OC 6 (Lilith Kānēshon)

This is by MisakeUchiha13
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Name: Lilith Kānēshon (Of the night, Carnation)


Cute name


Age: 14


Nice


Gender: Female


Cool


Family: Ikimono Kānēshon (sister that was adopted, 12), Ri Kānēshon (Mother, 38)


Cool


Appearance: Hair color- Long dark blue hair


Nice


Eye color- light blue


Cool


Skin tone- pale


Ok


Height- 5'3 Weight- 110 pounds


Nice height to weight ratio.


Clothing- White hoodie with no sleeves, black leggings, forehead protector on her forehead, black ninja sandals, and weapons pouch on left leg.


I have already talked about the leggings with your other OC so I won't repeat it again. Everything else is good though.


Personality- nice, sweet, polite, and she has a weakness of usually being carefree


Being carefree isn't exactly a weakness but it can be defined as a flaw.


Battle: Lilith stays out of the main battle usually and will cast genjutsu since she's good at it, since she lacks in taijutsu some and doesn't really like to be in the main fight unless necessary


Ok, nice.


Weapons: Kunai, smoke bombs, paper bombs, shuriken


These are good common ninja weapons.


Past: Lilith was born in the Leaf Village hospital, with her father unknown and her mother being Ri Kānēshon. Six years after Lilith was born, Ri Kānēshon met Ikimono and decided to adopt her. Lilith was excited since she'd have someone to play with and she'd be a big sister! As Lilith and Ikimono grew together they made a great bond with each other, they also went to the same class in the academy since Lilith couldn't decide if she wanted to go to the academy for two years.


Oh ok, that's a nice past and it isn't tragic. Good job.


Though, Lilith was always jealous of Ikimono because she was pretty good with tiejutsu, genjutsu, and ninjutsu so she would always try to push herself harder. That's all to Lilith's past, really. She had a pretty normal childhood.


It's good and different that she had a normal childhood. Good job.


Other: Lilith will usually be found alongside Ikimono in the trees since Lilith doesn't have too many friends and is quite attached to Ikimono.


Ok, cool.
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Final Analysis- I have really nothing to say about this OC. She is normal and has really nothing wrong with her. The only thing about her is the leggings. I would recommend the ninja tights or just regular pants for a ninja. It was a honor reviewing her and her sister. Thanks for choosing me to do it.

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