OC Clan 4 (Arãma)

This OC Clan is by Misheru_Hatake and I hope you like it.
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-clan information-


Cool


Clan name: Arãma


Nice name.


Kanji:  台風


Nice it's beautiful.


Meaning: Minor Clan


Nice.


species: Human


Good


Clan Head: Arãma, Yuuto


Nice


Important/noble members:  Arãma Mayan (Female) Arãma Kyoto (Male) Arãma Shikhan (Male) Arãma Nikon (Male) Arãma Aline (Female) Arãma Rose (Female)


A great standing point for the leaders. It also shows the equality in genders by having the same number of each.


Political standing:  decently peaceful,  doesn't accept violence between clan members,  doesn't care for political matters much.


So they are like a causal type of clan that cares about what happens to them but not really much else. Nice.


Clan politics/goals: some stay away from a of it, but will take charge when needed  some enjoy getting involved.  Their goal is to stay at peace.


Nice, and peace is a something that many want to achieve so it's very relatable. Great job.


Allied clans: Uchiha (before massacre) Yamanaka, Hyuga


Nice and I like how it said before the massacre for the Uchiha clan. Also how their allies with canon clans makes it all the more interesting.


Hostile clans: Inuzuki


Interesting. I wonder what caused this to be.


Clan alliance: Hyuga


Cool


Clan location: Konohagakure, used to be in a forest.


Oh so they moved into Konoha. Nice.


Traits: -All Arãma's have pale skin but tan easily -have dark purple,  gray,  or black hair - blue eyes (any shade) -specialize in medical ninjutsu and genjutsu.


Nice, but what could cause the different hair colors? Is it a genetic thing or is it some type of requirement that needs to be met in order for them to have one of the three colored hair? Is there a reason behind the three different hair colors or origin to how it became these specific colors? These are just come questions that need answers.


Clan traditions: -A 4-day festival every 2 months that only Arãma's are able to go to but are loved to bring one person from outside the Arãma clan. -they burry their dead at their old settlement because it was their first settlement.


Those are some great traditions that can relate to some traditions followed today. Whether it's culture or religion the traditions fit perfectly. Great job.


Clan symbol: 



This is a beautiful symbol and I love how you actually gave me a picture. It's great to have and I can clearly see what the symbol is.


Clan specialty: Genjutsu Medical ninjutsu


Nice, I remember it also being stated above but thanks for verifying it.
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Final Analysis- This clan has little to nothing to actually work on. By little I just mean feeling out the questions that I have asked. This is a great clan and has a interesting take to it. It also has this fresh vibe to it which I like very much. It was a honor to review your clan and thanks for choosing me to do it.
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