This OC is by Ceraza_Senpai I hope you like it.
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Genre: Fanfiction that was previously made by me but taken down from the lack of creativity. Note that this is the cliché "from another world" story, so my oc knows the fate of the world.

Ok, thanks for telling me

Name: Uchiha Rinorah

Nice name

Age: [Same as Team 7] 12 in part one and so on

Good

Gender: Female

Nice

Sexuality: Bisexual [Because why not]

Ok

Family: Unnamed Mother (Deceased) Unnamed Father (Deceased) Shisui [Older brother] (Deceased) [[[I'm not so sure who Shisui's parents are except he is the supposed descendent of another known Uchiha]]]

Thanks for the family relationship and life status. Do more research on Shisui than if you are gonna make him her brother.

Appearance: At 12 years old, she has the normal Uchiha features, including almost unnoticeable long dark blue hair, onyx (black) eyes, and ivory skin. She shares the same well-defined-eyelashes as her brother and looks strikingly similar to Nohara Rin, as Kakashi noted. During her days in Team 7, she wears an oversized version of a standard Shinobi shirt and pants. I sorta took this look from another Oc named Kiyo Nara (not mine for sure) who had the simplest clothing I've seen on a character. I liked it... I hope that's not bad. I still haven't finished writing the rest of the "series", so like... yah... spoilers?

It's not bad as long as you actually didn't take the style, now using it as inspiration is a better phrasing unless you actually took it than yeah that's bad. Even if spoilers, if you want a good review you should try to give me the most for the OC or else I won't be able to tell if the OC has problems until it's too late. Right now though it's looking good, just be careful about the "took" her style thing.

Personality: She's somewhat quiet. Rinorah is silent, quite shy when someone first meets her, but if they become friends, then that's a different story. She will unintentionally loosen up and you'll find out that she is compassionate, helpful, a bit of a jokester, and yet, if teased correctly, will become a blushing mess. Just like her brother, she seemed to understand the emotional nature of others, and thus was very worried about her fellow clansman, Sasuke after the Uchiha massacre. When she was still in the academy, she never liked voicing her own opinions and was not a leader, more of a follower. With Team 7, she is learning to fix those flaws. Part of the problem was her knowledge of the Shinobi world. She was afraid of the butterfly effects. Her presence could definitely change something. As for her intellect, she excels in Mathematics because she retained her previous knowledge from the other world. She struggles with Kanji, since her first language was English, but takes in information easier than others. Training is tough but she reads books for easier poses and such. She relies a bit on books for information and to familiarize herself with the language.

Ok this is good but since she already knows what happened to Sasuke why is she worried? I have seen OCs follow the same old routine of they know it will happen and they go to the event and than just watch it play but with her intellect maybe she can do something else. Maybe she can make Sasuke's life better. She knows the story and you could be the first OC to actually change it and be different than the cliche story. Plus it would help with adding creativity to the table instead of following the same recipe. It's just a suggestion.

Battle: She is mostly long ranged, using her adamantine attacking chains to, well, attack. Note that her chains are the incomplete version of the adamantine sealing chains Kushina used to retrain the Nine-tailed Fox. Since, of course, they are incomplete, they are not quite as big as the usual adamantine chains. They're thinner and breakable if Rinorah losses her concentration of their formation. If they break, the chakara Rinorah used to creat them will vanish. Her nature type is of course fire and eventually learned she used air techniques. She still uses Kunai's and shurikens. She knows a little about healing techniques and can heal wounds. If they are serious enough for surgery or other complications then that is out of her league. Her chains are capable of absorbing chakra and transferring chakra. Since she is half Uzumaki, her chakara reserves are as big as Naruto's, which are four times bigger than Kakashi's (I believe. Do correct me if I'm wrong. I think it still applies in Naruto when he's young). This works perfectly so she can restore some of her teammates Chakra since she can't battle so well herself. Her Taijutsu skills are not well developed and are her weakness. Just like Shino, Team 7 must teach her in order to protect herself in cases of emergencies. She is the healer of the group after all.

Ok I'm sorry but half Uzumaki half Uchiha? This can not be, now her having chakra chains is fine but maybe instead of taking them from the Uzumaki, you make it her own. Her move, her own weapons, maybe she can buy actual chains and put chakra in them to make them longer, stronger, thicker, and do more movements. Just something new. But being half Uzumaki and half Uchiha is going to get you called out in a instant. Your already related to Sasuke since Uchihas have the same ancestors which is how they get the gene to have their Doujutsu and that is how it is with all the clans. So going off of that that means that your OC is related to both Naruto and Sasuke either as distant cousins or some other way but that can not do, it gives off a marysue vibe. It was already skeptical when you made a Uchiha because they are wiped out but a half Uzumaki as well is crossing the line. I would recommend the suggestion above and just make it her own where she can do what she wants because she made it and not follow the Uzumaki clan and scrap the idea of her being half Uzumaki. Also why is she the healer? Did you forget that Sakura is the medical ninja? Sakura literally studied medicine and can perform surgeries and by the end of Naruto is stated to be the best medical ninja so why is your OC being called the healer of the team? I'm sorry but that's not right either, scrap that as well because it even says that she only knows little and can only heal wounds while Sakura knows CPR, can take poison out of the body, make antidotes for poison and so much more.

