about that, just do what you can and I'll understand.

• As a Genin/Chunin : She wears a sort of tangzhuang that goes to the middle of her mid-thigh (Like Tenten's shirt on Shippuden but a bit longer). It have long sleeves but have the sleeves cut on the level of the elbows on the back and it's not totally as it's cut only to make the elbows able to be seen and the arm to be more free, it's colour white and blue, the fabric is white and the extra adds, and the ends of the sleeves, the collar, the buttons and has a piece of tissue around the waist that are bleu, nearly lagoon. With a to-skin black onesie (Like a one piece of cloth that have a shirt and a pant, but all together, like the ones used by the swimmers and the cyclists) that cover up to her knees, . And the usual shoes. She wears her headband in the head, which is easier and rapid to wear if in hurry.Jounin ; She changed her outfit to a sleeveless onesie that consists of a shirt and a short, and that have a wide open turtleneck that can be mistaken for a scarf. The colour is blue with some white, as now it's the contruary, the details are white. It also have a sort of belt on the waist and the joining jacket that she didn't close often. She also wear simple shoes but with the front having an additional thing which is a part that is long to protect her leg to the knees (Long like Shippuden Sakura's, but only in the front, and it's made of something like Iron, so it's a better protection. It is removible, and it also have a double part that is use to protect her skin if someone use a katon (fire) on her as the iron can become dangerous). She have, as her husband, her konohagakure symbol is directly attached on the left side of her jacket, so she won't be taking time to wear a headband. She have a little back where she have a roll that contains only her important rolls; weapons, or other things, it help her not having too much to carry.)Since Part 1 ; She wears a sort of traditional Chinese Cheongsam dress, entirely white with red for the additional things, that is to the half of her chins, with a dark red inner. It is simple. The sleeves are tights but are still a bit relaxed. She wears inner outfits, a short and a top that are cream colour. the sort goes to her mid-thigh,for the top, it's short sleeves (I don't know how to call the dress, it's the dress version of Shippuden tenten's top with the dress is a slight flared from her hips and it's cut on the two side, but closer to the front where the red part is shown. I take it from a picture, this is the picture link.

• Pregnancy (That might help for flash-backs) ; She would have two sort of dresses she would wear as a pregnant women, it will be the same but with different colours and fabrics.
♦ First one : She would wear a traditional 3/4 sleeves Chinese Hanfu inspired dress, that is more suited for pregnant women. The dress will be light, pass her knees to her mid-shins and will be made of silk and a sort of Ramie Fabrics, that have a band (like weistband) that comes and circles the breasts, and the dress does falls without being evasive or sticky, like tent dress style. The dress' main colour is white, with some little patterns on the end. The band will be black but will have a knotted ribbon that maintain it. the ribbon might be any colour she want. It will suits the cool nd hot weather.
♦ The second one is a bit longer and a bit heavier, with a long sleeves the colour will change to black and grey, and will have the band red. The fabrics will be made of Linen with a light Wool inside, made for when the weather is cold or a bit windy (The inspired dress link.

Thanks for the pictures and the outfits were well descriptive.

