This is a OC by _ZXEWI_ and for now is the last OC in OC Sprint. I am again waiting for requests. Till than I will work on my other books. But for now let's begin this review.
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Hihi! ^^ I'd like to sumbit an OC, and you don't even have to review it if you don't want to, but I want to make him a bit more interesting without making him a gary-stu, get me?

Of course. I am always happy to help.

Name: Inuzuka Isamu (Inuzuka being the Clan name, Isamu meaning 'Brave')
Age: (Before the Second Great Ninja War) 13
Age: (During the Second Great Ninja War/At death) 17

Oh so this OC died. That's different.

Gender: Male

Nice a male one.

Appearance: 5"9. He has brown spiky hair and amber eyes like most Inuzukas. During part one his hair is pulled back into a pony-tail in a failed attempt to keep it out of his face, and in part two it is cut short. In part one he wears a grey sweater, black ANBU pants and black shinobi sandals. His hitai-ate is tied around his forehead. In part two, he wears the standard jonin outfit with his hitai-ate around his neck.

This is nice. It shows how he grows up. His style changes and it makes him look more mature. His outfits are simple so you can imagine it and his headband is in a common but also unique place. Great job.

Personality: He is slightly bold like most Inuzukas, but then again that is in his nature. He is more timid than most from his clan, and because of this ends up getting compared to his clanmates. He takes his father's looks and his mother's personality after all. He get really quiet when angry, and when annoyed he just walks away (to his academy sensei's dismay)

This shows a lot about his character. The way he is more timid than other Inuzukas and is compared to them shows what he is like. You did very good with Making him unique.

Battle: Isamu specializes in Kenjutsu and Taijutsu. He is terrible with Genjutsu and doesn't go anywhere near Ninjutsu. This was what eventually got him killed. He uses the Tiger Style, which heavily relies on raw strength and stealth, and also uses the Inuzuka style which relies on intimidation and striking quickly. His Kenjutsu style relies on his Clan Taijutsu, which is the only reason he chose to learn it. He weilds a tanto, and in battle his Inuzuka blood really shows as he taunts his opponents and finishes them quickly when they attack in a blind rage. If he deduces that they would not give into his taunts though, he waits fir them to attack first.

It is nice to see him different from the others. The fact that what he lacks gets him killed is a great way to end off a character. Another thing is how like other Inuzukas aren't known for genjutsu he isn't either. It makes him a lot like his clan. The tiger style also goes great with his clan.

Past: He doesn't have a sob backstory or anything. He was born into a loving family being the youngest of his two brothers and three sisters. It was true that Inuzukas had big families. He was given his partner for life, Kiku, when he was five years old. They had been inseperable. During part one, he is put on a team with Aburame Satsuki and Hyuuga Takimaru. They seperate as genin and he is taken on a training trip by his father. They arrive home during the Second Great Ninja War. In a mission with his former team to gather info for the Hokage, Isamu died protecting Satsuki (who had been put into a genjutsu) from a rock jutsu he could have possibly blocked had his knowledge expanded to let in more ninjutsu techniques. His companion, Kiku, is killed ten minutes later by the same person with the same jutsu.

This is so sad but so heart warming. This OC doesn't even need a sob story to be protective and die. I feel like I could shed a tear right now. Even his little animal companion died. And it was all because he lacked ninjutsu. This was a creative way of having him die. This is amazing, great job.

Relationship with Characters: None

Ok

Other: I still don't have a name for his parents, so ignore that.

That's fine.
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Well guys, this is the end of OC Sprint. I hope you liked them all. Now for the final analysis.

Final Analysis- This OC proves you Don't need a sob story to be a great character. He also proves that you can be from a Canon clan and still make it work amazingly. This OC is very good and has little to nothing to have to work on. He isn't a Gary sue at all. However, you did want to make him more Interesting correct? Well here is a piece of advice. A story more to him and his dog. Maybe he hand picked him for a reason, or maybe he rescued him. Another thing would be adding maybe a rival or best friend to him so he has someone to compete with. The last piece of advice could be that he knew he was going to die but still decided to sacrifice himself. But he is amazing the way he is. The way you want to make him better is up to you. It was a honor to review him. Thank you for choosing me.
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Well here it is. This is the last one of OC Sprint. I am now waiting for requests. I hope to get more soon. Thank you all for reading and thanks for getting me to 1000 views.