Past: A bit simple??? She lived with her older brother Shisui but half of the time confined in her house due to Shisui's protectiveness. Rinorah never complained, knowing how much he love her and just wanted to protect her. Shortly after Shisui become an ANBU, he had even less time with his little sister. Thankfully, the academy was around the corner and Rinorah enrolled. Shisui's hopes for a better future for the Uchiha was enhanced with Rinorah's presence. He still believed that he would be able to stop the coup d'etat with his Kotoamatsukami, but his believes were broken when Danzo managed to steal one of his eyes. Knowing that Shisui only had one weakness, Danzo prepared for the moment and brought an unconscious Rinorah as bait for the other eye. The girl was awake, however, and expressed her emotions in the simplest way possible. If Danzo was responsible for her older brother's problems, then she hated him. It was then that she managed to create a thin adamantine chain to escape and vanished with Shisui. Shisui's death, his decision to entrust his eye to Itachi, and the awakening of Itachi's Mangekyō never changed, except for the fact that Rinorah was present and awakened her sharingan. (Stops there cause spoilers~)

Your telling me the guy who was able to stop a anbu can't stop a little girl from escaping? Now nothing is wrong with her getting a chain at one point but the fact that a thin one at that helped her escape Danzo, DANZO!! If you want my take here it is. Shisui fights to save his sister from Danzo only managing to get her when he is on the verge of death. Danzo being injured flees and Shisui entrusts your OC to give the eye to Itachi as his last wish. That way she is present and Shisui is dead and it makes it more convincing that she was able to get away from Danzo. Plus this doesn't even match her personality she is portrayed as shy especially around new people so wouldn't she, being a little girl fear Danzo, the man who kidnaps her and takes her from her brother? Why she is not trembling in fear and hoping for Shisui to help her, but instead all the thoughts that would be going through the mind of a 6 year old is out the window. When making the OC's backstory putting the personality into play is essential, not to mention her age, of course a little kid would be scared so you have to show that.

Relationships: Rinorah is friends with everyone. She had a good nature. When she entered the academy, many students learned she was slow with Kanji and teased her a bit. All that changed when (the fire nation attacked) they found out her level in mathematics and her proficiency to get perfect scores on mostly all tests. Rinorah soon became well liked by all. Because of her intelligence, Sasuke really seemed to look up to her, since they were both in the same clan. Eventually, he grew a crush but faded after the massacre. Naruto likes her too, but not as much as Haruno Sakura. Rinorah did too. That's right. She had a bit of a crush on Sakura too. She was smart and pretty with her pink hair and green eyes. Rinorah also like Hinata too, but that kinda faded after the middle of her academy years. Her male crushes are Naruto and Shikamaru, but of course she hides it quite well.

This is good but there are a few things, one Is even though she's smart, she shouldn't just be well liked for it. Most people aren't well like for their intelligence, it's their personality and actions that makes people like them and that's what you have to bring to the table with her. For instance she's smart so people ask her to tutor them. She does and they like her. Being just smart doesn't make you liked by everyone so adding these actions in is essential. Another thing is that not everyone is going to like her. Even the Best people have one hater, the more fans you have the more haters you got and that needs to apply here. I can definitely see a enemy or 2 that doesn't like her but can't compete with her intelligence or hates her for being smart but not everyone is going to like her that's how it is in the real world and how it is in anime. No one is without a hater. So I would recommend a hater, either someone else from the real world too or another OC you can use. Regardless it should be something.

Fun Facts: -Rinorah was spared along with Sasuke because Danzo believed that Rinorah could develop the Kotoamatsukami as well.
-My drawings for Rinorah are basically Rin Nohara's face with different hair and clothes and recolor lol.
-Sakura is still in Team 7 and since their are four members, it’s gonna be a bit difficult for them in the Chūnin Exams. They have to gather three scrolls instead of two. But they still have to be heaven AND earth, not all Heaven scrolls.
-You herd it here folks... my character! No stealing! REEEEEE
-I still haven't republished my book ... oops?
-Gee I hope don't get my readers angry here
-I might add other characteristics along the way because not everyone is the same after things happen, right???

This is all good and like your last point you are completely right. Plus recolors are ok if you use it as inspiration to one day draw her.
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Final Analysis- This OC has a good deal of things to work on but other than that she is pretty good. She has tons of redeeming qualities but I would definitely take those suggestions up top into consideration. Add more to her and do some changes before you put her story back up. I know I was brutal and all but she just has so much potential that I can see and I want to help her achieve it. I feel like she can make the cliche story that you mentioned not cliche at all by changing a few things and using the knowledge to her advantage, making others lives better so much more. I hope you don't take this review the wrong way because I really wanted to give you the best. Thank you so much for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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