OC 113 (Katsu Domen)

This OC is by CoffeeFrame I hope you like it.
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Name: Katsu Domen 


Nice name


Gender: Male


Nice


Age: 11-12 in part 1
Shippuden: 14-15
The Last: 18-19
Boruto: 32-33


Oh so a year younger


Family: Sora Hino (Mother, Deceased), Eto Domen (Father, Alive ), Nashi Domen(Younger Sister, Alive),Shoko Domen (2nd Oldest Sister, Alive)


Thanks for the family relationship and life status.


Appearance:
1st Part: Curly Shoulder Length Mint Colored Hair, Gold Colored Eyes, Very Pale, Petite Feminine body structure, 5'0 in height. Wore black cargo pants, a white sleeveless shirt with his clan cress engraved on the back, a long sleeved mesh shirt underneath, with the usual dark blue sandals, and wore his Konoha forehead protector on his left thigh
Shippuden: Hair grows a bit past the shoulders, grew 2 inches and gained 2 pounds, removed mesh shirt
The Last: Hair grew more to his back and is now in a low bun, grew 1 inch, still the same
Boruto: Hair grew out all the way to the floor so he put it in a high messy bun, wears same clothes


These are all really good looks for him. Great description skills.


Personality: Katsu is a very quiet person but can be straight forward when talked to,not minding if they offend you


Nice, it's pretty different to have a rude OC


Battle:Medic-Nin


Oh nice


Jutsus:Shadow Clone(Academy)
Transformation(Academy)
Yang Release
Mystical Palm
Chakra Scalpel
Medical mode
Healing resuscitation regeneration


Nice


Past: Even as a kid Katsu was more interested in healing then anything else, he would be often caught helping aid his siblings when they got some injury from falling or training. At this time it was only him and his two older sisters, mother was still alive and Katsu and his father still had a good relationship. But when Nashi was born Sora died after birth, this made Eto distant and cold and this put a strain on his and Katsu's relationship because even tho he wouldn't admit it he blamed Nashi for Sora's death and Katsu knew from the look in Etos eyes. A year before Katsu entered the academy he decided right then and there that he would be a medical-nin.


This is very good, it's short, sweet, and to the point, great job.


Friends: Naruto, Kiba, Choji
Acquaintances: Sasuke
Bestfriends: Hinata, Shino, and Shikamaru
Old Crush:Kiba
Love Interest: Shikamaru


Very nice


Others:Afraid of Cats,Has Acrophobia


Cool
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Final Analysis- From what I got this OC is really good. It's short and to the point making it very easy to review and it's all spot on. I may not have a lot of information to go off of but what I have is good enough sense it gives me the important parts. Thank you so much for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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