OC 88 (Kai Ryu)

This OC is also by Flammenstern I hope you like it.
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Name: Kai Ryu


Nice name


Age:
Part 1: 16
Part 2: 20
The Last: 23
Boruto: 34


Oh a couple years old, nice


Gender: Male


Nice


Family: Naoko Ryu(father - deceased), Naomi Ryu(mother - deceased), Akina Ryu(little sister), Rin Ryu(little brother)


Thanks for the relationships.


Appearance:
Part 1: red short hair, light green eyes, red t-shirt with a black. Chunin-like jacket over it, black gloves(like Kakashi), black pants, black ninja boots, wears his forehead-protector around his forehead
Part 2: his hair grew a bit longer so it falls into his face covering his right eye a bit, rest stayed the same


This is really good, it's simple and stays the same. Great job.


Personality:
Part 1: can be stubborn if he really believes something or is really angry, doesn't talk about his feelings at all, it's hard for him to express his feelings, quiet as long as he doesn't have to talk, more open around his teammates, doesn't trust easily
Part 2: he stopped being so stubborn but sometimes can't help himself to act like that, is a little bit more open around others, learns to express his feelings with Misakis help, the rest stays the same


So he matured a bit from part 1 to 2. The change is slight but notable good job.


Battle Style: loves to use genjutsu but he doesn't use it often, because he's not too good at it. Instead he usually uses ninjutsu, because that's what he's best at. He tries to not use taijutsu because it takes up a lot of concentration for him. He tries improving his genjutsu, because he loves using it on his opponents.


This is a nice change. For once we see a OC that likes using genjutsu but can't. Awesome.


Jutsus:
Fire style: Dragon Breath(Genin years)
Fire style: Flame Capture(Chunin years)
Hidden Jutsu: Dragon Skin(Jonin years)
Hidden Jutsu: Companions(shortly before Jonin years) Basic fire style jutsus(Genin years) A few easy wind style jutsus(Chunin years) Dragon Illusion[a genjutsu that includes dragons, what generally happens is up to the user, the injuries the dragons cause are real] (Shippuden)


Great and good job using known jutsus and jutsus you made.


Relationship: Misaki Akuma


Nice


Clan Traits: red hair, light green or light blue eyes


Cool


Element Affinity:
Fire(1st),
Wind(2nd)


Nice and thanks for picking 2.


Ninja Rank:
Genin(11years)
Chunin(15 years)
Jonin(19 years)


Oh so he was able to graduate early too. Nice, not to mention the distance from promotions are good.


Past: Until he was six Kai experienced a normal life and he was raised by his mother and trained by his father. But once his little sister was born his mother was suddenly busy all the time and his father didn't have time for the family anymore. Kai tried his best to support his mother in the household and keep up his regular training session. A little while later his mother got his mother got his little brother and didn't pay attention to Kai at all. Kai started loosing his ability to express his emotions and smiled less. His father had also enrolled him in the villages academy, so he had no time to help his mother, having to study all the time. When he later found his parents corpses he had an emotional outbreak and promised himself to find his siblings and the lost clan members and to keep them safe. He kept on searching, after he went to Sunagakure.


He sounds like a very responsible and family oriented man. Nice


Trivia:
- he's the only one in his family with green eyes
- Akina is 6 years younger
- Rin is 10 years younger
- finishes creating his own genjutsu(Dragon Illusion) in his Jonin years and masters it in Shippuden
- loves his siblings even though they were the reason he got ignored
- got trained to fight blind, but isn't good at it at all
- His clan is rivaled with Misakis(that's why they fight a lot)
- determined to avenge the villages murder and kidnapping
- his father is one of the three leader of the village
- awakened his kekkei genkai, when he saw his parents corpses, for the first time(16 years old)
- had his kekkei genkai under control with 22


Great trivia.
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Final Analysis- This OC is really good and I have really nothing to say other than that. He is ready for anything you want to put him in. Thank you for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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