OC Clan 9 (Suishou)

This OC clan is revision by SadiaRiaz4 I hope you re-like it.
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Clan Revision:


Name: Suishou


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Name Meaning: Crystal


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Clan Head:


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Naruto era: Suishou Byakuran
Boruto era: Suishou Hakuchou


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Common Traits:


In terms of appearance, the Suishou clan members have white hair with a tint of either blue or silver depending on genetics. They have blue or orange eyes although the latter is rare and a fair skin tone. They tend to wear white, traditional clothes when not on duty.


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In terms of personality, some common traits of the clan include politeness and respect. The members are usually soft-spoken and hard working.


This wouldn't be considered personality it would be considered traits. Either way it's really good.


Clan Politics: The clan is fairly neutral to everyone in the council. Most of the members have no interest in politics and those who do are only interested when it affects them or the village as a whole or if it is extremely important. They tend to make logical decision based on fact and psychology.


Nice, and it's great to see the political system.


Heirs/Heiresses: The heirs and heiresses aren't chosen on the basis of family but on the basis of who's the most suitable. The next in line could be anyone of any age or gender. Although this is considered strange by certain clans, the Suishou clan doesn't care about other people's opinions.


This is very unique from other clans. Awesome


Summoning Pact: Swans


Very cool and unique


Abilities: The clan has a few abilities some of which are given below:


They are able to bend water from bodies of any size and state. By condensing chakra, they can also convert it to ice and vice versa, although the former takes a lot of chakra. They can also bend water from mist and fog but cannot bend water vapors since they're too thin. They can either use this for fighting or for healing (the way I described the last time). To put it simply, they are like water benders with chakra. The chakra and control required for bending depends on the way its being used. For example, creating whips from water couldn't take much chakra since not much water is used but it will require D rank chakra control to keep the whips in place. Meanwhile, creating blades from ice would take a lot of chakra and control (until its done).Another ability of the clan is using gem stones. It is a type of fuinjutsu they acquired after learning a few things about the arts from the Uzumaki clan before its destruction. These can store chakra and are used depending on the type of the gem. Some are used for attacking while others are used for creating temporary shields and stuff. However, these take too much time to make and too little time to consume. Aside from this, however, the clan doesn't show much aptitude for the arts.


These are great, the abilities are amazing.


Main elements: The main elements of the clan are water and wind.


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History: Not much about the origin of the clan is known. However, they are thought to be descendants of the Uzumaki clan and by relation the Senju clan. This is supported by the fact that some of the Uzumaki knowledge of fuinjutsu was passed down to the Suishou clan and the fact that they can be traced down to the ruins of Uzu.


Nice, and the fact that their relations are to clans already related is perfect.


I cut down a few details that I'm not going to change. I hope I could clear some things up. Thanks for reviewing this clan again.


It was no problem. Thank you for letting me review it.
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Final Analysis- This Clan is really good and has a ton great traits and attributes. The only thing I would say is to change personality to traits. Other than that, this clan is good to go. Thanks for letting me review your OC clan, it was a honor.
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