OC rapid fire part 2 (Midori)

Remember when I said it is going to be like back to back reviews. Well I am keeping my word. I am doing everything I can to make these OC reviews great. Regardless I am giving time and effort and I am loving it. Yes, I did use a McDonald's reference. This OC is also by SadiaRiaz4 I hope you all like this one as well
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Name: Kimura Midori


A very cute name. I love jt.


Age:
- Part 1: 18
- Part 2: 22
- The Last: 25
- Boruto: 37


Oh nice, so I'm guessing she is around Itachi's age correct?


Gender: Female


Cool.


Family: Kimura Miyuki (little sister), Kimura Azumi (mother), Kimura Atsuya (father)


Oh the sister to Miyuki. I can't wait to read about this.


Appearance: Midori has golden eyes which glow in the dark. Her hair is dark brown and is usually tied in a small ponytail. She has small fangs and a slightly tanned skin. She has whisker marks on her face.


Cute, I remember reviewing Miyuki and their clan. So if anyone is confused Miyuki's and Modori's clan has these kinds of traits. I love how she has the clan traits as well.


- Part 1 and 2: In part 1 and 2, she wears a full sleeved black shirt underneath a dark green flak jacket, dark pants and boots. She wears a black forehead protector around her arm.


Nice, since she is already grown I expected the flax jacket. It shows her maturity. This is also simple to imagine. Great job.


- The Last: In the last, she wears her hair down, which reaches her shoulders. She keeps the same attire.


Nice nothing really different so my imagination and others don't have to go wild.


- Boruto: After retiring, she wears a casual attire consisting of a white kimono with pink petal design with white slippers.


Cute and mature for someone her age to wear after retiring. I think it's perfect for her.


Personality: Midori, like her clan, keeps her emotions under lock and key. However, she is shown to be headstrong and stubborn. She disregards what anyone says when making her decisions as shown when she became a ninja despite the elders' protests. She is serious and strict when it comes to training and her responsibilities as the clan heir. Despite this, she loves to spend as much time as she can with her sister and wishes to protect her. She is caring for her team and pays attention to their growth, both in skill and personality. She dislikes anything that endangers her team and tries to keep them out of danger. She hates chores and tries to get D rank missions as soon as possible. She is a good leader and is confident in her team. Still, she knows when to push them and when to leave them alone.


The way her personality is goes perfectly with her stubbornness and headstrong attitude. This is perfect for her and the way she acts towards the people she cares about goes great with stubborn. How she wants to protect her sister and team goes great with headstrong and stubborn.


In Boruto, she loosens up a lot after retiring to take care of the clan affairs. She is more playful and energetic than before and doesn't keep her emotions under lock and key. Despite this, she knows when to be strict and doesn't hesitate to set people straight. She retains her stubbornness and refusal to listen to others, especially if the clan elders suggest something she dislikes.


I love how she does loosen up but still keeps a mature stict side. It shows she can control her feelings and emotions at will like any adult should.


Battle: Her battle style is pretty well-rounded. Despite this, genjutsu is her weak forte due to lack of the required chakra control. Her taijutsu is unsurpassed by anyone who isn't Gai. Her ninjutsu, while not as strong as taijutsu, is still something to be taken seriously. She tries to improve her genjutsu but it is still weak as compared to her other skills.


I love seeing how she so strong in taijutsu and weak in genjutsu but even though she tries it doesn't work. This makes her more relatable. For instance, some people can be good at singing but just can't draw no matter how hard they try. It just means they have to try harder. This is exactly how she is. Great job.


Weapon: During her genin years, Midori started taking interest in weapons. 




Nice, I also added the picture. This is what I mean, I would put the picture in for things like weapons, clothing and  appearance.


Past: Midori was born in the Kimura clan of Konoha. Despite the clan elders wishes, she decided to become a ninja. As a child, she was considered a prodigy and managed to graduate early (not as early as Itachi though). She was teamed with Tsurugi Yuuichi and Akari Ryuuji. In the Third Shinobi World War, Ryuuji died, leaving his teammates devastated. It was through Yuuichi's help that she managed to get over it. She became a chunin at 17. She was worried about her sister and before the team placements, asked the Third to place Miyuki under her care as she knew her the best. After a lot of pleading, she was given a chance to prove herself and managed to become a jonin.


A great past for her. I also love how you put the third shinobi war in it. It brings more of her story into light. Also how she wants to take care of Miyuki and pleading not giving up, showed her stubbornness. Great job.


Relationship: None


Ok
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Now we are going straight into the final analysis.


Final Analysis- This OC is great and is amazing. She has great potential and the way she connects with her sister and her stubbornness towards events adds to her character. Another thing i see is that she is around the same age as Itachi which I have yet to see so great job in doing something different. All I can say now is I can't wait to read her story.
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I hope you liked this OC review. We have three more for you so buckle up them seat belts while I go grab some ice.

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