Personality :
Masako is a calm and quiet  person. Well, this only when we know her. When she was young, she was a kinda cold-hearted girl and was also full of herself because being an Uzumaki. She takes time to get to know people and until then, she will be kinda of cold with them. Or she will stay quiet or only talk few, and will only observe. She can be described as an "thinking before acting" person. When people know her, she is calm, but not cold, she have a really big heart, and have a smile on her face for everyone, she don't dislike anyone at first, only if they make her hate or dislike her. She have an extreme maternal side, which can be good, and annoying sometimes; She protect her children (even Genkei) and listen and help them and all, but she also will be overprotective sometimes, nd will panick if they get hurt deep or nearly deep or will always try to know every secret they have. Fortunately, she calms herself a little by little. [...]She is also overprotective over her friends and loved one, but now she try not to express it too often. Even if she is a calm person, she appreciates when it's noisy or 'lively' as she call it. She is really stubborn and when she have an idea, she will not stop, even if it's can lead her to nearly die. She is honest and will tell you what she really think about you, even if it will hurt you ; She don't have any filter on her mouth, BUT she will try to be nice and not actually hurt you. She don't listen to the rumours or the talking about other people because she thinks and knows that it might be 90% false and she prefers to know someone or see his actions before judging, and if the person did bad things, she will try to see and understand why. She don't get angry easily with people (Unless they hurt her family, or say bad things about them or if they ARE her family) but when she is angry, she can be like Kushina. Really dangerous. She don't like lies, but use it if need or obliged to (Like with Naruto). Masako is also very, very open minded, and she love and appreciate people as they are and as they love themselves. She also can be too flexible with her children, as she can give them whatever they want to, especially if they gives her puppy eyes, which her husband balance with as he try not to do it too.

Her personality is complex but regardless everything is there. From the little things to what sets her off, it's all clear. Good job.

Likes : Ramens - Naps - Candied fruits - Carnivals and parties - Children - Her family - pastel brown and Beige/creme

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Dislikes : meetings with the academy sensei (You must an idea why so...) - Silence (Silence is like the calm before the end, she cannot stand silence) - Bugs - Dark Brown (Colour, she don't even know why) - Wars - Clock sound in the night (Don't help her sleep)

By clock sound do you mean ticking? I'm sure that's what you mean, everything else is good here though. I know there's a reason for some of these anyway.

Battle :
Kenkei genkei : She don't have any.
Weapons : Usual ones, she don't actually like use weans. She use scrolls often.

Chakra : She have affinity with Raiton, or with the thunder/lightening. And she managed to start to use suiton and fuiton, if she needs to use them. Tho, she only use Genin to chūnin level attacks and she can't use more powerful attacks than that.

Jutsu : She use Raiton often, from simple use to Mastered uses, but for Suiton and Fuiton, she can only use Genin to Chunin attacks, and she cannot use it often, as it's not her natural Chakra affinity, but it helps her if someone use Chakra that is stronger than Raiton.

Rank (Academic) : Jounin and Ambu [On maternity leave (I go with the fact that Konohagakure can gives 2 to 5 years if the person is a strong Kunoichi that the birth weaken a lot or that have a big family or something like that) but she can be called if they REALLY needs her]

Weaknesses / Least controlled power : Taijutsu - Flexibility - Weapons

Strength / Best controlled : Fuinjutsu - Chakra controle - Ninjutsu

This goes for her and hole battle because I can lump it into one sentence. Good, her weaknesses shine and shows her flaws in battle.

Past :
She was born from a Senju mother who's happen to be Tsunade's cousin and an Uzumaki father. She is born in Uzushiogakure and is her parent's first child and she was their pride, as she must be a powerfull kunoichi, or as they wanted her to be, especially her father. She grew up in war and she didn't have many chances to go out from her house, her mother was really protective and she, Masako, feared bombs. Her father was really lovely and was an attentive father towards her and he always make sure to stay some time with her, to talk or to teach her about her clan's power and her family, their relation was really cute. She also used to stay with her cousins, Kushina and some other cousins,unfortunately not all of them are alive now, or not all of them is alive as they all are supposed to be dead during Uzushiogakure's destruction. She was, during the war, sent to Konohagakure with her cousin kushina and she stayed with her there, and, despite the fact her parents' promise to follow her, none of them come even if she waited for them everyday for almost two years, she was told they died when Uzushiogakure was attacked, and after than she became less talkative and she closed on herself. She became a genin at the age of 13, which was a bit late, but she entered the Academy later than other people and she didn't go to school for nearly one year after she was told about her parents' death. She was put in the same team with Akinori Namikaze and Okemia Tamashini.

She was able found her mother when she was already a Chunin, so she was alreay 15 or older. Her mother was severly injured and needed time to heal and to grieve the lose of her family and her husband and son. Masako was A Chunin when her Sensei and her mother became lovers, and she was really happy about that.

