This OC is by MicroBurstPlayz I hope you like it.
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So uh this is for your Naruto OC Reviews... yeah if you're still doing them. First of all, I would like to get some stuff out of the way. This world is an AU where nothing went wrong. Co Uchiha Massacre, the Yondaime is alive, and there is no Madara problem later on.

Ok thanks for clearing that up

Use: Fanfiction which I am currently writing.

Ok

Name: Yamata Chinoike

Nice name

Meaning: Yamata comes from the Yamata no Orochi a Japanese mythology figure which was essentially a hydra. Chinoike is a filler clan in the anime so I wanted to explore them.

Very interesting and the fact thatit's a filler clan makes it even cooler. Good job

Family Relations: En Oyashiro (Father), Chino Oyashiro, Mother Unkown Yamata had a neutral relation to his father, one where he was fed and Yamata did not bother his father. Chino was very young before Yamata was left and sickly due to her information overload from being a chakra sensor making it no much like a family more like a group of people with linked connections.

Very interesting and thanks for the family relations.

Past: Yamata grew up with his family on a trip, due to the Chinoikes killing each other in a civil war. En (Father) was the one to kill a lot of the Chinoikes but felt very guilty about it. So he left with his kids and told his son who experienced amnesia from a stray blunt kunai hitting him in the head and his newborn daughter that he was a keekei genkai collector who killed their entire clan

Ok

Looks: Beige hair which in pre-timeskip is similar to Narutos haircut but after timeskip is slicked back. Violet eyes and pale skin colour. Yamata isn't a bodybuilder his body is very lean but not underweight.

Ok

Age: Pre-timeskip- 11 Post-time skip- 14

So he's much pretty young for them.

Teammates: Naruto Namikaze, Sasuke Uchiha, Kakashi Hatake. I would just like to preface this by saying I don't hate Sakura, she will still be in my story, but the backstory is that with rising tensions between the ninja villages Minato put together a prodigy team full of three prodigies as a show for strength to try and ease tension.

I know it's a fanfiction but sense when does the Hokage put together teams? Especially genin teams. They go off of test scores as genins but not someone picks them. Now I can see them becoming a team at Chunin but not genin for the reason that just cause Minato is alive that he gets to pick the teams. Two other things also bothers this. How would the homage know he's a prodigy? And just because Naruto is his son doesn't mean he's one either I mean he was dead last. Another thing is that he is younger, if he were to make a prodigy team than it would be Sasuke, Shikamaru, and Neji but using this excuse is just not right. Not to mention he shouldn't even be in their class sense he's a year younger so I don't know what to say to that. You already wrote the fanfic so I can't just say change it but a better idea would be to have started off with a 4 man time being Him, Sasuke, and Naruto, letting Minato see that they are a good team have Sakura go into medical Jutsus early and have the three boys be a team while she becomes Tsunade's student that way you have her doing something which would please the Sakura fans and you still get your team. Than if it's a hard mission where you know they will get injured than she can just come heal. That's would I suggest but it's your story so do what you want.

Chakra Natures: Lightning (affinity), Yin, Fire

Nice

Pre-Timskip Jutsu: Chidori, Ketsuryugan: Genjutsu, Lightning Release: Lightning Bolt, Lightning Release: Groundwave, Lightning Release: Lightning Wall, Lightning release: Lightning Clone, Blood Circulation Readjustment Post-Timeskip Jutsu: Everything above + Chidori Senbon, Chidori Kunai, Chidori Shuriken.
Fire Release: Fireball, Ho-musubi, Great Fire Lightning Flash, Fire Release: Phoenix Flame, Blood Dragon Ascension, Blood Wave. Summoning Jutsu: Woodpecker.

Ok

Some custom Jutsu explanations: Groundwave is just discharging lightning chakra into the ground, Genjutsu is kekkei genkai which will be explained later. Blood Circulation Adjustment is use of kekkei genkai to either stop someone's blood circulating or speed it up. Ho-musubi is Yamatas first ultimate technique where he brings storms in with Lightning Release to create powerful winds then pumps Fire Chakra and Lightning Chakra into the winds. Blood Dragon Ascension is the second ultimate technique where he uses blood or iron-rich water to build a construct of the substance to make an eight-headed dragon like the Yamata no Orochi his namesake. Blood Wave sending high iron water or blood in a wave.

Good

Kekkei Genkai: A dojutsu originating from the Chinoike clan in the Land of Lightning. It is said to have Genjutsu equal to the Sharingan and control over high iron liquids (blood and iron-rich water)

Ok but don't make me as strong with genjustsu as the sharringan.

Weakness: Overexertion leads to painful cramps leading up to complete muscle lock making it so the Chinoike cannot move.

Good drawback

Clothes:
Ninja attire- Ninja pants in dark grey with a kimono top which is a dark grey and white accents. Kunai pouches on both sides which are reduced to one after timeskip. Headband tied around his neck and the thing Tobirama and Yamato wear on their face. Closed-toe sandals Post timeskip- Wearing chunnin vest over kimono top. Pouch with medical supplies tied to the back of his waist.
War attire: Standard war attire (essentially the same thing as Sakura)

Good

Apparently, I forgot the rest of his past to here is the rest: One day after visiting doctors for Chino they set up camp. But after waking up his father or sister were just gone no sight of anything left. He still doesn't know what happened.

Don't worry, it's good.
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Final Analysis- This OC is ok and I bet the story is good. I don't know how far you are in your story by now but I would suggest if you are not that far to think over my suggestion. In the end it's your story and you can do whatever you want but I would still consider it. Especially sense the whole Minato chose them thing doesn't sit well. When you get a team of kids you don't get to choose who you want unless they trying out you get what you take so I would really suggest making a team of 4 to start than having Sakura go into medical jutsu full time. Other than that this OC and the story is really good. Thank you so much for letting me review your OC. It was a honor.
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