OC 74 (Tora Ken)

This is by kuronoushi1 I hope you like it.
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Genre: I read alot of fanfic, so I decided to make my own


Nice, I hope it goes well for you.


Name: Tora (Tiger) Ken(Blade)


Nice this is a good name.


Age: 14(Naruto)
18(Naruto shipudden)
21(The last)
39(boruto)


Nice, part of the Naruto group.


Gender: Female


Cool


Appearance: Tora has relatively long, black hair like most of her clan members. Hers is styled into twin pigtails as not to distract her during missions, training and such. Her eyes are red (which is a trait for every Ken clan members have).


Tora is often seen in a plain black shirt with the picture of square inscribed into triangle (the Ken clan symbol), a skirt which is navy blue and reaches her knee. Under the skirt she wears black shorts. Bandaged cover the whole of her left arm, her head band is tied to her fore head. She is also seen wearing an aqua blue diamond tied to a golden chain.


To add to the appearance:


Shipudden: Tora's hair grow longer. She then wears a beige coat on shirt. The clan symbol is at the back of the coat. She sticks to a white skirt and tight shorts.


The Last: the same as above


Boruto: She wears a red kimono with flowery design


For all the appearances, it is really good and the outfits are easy to imagine. Also thanks for making a clan and having her look like she belongs in the clan.


Personality: Tora is seen a an arrogant, narcissistic girl who only cares about herself. Although narcissistic, Tora knows wen someone is stronger than her yet doesn't back down either way. She is very bossy and when grows frustrated when people don't listen to her.


This is very different. I narcissistic OC sounds like a lot of funny moments can happen in her story and many good battles will happen.


Past: Tora was born and raised in Konohagakure, as the the Ken clan heiress. She entered the academy late alongside Ushi, an orphan who recently acquired an apartment.


Nice, this is short and simple but I can understand seeing that you want to make a story.


Battle: Tora uses sheer power and strategy to fight. Amazing at team work. She isn't too bad Ninjustu and Taijutsu but sucks at Genjustu due to that she finds it hard to dispel Genjustu


Nice and great job using genjutsu as a weakness.


Family: Asuka Ken (mother -alive), Isamu Ken (father -alive), Ko Ken(cousin -alive)


Thanks for the life status and relationships.


Ninjustu
Fire release: fire dragon flame bullet
Fire release: dragon fire technique
Fire release: great fire annihilation


Oh, sense she only has fire I can see how she can learn great fire annihilation because she would have more time to focus on it so good job.


Genkai kenkai: Fire blinding light This allow a huge spark of fire burst on the user's hand momentarily blinding the target. The weakness it burns and hurts the user's hands


Great weakness and Kekkei Genkai.
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Final Analysis- This OC doesn't have much but it has enough to get the gist of what she's about and more. I assume you will add a lot more if you make a story for her and so I will be ready to read it if you decide to make it. Thank you for letting me review your OC. It was a honor.
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