Her past is good especially sense it was at the time of Minato and Kushina.

Relationship with other characters :

• Yuu Uzumaki (Dead) - Father - She was her father's treasure, and she was really close to him. But she was obliged to follow her cousin, Kushina to Konohagakure, and for her to go her dad promises her to follow her after a time. Unfortunately, he wasn't able to survive Uzushiogakure'a destruction. He was her role model when she was young.

• Chizuko Uzumaki (Born Senju) (Alive - Age unrevealed) - Mother - Her mom is Tsunade's cousin. They are really close to each other, not like she was with her dad, but it's still close. She usually go to meet her, if she can. Her mom lives in Konohagakure in an old house and don't want to live with her, but prefers calmer places. Masako meets her often, if she can, especially since she is not longer an active Ninja.

• Yushiako Uzumaki (unknown) - Brother He is 5 years younger than her as she don't really remember him as he was still young when she was sent to Konohagakure. After Uzushiogakure she thought her entire family died when she saw her mother after some years, but without her brother. They don't know if he is dead or no.

• Junichiro Hiromitsu : Sensei (Dead). He was like a paternal figure for her and she saw him like a sort of role model at that time. He actually ws like a father to her, not only because he became her mother's lover then husband for some times after her Jounin graduation, nd he died of sickness 6 years after Kyuubi's attack.

• Akinori Uzumaki (born Namikaze) - Husband - they meet in the academy and were put in the same team, team 12. People where envious about him being in the same team than an actual Uzumaki, herself, as she is a descendant of Hashirama Senju. But Akinori watched her carefully and said the words that he gained respect from her (But she didn't tell him about that only after Naruto grown up and became a Genin and before his departure to train with Jiraya) ; ' I don't care what's your name or who's your ancestors, I only care about yourself. And if you count on their names to be a ninja and you are useless, that means you are a failure as a Ninja and that you should not be one. All the Kunoichi Konohagakure got and will have will be able to protect their families and themselves by their own. They are strong models and heroes. And no failure should have the right to be one !' they had a fight, after that and they became "best-enemies". Their sensei scolded them, but after, she decided to show him that she is able to do, and that she is better than him as well (just some bonus, she said). She was always trying to be better than him, quietly at some point. But he always manage to make her want to kill him. Her annoyance, and 'hate' towards him was only and truly symptoms of falling in love slowly, and total denial. She didn't really accept her feeling only one year and a half after meeting him. They started dating one year after their chūnin exam, and his confession. And got married nearly two years after that. (Their relationship wasn't a secret for some people, because both used to act like an old married couple, or something like that, but none of them both was aware of it... they were stupid... )

• Izumo ; She became close to him when she was young and she even use to have a crush on him when she was young, before meeting Akinori (her husband didn't know about that, and she don't want to tell him yet). They are now really close and he is one of those she is the closer to, she even tell him nearly everything, and he does too. He was the first one to know about her feeling towards Akinori (before herself too) and with Kotetsu, they tried to make them become a couple.

• Yoshino : She and Yoshino are friend since she started to date Akinori. She was panicking about what to do when she was in the park and Yoshink was here, so she helped her. They became friends and even best friends. Their children, Naruto and Akisa are friends with her son, Shikamaru. She and her husband were never mean to Naruto and they were kind towards him. Akinori think it was because they are more intelligent than the other stupid donkeys other are.

• Kotetsu : This boy is always with Izumo si it was natural she is friend with him (you cannot be friend with one and not with the other, or t least, be a bit friendly with one) Well, he is not really a best friend, but a great great friend. Actually, Masako always think that his relationship with Izumo is quite strange, but she didn't ask and she didn't talk about it with her husband, because Akinori is not obvious and he certainly will ask them, and she didn't want it. She want them to talk or officialise it themselves and she might be wrong.

