This OC is by -misshatake I hope you like it. One thing I also must say is that this author has her own Naruto OC reviews up and is taking requests. I had her review a OC of mine and she did a amazing job. Check her reviews out as well to see how mine and hers differ.
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Genre : Naruto Roleplay

Oh ok

Last Name : Haruno ( Senju ) .
First Name : Ai - ( 愛 ) - literally meaning ' love ' .

Nice name, i wait to see this Haruno but Senju thing.

Gender : Female

Nice

Sexuality : Bisexual

Cool

Love Interest :
[ Age 12-13 ] - Inuzuka Kiba ( were not a couple ) .
[ Age 14 ] - Brief feelings towards Yamanaka Ino ( were not a couple ) , later on it was Hyūga Neji ( were a couple for two years ) .
[ Age 16 ] - Still hung up on Hyūga Neji
[ Age 17-18 ] - Hatake Kakashi ( mutual feelings , were a secret couple until she was old enough so they both can announce their relationship to everyone ) .

Interesting I wonder how this went.

Family :
[ Mother ] - Haruno Aina ( deceased ) .
[ Father ] - Senju Chōei ( deceased ) .
[ Younger Brother ] - Haruno / Senju Eiji ( alive ) .
[ Cousin ] - Haruno Sakura ( alive ) .
[ Aunt ] - Haruno Mebuki ( alive ) .
[ Uncle ] - Haruno Kizashi ( alive ) .

So who exactly is the senju in this family? The mother or father is related to Sakura's father seeing as she is Ai's cousin but her younger brother is a senju while both of the parents are Harunos. So who is the senju to give her and her little brother this name? One of the parents have to be.

Age :
[ Part 1 ] - 12 - 13
[ Part 2 ] - 16 - 17
[ The Last ] - 19
[ Boruto ] - 32 - N/A

So the Naruto group's age.

Personality : Ai appears to be a very sweet and caring girl , somewhat shy and can't always speak her mind . Easily flustered , not to mention a bit short tempered . Can accidentally come off as rude because she can't always pick the right words to say in a certain situation .

Wait so she's shy, short tempered, and can come off rude. Sounds like Sakura, Hinata, and Neji mixed into one. Mainly a Hinata, I can understand her being shy but getting mad doesn't mean she has to be short tempered. Coming off as a accidentally rude is alright but being short tempered and shy does not go together at all. Getting mad is one thing but she sounds like another Hinata and I don't remember seeing Hinata lose her temper as with Sakura with a short temper I don't ever remember her being shy, but I have seen them both flustered.

Beneath all of that , when provoked , Ai can be intimidating , obsessive and even bloodthirsty . She can go from cute to psycho in a matter of seconds , which scares . Only the closest to her know of her true personality , and you could say she is a bit yandere . . .

Not trying to sounds mean but this is the biggest cliche in the book. Cute but bloodthirsty when provoked. Too many OC have this trait to the point where it's annoying. Not to mention most yandere but hide their killer side they let it show. To many OCs have been given to much hate from this cliche because it's so overused in Female OCs. I would suggest picking either shy or killing because having both without a good reason isn't good. For instance another suggestion if you can't choose is a trigger that happens that makes her switch to being a killer back to shy, such as when launch from dragon ball z sneezes she changes and have a different hair color or Toko Fukawa from Danganronpa when she passes out and brings out her murder side. Other than that I would choose one and stick with it but it's just a suggestion.

Kekkei Genkai : Wood Release ( finds out she has at the age of 13 , but will only manage to handle it when Yamato comes around . Will learn to use it well enough to engage in battle at the age of 14-15 , but will not surpass her teacher anytime soon . )

It's nice that she has Yamato to teach her because that's the perfect teacher for wood.

Kekkei Genkai Abilities : At its simplest, Wood Release allows the user to create wood, essentially converting their chakra into a source of life before, at it greatest, becoming mighty trees of various size and shape. The vegetation can sprout from the user's body or grow from the surroundings .

Nice but is there a limit, flaw, weakness of some sort? The power is fine but it has no weakness.

Battle : Relies heavily on her ninjutsu , as well as wood style in the future . Is able to use her main , water , as well as earth release , her second nature . In the future she will be able to use all five basic elements ( like any other Jōnin , I did my research ( by the way , trying not to make her op ) ) and yin release . Is pretty good with taijutsu and mediocre with genjutsu , ninjutsu comes the best for her .
Doesn't use any special weapon , only the basics , such as shuriken , kunai , senbon , etcetera .

