This OC is by NotSoClosetFujo I hope you like it.
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Key: O = Our universe
N = Naruto universe

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PERSONAL

Character's Full Name: Yoko Hinaga (陽永 瑛子) (I think this is the kanji translation, correct me if I’m wrong)
Meaning of name: Crystal child, Eternal sunlight, or if you want to make it sound better: Crystal child of the eternal sunlight

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Birthdate: April 13

Cool

Astrological Sign: Aries

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PHYSICAL APPEARANCE

Age:14

Ok

How old does s/he appear?: 12

Ok

Eye Color:
O: Brown,
N: Gold

Glasses or contacts?:
O: Contacts,
N: None

Hair color:
O: Brown,
N: Light purple

Typical hairstyle: down and pinned back or in a bun

Height: O: 5,7” N: 5’3”
Weight: O: 120 lbs N: 130 lbs

Type of body/build:
O: Lanky with little to no curves
N: Chubbier with s larger bust and hips

Nationality: Japanese/Korean

Skin tone:
O: Olive
N: Pale

Skin type:
O: Slight acne
N: Clear

Distinguishing Marks? Scars? Mole under lip

Most predominant feature: Tooth gap in the middle of her mouth

This goes for all the appearance above. It's really good, and thanks for giving me the key, it really helps.

Physical disabilities: Her stamina outside of the water is absolute crap, and she’s short to she doesn’t run very fast.

Great disability

Physical abilities (what is character good at? sports, etc.): She has very strong legs due to her being in the Kendo and Swimming clubs

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Wears:
O: School uniform
N: Long sleeved navy crop top with a long sleeved fishnet top underneath. Long shorts with pockets to conceal kunai/shuriken and thick bandages to prevent deep cuts. Standard ninja sandals
Headband placement: around neck

These are great outfits.

Chakra natures: Water and wind Clan: Hinaga
Kekkei Genkai: Crystal release. All female members of the Hinaga clan can learn this release

Nice, and thanks for including the members of the clan in the Kekkei Genkai.

ATTITUDE

Greatest fear: Drowning

The Irony, it's perfect

Worst thing that could happen to him/her?: one of her family members dying

What single event would most throw character's life in complete turmoil?: See above

Character is most at ease when: Floating in water, she likes to know she can still breathe

Most ill at ease when: in a wide open space, as she likes so be surrounded by friends

Priorities: Friends How s/he feels about self: Confident

Daredevil or cautious? Cautious, she wants to keep herself safe so she can save others

This is for all the above, these are all good and thanks for explaining on some of them.

PERSONALITY

Greatest source of strength in character's

personality: Her experience with her brother almost drowning. It made her a very protective and clingy person. She always wants to make sure everybody is ok Greatest source of weakness in character's

personality: She is very easily taken advantage of, and can almost never see it

Character's soft spot: Cute things and people in need

Is this soft spot obvious to others? Yes

Which of the 7 deadly sins does character have?: Envy

Which of the 7 virtues does your character have?: kindness (I know this contrasts, but her envy is 100% unwilling)

She has a nice personality and the way it changes from universe to universe gives it a little more excitement sense it's like following two characters.

TRAITS

Optimist or pessimist? Optimist Introvert or extrovert? Extrovert
Drives and motivations? The safety of others Talents (hidden or not)?

Swimming and singing Extremely skilled at: ninjitsu, chakra strings

Extremely unskilled at: taijutsu

Good characteristics: kind, protective, intelligent, self-aware

Character flaws: clingy, over excited, judgemental (inwardly)

Mannerisms: tapping fingers and bouncing legs

Great traits and the flaws are great to thanks for actually having some.

PROBLEMS/CRISIS

How character react in a crisis?: Usually panics slightly, but if a dire situation, she loses all rational thought and freezes

How does character face problems? Facing them head on, for better or worse

These are nice

FAVORITES

Color: purple

Music: Violin, Celtic folk

Food: Cheesecake Literature: Manga, Fantasy

Expressions: “shut your face”

Mode of transportation: bicycle

Her favorites are good

HABITS

Worst bad habit?: Biting nails

Quirks: She often taps her fingers on surfaces or bounces her leg to expel excess energy, as well as judging people in her head but yelling at herself for judging people

Great job showing her habits.

BACKGROUND

Hometown: Kyoto, Japan

Type of childhood: her family is fairly well off and able to provide for basic needs with some extra money

First memory: learning how to swim with her mother Most important childhood event that still affects him/her: When she was 11, she saved her 6 year old brother from drowning

Why?: She almost lost her little brother

education: high school

Booksmart or streetsmart?: Booksmart

Religion: Buddhist (very slightly)

Thanks for the background, it's interesting.

FAMILY

Mother:
O: Misaki Hitomi
N: Unknown (both alive)
Relationship with her:
O: close
N: Unknown
Father (name):
O: Yuuto Hitomi
N: Unknown (both alive)
Relationship with him:
O: Close
N: Unknown
Siblings:
O: Sister: Risa Hitomi
Brother: Reo Hitomi (both alive)

Birth order: Yoko, Risa, Reo

Relationship with each: very close

Thanks for the relationships and life status of the members.

GENERAL

Jewelry? Hair pins, charm bracelet Where does character live? Konoha With anyone?No

Most prized possession: hairpins

Why?: She recurved them from her now deceased grandmother on her 3rd birthday

Does character like animals?: yes Any pets?: A black and white cat named Leo

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Final Analysis- This OC is really good and is ready for a story. I really have nothing to say because she's fine the way she is. You gave information of her in the Naruto world and the Real world.  I know her book is up and I plan on reading it, thank you for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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