Hey guys today we have another update for a OC. I am really happy with the requests that I have been getting. I'm also thinking when i don't have requests I can do something else to make sure this book don't go down the drain. The Naruto rants was cause I needed to let it out. I have a couple ideas for what I'll do like a would you rather, rants, what if, a couple of things. But today we have a great OC to tackle so let's get started.
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Hi, so this is my OC in all her glory and info so take a look!

Alright let's get straight into it.

Genre: I created this OC because I wanted to write fanfictions focusing on her and do roleplays with my good friend on Discord. Ever since I created her, I wanted to get better at drawing in the Kishimoto style and that has been my main goal so far.

That's really cool. I want to read the fanfiction when it's done. Also there are people on here that Roleplay. I roleplay alot myself on anime animo and virtual space. I like how you want to learn Kishimoto's drawing style. I think it's pretty nice too. You have a good goal that can be accomplished with dedication.

Name: Yūka Ikehara (kanji: 池原 優花)

This is a very pretty name. I also likes how it has meaning to it. You chose a great name for her.

Age: Part one: 12-13/ Part two: 15-17/ The Last: 18-20/ Boruto: 30-34

Same age as the Naruto group. That is good.

Birthday: May 10th Taurus

Gender: Female

Family: Ikehara Shun (father - deceased) Ikehara Kimiko (mother - deceased) Ikehara Yuina (older sister - deceased)

Nice...well not nice that they are dead but nice that you told us their names, relationship with Yuka, and life status. Good job.

Appearance: Yūka has pale skin with a light pink undertone, with dark grey-ish purple eyes that are common amongst Ikeharas. Yūka has distinct pale lavender coloured hair that isn't as common amongst Ikeharas (most Ikeharas have dark coloured hair, purple, blue, even green!).

I like how you have her look like her clan. This is important. As I said in my rants it makes no sense to not look like the clan you were born from. However I also like how you made her look a little different with her hair color but still kept it in the range of the clan's hair color. Nothing is wrong here.

In Part one, Yūka had long hair that reached her lower back and wore a dark purple long sleeved of-the-shoulders crop top on top of a mesh tank top, with a matching skirt and normal dark green capris with the usual dark blue sandals and wore her Konoha Forehead protector around her waist.

This is a unique look. I can actually picture it. Not to mention she looks like ninja. To the people who don't think so, Ino has a slim but similar style in part 1. But it is not the same. I also like how you have the forehead protector around your waist. It makes her a little different than some people in her generation and different from some other OCs.

In Part two, her had already reached her lower thighs and wore a similar sleeveless dress that had a zipper on the front with a sleeved mesh shirt under it and she still wore her forehead protector around her waist but it was dark purple. She also wore long knee-high boots with grey capris. 

I like she still kept a few things from her genin years but what kind of dress is it? Is it long like the Mizukage's or is it kinda like Kushina's? Other than that that is really it here.

Personality: Since Yūka has Aspergers, she lacks empathy for others and has a calm exterior and is an introvert. She lacks the ability to read social cues and often doesn't listen when others tell her to stop mostly because she doesn't know. Although, Yūka can be independent, nonchalant, patient, tough, brave, resilient, respectful, initiative, and stubborn. Yūka can also be jealous, lazy, possessive, materialistic, egotistical (sometimes), cold, and overly intuitive.

This is new and I am proud of you for making her like this. She is very different from OCs and it adds to her Character. She is more realistic and relatable. This would make your readers love you more for not only being unique but thinking outside the box.

Abilities: 
Ninjutsu:
Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu

Water Style: Scolding Wave of Burns, Fury Style: Chakra Wave of Expulsion, Water Clone Armed Barrier, Water Style: Searing Water Supernova, Fury Style: Luminescent Chakra Spear

I like how there are jutsus that other people know like water dragon. She has a unique moveset with these jutsus. You did a great job with this here.

Genjutsu: 
Ochitsumate: Chakra Impalement
Ochitsumate: Sea of Deep Sorrows

These sound interesting. However what do they do? That's all I want to know unless your planning on making a fanfic with these in it.

Taijutsu: 
Kama Dance
Two Blades, Thousands of Hits
Imperial Dragon Uppercut
Imperial Dragon Talon Slash

These also sound interesting. However, like before what do they do? In this case what is she doing in this attack?

Rank: Academy Grad. Age: 12, Chūnin Prom. Age: Age 13, Jounin: Age 19

You have a nice time skip to Jounin with a great 6 year different. This makes her more believable. For if she was 16 only one person was a jounin at the time for the Naruto group.

Kekkei Genkai: Water, Fire, Yin Release, and Ochitsumate

This is nice. Fire, Water, and I believe the Ochisumate is her clan's? I like it. She doesn't have all the releases and elements because that would be Mary Sue.

Past: Yūka was born into the Ikehara clan of Konohagakure and was the youngest person in the Head compartment in her clan. At the young age 6 years old, she and the other young children of the Ikehara clan were put in the hands of their teacher, Yuzuki. Yuzuki heavily despised Yūka because of her quiet demeanour and because of her disorder. Yūka was treated differently from the others kids and her older sister was often yelled at for not doing the training right. That all changed when she started writing to Gaara, yes, you heard that right. She was Gaara's mystery pen pal. Suna wanted Gaara to not be violent and find a friend he couldn't harm in Suna, so the Ikehara clan put Yūka up to the task and she actually enjoyed it! She enjoyed writing to the boy even though she knew they could never meet in real life. The letters stopped coming 2 years after and Yūka grew worried for him, wondering if he had died. The academy and Yuzuki's training did Yūka well over the years and she soon grew to become a strong, and patient young girl.

This is a great past I really like it. Though, how did her family die? Also how did her and Gaara meet up again? What happened to Gaara? There is more to this past than what meets the eye. However, I do like how you explained how her and Gaara met. It is cute.

Relationships: Gaara (husband), Deidara (ex-boyfriend), Hanae (daughter), Hotaru (daughter), Yumma (son).

My only question is how did she meet Deidara? If he is in the Akatsuki and actually gets killed how did they meet and what made them like each other? Also what made them break up? How did her and Gaara fall in love to get married and have children? These are just questions that need answers to them. Other than that this OC is really good.

So yes, here is my OC and if you do end up giving feedback, I'm ready for your words!

I am grateful that you let me review this OC. I thank you.
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So guys I hope you liked it. I am always happy to review a OC and I hope you liked this OC review. Now for the final analysis.

Final Analysis- This OC is really good and is very interesting. Her personality really spoke to me the way a real person's would. I also loved her moves and how she was different with her clan than other people. However there are the questions that need answers like, how did her family die? It doesn't say how they died in the past so what is their story? How did she meet and fall in love with Deidara? How did her and Gaara meet up again? How did they fall in love? These are basic questions that need answers. Other than that this OC is one of the best I have seen. You did a wonderful job with her and should be proud.
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So again I hope you all enjoyed this OC review and I have another OC request that I will be getting to a little later. If you like this OC and want to read more about her than you should read her story by MissYukaNoJutsu Thanks for reading