While it is true that some jounins can use all 5 that doesn't mean they can use them the moment they turn jounin. It takes years of training so it's best to just limit it. You don't want her to be labeled the avatar now, not to mention I can see you trying to not make her op so sense she relies on ninjustsu just don't use the yin release. If you give her everything than she's gonna be OP. For instance she has the 5 elements and Kekkei Genkai. Narrowing it down to about 3 while having a Kekkei Genkai is good but having her have all 5 along with being great at taijustsu already makes her sound OP. I'm not trying to be mean but after doing over 100 of these Naruto OC reviews it gets easier to take these OCs apart.

Rank :
[ Age 12 ] - Genin
[ Age 13 ] - Chūnin ( passes the exam after a second try )
[ Age 14 ] - Chūnin ( prepares to take on the Jōnin exams ( with the recommendation of Hatake Kakashi , Morino Ibiki and Mitarashi Anko )
[ Age 15 ] - Chūnin ( fails the exams , but doesn't give up . Signed up for a second try , and passes . )
[ Age 16 ] - Jōnin .
[ Age 18 ] - Seasoned / Tokūbetsu Jōnin , joins the ANBU for a couple of months .
[ Age 19 ] - Tōkubetsu Jōnin /

These are pretty good but she beat Sakura, Hinata, Ino, Shiakmaru, Kiba, Lee, and almost the whole rookie 9 at being Jounin? Neji we all know is the only jounin at 17 so did none of the others sign up while she did? I am waiting to see how she got a recommendation from Kakashi and not her sensei.

ANBUAppearance :
[ Part 1 ] -
Ai is an average height and weight , has long chocolate brown hair that she usually keeps in a bun , leaving bangs to frame her heart shaped face , and narrowed onyx black eyes . Fair skin . Small waist , wide hips , and an average chest , if not on the smaller side .

So this her look when she is 18? Nice

Wears a Chinese styled dark green sleeveless skin tight crop top with golden edges and black patterns that ends just below her chest , accompanied by a pair of black baggy pants which hang loosely on her hips and are held together by a single chain . Underneath , bandages are wrapped around her torso , going from her chest all the way to her knees . Her hitai ate is tied around her forehead .Ai wears a pair of forest green fingerless gloves , which are a shade lighter than her crop top . And lastly , a pair of green shinobi sandals , same color as her gloves .
Some of her friends like to tease her by calling her a walking tree .

How does she look like a tree? Because she's wearing black and green? Only her footwear and her gloves are green while the rest of her outfit is black and gold so seeing how she's called a tree isn't logical unless he's wearing camouflage. Besides the fact that trees are brown but looking at someone with this outfit just doesn't fit the description of a tree even though it's of great detail. That's like saying Naruto is a Orange because his orange jumpsuit or Lee is a Leaf due to his all green outfit.

[ Part 2 ] -
Ai grew taller , now standing at 167 cm . Her hair grew out , and now swept past her elbows . She started wearing it in a low ponytail , still leaving bangs to frame her face and her hitai ate still tied around her forehead .

Wait, so the above isn't her anbu appearance. I'm going to treat this as her ages of 12 and 16 because of the part 1 and 2 thing though it says anbu but either way good on how she grew.

Ai now wears a long sleeved kimono that ends mid thigh , is dark green with golden edges . Black dragon patterns are displayed on the back of her kimono , and it is held together by a golden obi . Her chest area is open , but is covered by bandages . Ai wears black shorts that end at her mid thigh , which aren't really noticeable unless she is in a fight . Bandages are also wrapped around her legs knee high , and she kept the same shoes , dark green ninja sandals , as well as dark green fingerless gloves .

Why she is wearing so many bandages? Is she injured in anyway? What cup size is she to the point where she wants to show it but still use bandages to cover it? These are questions that need answers.

Past :
Right after giving birth to her second child , Haruno Aina passed away . Chōei was left to take care of two kids , while simultaneously being an active shinobi . He was captured by an Akatsuki member , Kakuzu , while on a mission , and brought to the base . After that no one heard of him . Aina and her little brother were brought to the orphanage , where they stayed for two months before the Hokage informed a certain Haruno couple of their family . They took in the two , but until Ai was six , she had no idea where her mother and father were . After finding out about her mother's death and the disappearance of her fathers , she was set to find Kakuzu and beat the crap out of him , as well as find out where her father was .

So she didn't know about her mother's death? She does know that she's a orphan for a reason right? Neither of her parents can take care of her? Not to mention this still doesn't explain how she's a senju along with her brother. They had Haruno parents so where did Senju come in, I can see the whole Kakuzu kidnapping her father thing but the rest just makes no sense. It states no reason why she's a senju.