• Gai : People were always thinking they were together, but truth is. No. Both can't get together. Gai and her are friend and he always try to make her move or react like he did with Kakashi when they were young. He didn't have a crush on her, at least, that's what he said. She love his determination.

• Ebisu : At first Ebisu seems to be a very dislikeable person, while, when you know him and earn his trust, you will know that no. Both are good friends and she genuinely appreciate him, even if he have a really bad sense of humour. He is rude, especially towards troublemakers, but he values courage and the fire will, and she knows that he will always help those in need. (He don't hate Naruto because if Kyuubi but because he is a troublemaker)

• Mikoto : Her relationship with her is quite strange as when they didn't have same age and Mikoto was an Uchiha and they tends to not really befriend other people. But, both have a newly similar personalities and they became friends when they were older. Mikoto was a really good friend with Kushina and she became friend with Masako as well. Both have a lot in communication, and one of it is their love for their families. When Mikoto died, Masako was devastated.

• Danzo : As an Ambu, she meet Danzo, and her first impression about him, before anything happen, was that she don't have a good feeling about him. After a while, she hated him, he is evil and manipulative and only care about himself first, then the village, then human lives and she don't like that. She say that he is able to start a wr just for his sake and she HATES people that are like this.

• Koharu and Homura : Even listening to their names make her angry. She respected them when she was young, but after the Kyunnbi's attack, they wanted to use naruto as a weapon, and were against them raising him, which make them see how she is like Kushina when angry.

• Naruto : He is her little fox as she call him. She really love him like her son and she love when he shows similarities with his parents and to Akinori and herself. She love him but need to punish him when he do bad, as always but she always try to comfort him as well and she need to do it often, because of the hate he receive from other people. She find his sexy Jutsu funny, but try not to show it.

• Genkei : She is the very first person to accept him as he really is and she is really close with him as he is a part of her family, not like a son, but like a brother. She always make fun of him, in a funny way, and she laugh when he pout before he laugh as well. She is like his big sister, and she love to treat him like a little boy, which annoys him more. She is his confident.

• Akisa : Her daughter. Her Princesse. She love her a lot and is a bit protective towards her, not like her father but still. Her daughter is like her husband, Akinori, but have something from herself. She spoil her, as well as her other children and Naruto and Genkei and other children as well, a lot but she still can be severe when need to.

• Okemia : She used to hate her, when they were a new team and she didn't know why, but he hates her as she hated or was angry at Akinori (it was jealousy, but she didn't knew that) until she accept her feeling. Then it was worst. They didn't talk with each other even if their sensei asked them to be friends. They start to be friends when Okemia told her that she is not in love with her husband-to-be... Which makes Masako kick her before asking for forgiveness. After that they became good friends as well.

• Iruka : She think this boy is an angel. He is really sweet and she appreciate him a lot. She and him along with Akinori go through the same thing, Naruto and Akisa being troublemakers (plus Genkei), but they love them. She appreciates when he come to their house and she also love how he is sweet with everyone.

I couldn't stop reading the relations till the very end and I have to say they go pretty good with her. Not to mention each character has a relationship with her being good and bad. She has her enemies, friends, etc. Good job.

Other ;

- I didn't make anything about her teammates like I did with An original because she was never a sensei, she was an Ambulance before her leave.
- Sorry if you find errors and typos, my phone will erase a lot of my text parties if I try to correct these kind of errors, which is annoying !
- My first language is French, so sorry if there are a lot of mistakes.

It is no problem, I am very lenient when it comes to mistakes regardless of the language because no one makes a perfect paragraph without one mistake. Not even authors. They have tons of mistakes in their reading that goes from the draft and edited for more than a month sometimes. Believe me when I say I don't mind your mistakes, we all make them.
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Final Analysis- This OC is good and has little to work on if anything. Just like with your first OC the dedication and the effort put in them shined as I read this and gave feedback. The flaws and strengths were great. Thank you for letting me review your OC. It was a honor.
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