Relationship with characters :

[ Haruno / Senju Eiji ] -
Ai's little brother . She cares deeply for him , and isn't afraid to go yandere on anyone who tries anything weird . She likes to tease him sometimes , and is overprotective of him . Ai doesn't want any girls around him anytime soon , that's for sure .

Like a big sister shoulder be to her little brother, I don't see anything wrong with this. Now that I think about it how is a shy girl like her teasing him like a happy go getter? Not to mention is she can be yandere anytime than what's the point of her being shy?

[ Haruno Sakura ] -
Sakura is like the sister she never had . She's also included into her list of important people , and is also overprotective of her . Although she felt a bit lonely after the rosette started crushing on the Uchiha , she was happy for Sakura . Though she still didn't approve of the boy because of how he treated the girl .

Cool and it's to see the OC that's related to Sakura be nice to her for a change.

[ Uchiha Sasuke ] -
Ai doesn't really like the guy that much , especially after he left Sakura on a bench after leaving the village . They never spoke much in the first place . After Sasuke and Sakura got married though , Ai was very much happy for them , and even started to somewhat warm up to the man after seeing how much he changed .

Nice

[ Uzumaki Naruto ] -
Ai was always nice to the blonde , but then again , she was nice to almost anyone . It was safe to say they were friends , and he had her trust . Not to mention he knows of her yandere side , having experienced it on himself a couple of times . Having Naruto by her side was somewhat beneficial as well , since in times of depression he has helped her a lot , as well as motivated her to learn Wood style after she almost gave up when comparing herself to the first Hokage ( he kinda dissed her as well because , well , Hashirama the first Hokage and Ai the Chūnin ? She had plenty of time . )

I can see the last part but is this yandere side any secret? It seems like almost everyone knows about her yandere side. Also when and how did Naruto experience it? Did she try to kill him? What did he do?

[ Yamanaka Ino ] -
There was a certain period of time when the Senju had an undeniable crush on the blonde , but it wasn't for long . Ino never knew , and they were good friends . Although her attitude sometimes annoyed Ai to the point she wanted to go psycho on the Yamanaka , she held back thinking Ino might not want to be her friend .

So she didn't use her yandere side because she didn't want to lose a friend? But she used it on Naruto and he's still her friend? Senju part I'll get to later.

[ Akimichi Chōuji ] -
They never really spoke much until Shippuden , and he was one of her friends . With him she would never die of starvation , that's for sure . She liked being around him and his team since the sensei often offered to pay for their meal .

So she was mainly around Choji so she can get free food from Asuma?

[ Nara Shikamaru ] -
They barely spoke during the academy , but became better friends in Shippuden , just like with Chōuji . He's the guy she always wanted to smack for slacking or ignoring her , and she did sometimes , but that didn't change his attitude so she eventually gave up .

I doubt she Is shy now, she's slapping and acting completely different from how her personality describes her.

[ Hyūga Hinata ] -
The girl she would sometimes see on clan meetings . She tried to befriend her , but Hinata was a bit too shy . Ai gave up , but would often tease her about her obvious crush on the Uzumaki . She couldn't help it , she just loved to see the Hyūga's reactions sometimes .

Now I am definitely sure she ain't shy. She's supposed to be shy like Hinata but somehow Hinata is too shy to be her friend? Not to mention how is shy teasing shy she sounds like she has Ino's personality and not the one described because nothing shows her being shy as she is claimed to be.

[ Inuzuka Kiba ] -
Ai had a crush on him for quite a while , but the only thing she really liked about him was his bad boy attitude and appearance . The Senju confesses to him a couple of times , but Kiba completely ignored the girl because he wasn't sure what to say . She gave up on him after quite a while .

Ok sense when do the shy people confess their love and yes Hinata confessed her after 10 years than other 5 or 6 with Sakura's help but this one did it a couple times not even indicating that she is shy what so ever.

[ Aburame Shino ] -
Ai found him really weird . They never spoke much anyway . But she wasn't really disgusted by his kikachu , so that was something .

Most people forget about Shino so it's actually good to see he's included.

[ Hyūga Neji ] -
They've dated for a solid two years until breaking up . Things weren't working out , he'd say , and she would simply smile . Ai was pretty hung up on the guy for quite a while until she recovered from the heart break . Things have been awkward between them ever since their breakup . The reason Neji actually fell for her is because she put up with his personality , saw the real him and even though she could never understand what he's been through , she's been there for him . A down to earth girl is what he needed , a shame he broke it off .

This is pretty good, but what made them break up? If she and him were down to earth than why break them up? She liked him and he fell for him for understanding him so what on earth can possibly make them have complicated feelings to which they weren't working?

[ TenTen ] -
TenTen was someone Ai hated with a burning passion . She knew she had nothing to hate her for , but she did . Maybe it was because she was around Neji all the time , Ai didn't really know . The Senju would avoid interacting with the girl for her own good .

For her or Tenten's own good? Why is she so jealous? Doesn't she not trust Neji around Tenten? Usually there's more than just one reason why a OC hates a canon character? Some common is that the creator of the OC hates Tenten I seen it to many times with Sakura, Sasuke, Hinata, and more so It wouldn't surprise me. Plus I thought she was supposed to be nice to everyone?

[ Rock Lee ] -
He's weird , and his eyebrows gave Ai nightmares for years . She was tempted to pluck them out one time , but Lee managed run away from her in time . His determination and stamina impressed her , and for a while she ran early morning laps with him until she was too tired and decided she was good to go .

That's it, cause he's weird? Not to mean this doesn't really show her nice, or shy personality.

[ Hatake Kakashi ] -
Her future husband . The age difference was drastic , and even after turning eighteen Ai was a bit scared to tell her friends . Though , they reacted positively . How they got together ? Well , Ai would train with Yamato quite often , and would sometimes run into Kakashi . She caught feelings fast after hanging out in the same friend group as him . She was scared to confess , and when she did , he just laughed and ruffled her hair , calling her feelings ' puppy love ' . It took a long time for him to fall for her , but with Ai's determination , he eventually did .

This is cute but you claimed she was trained by Yamato and met Kakashi, if my knowledge is correct Yamato started training her at about 14 but Yamato didn't get in the show till Shippudden so how can she have met Kakashi when Yamato wasn't in leaf, and sense she would be hanging with Kakshi's friend group she would be hanging out with other sensei's and adults and why would they hang out with a girl under 18. 18 I can understand she is of age but before that why she with these grown men and women? These questions need answers.

Other :
Ai , even if she may not seem like that , is extremely perverted and would stare at Kakashi's booty for days .

Though i am glad to see a female pervert sense not many are out there in anime how on earth does that match to her personality at all? She is supposed to be shy? Or a little hot tempered? So how is she a extreme pervert and is only peeping on Kakashi at that?
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Final Analysis- There is just so many things that I have questions too. This OC jas great potential but also has so many holes in her development and spots that need to get fixed. One thing is the personality. She is said by you to be one way and acts completely different. She isn't shy at all, she isn't exactly hot tempered and I fail to see how having a yandere side to her adds to her personality. It's like it was just sprankled in at the last moment. Now her yandere side should obviously have more to it but so far it's almost nothing. She doesn't have a trigger, She doesn't have a reason why she's a yandere, she's just one for no reason. It's barely amputated in her relations with characters. The thing is her appearance, it clearly says anbu but proceeds to talk about her in part 1 and 2 to the point where I didn't know what I was reviewing, it made no sense. The next thing is her power. It's no problem having a Kekkei Genkai and 2 or 3 elements but having all 5 with a kekkei Genkai and good taijustsu is really extreme. I would suggest lowering down to 2 or 3 if your gonna have a Kekkei Genkai that is very powerful which by the way also needs flaws. I can see that it is powerful and is great but it needs weaknesses and flaws in it or it's just a op move for no reasons, the jounin thing is fine but now I'm on to her relationship with characters. Her and Neji was working out so well so what's the point of breaking them up? They fell for each other and cared for each other so why break them up? Next how can she not be friends with the shy Hinata when she is supposed to be 'shy' herself? It just makes no sense for such a thing. Next is Tenten who didn't do anything wrong, I never heard of someone just looking at someone and being like "I hate you" and how are you so sure that she can beat up Tenten? The next one is Lee but many people do what you do to him so I'm gonna skip that but Kakashi is the big one. Now I'm not gonna sit here and say I never seen one date someone years younger than them when the United states president's wife is 30 years younger than him if not more, that's not the problem. The problem is that you had her who was not over 18 hang out with adults and none of them question it. Most people her age and hanging out with others older than them talk about business unless the older one knew the family or they taught them. I'm not gonna address Yamato because that would be to much, now one of the last things but is the biggest thing is the fact that she's a senju. There is literally no trace of her being a senju so why is she labeled that? Both her parents are Haruno's, she is adopted into the Haruno family, so why on earth is she labeled Senju along with her brother. If the only reason for her being a senju is so she can have that wood Kekkei Genkai than change it. Make her a Senju, change her relations to Sakura, or better yet start over. There are to many things that need to be fixed with her and I am willing to help for there is no reason why she should have the name Senju when she is clearly a Haruno. All of this isn't because the OC the bad it's because the OC needs work and I am ready to help you with her. If you want to talk about this review than please message me. I just want to help make her the best OC she can be. Thank you for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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