This OC is also by Flammenstern I hope you like it.
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Name: Misaki Akuma
Nice name
Age:
Part 1: 15
Part 2: 19
The Last: 22
Boruto: 33
Nice a little older than the Naruto group
Gender: Female
Nice
Family: Leila Akuma(mother - deceased), Makoto Akuma(father - deceased)
Thanks for for relations and life status.
Appearance:
Part 1: long black hair(mid back), dark blue eyes, dark blue t-shirt, black gloves (like Kakashi), black shorts, black bands around her ankles, forehead-protector around her left thigh
Part 2: hair goes shortly over her shoulders, wears a black Chunin-like jacket over her shirt, rest is the same
This is a nice and simple look. It is also super easy to imagine. Great job.
Personality:
Part 1: outside of missions she is very cheerful, serious on missions, determined, very protective over those important to her, closed up towards Kai and his Clan members, perfect control of her emotions
Part 2: started being cheerful on missions too to keep the mood up, opened up towards Ryus, rest stayed the same
She is definitely a mature girl and she only got more as time went on. She takes other people's feelings into consideration, nice.
Battle style: mainly uses ninjutsu, because she can't do genjutsu and taijutsu doesn't fit for the jutsus She specialises on.
Nice
Jutsus:
Water style: Sea fire(Genin years) Hidden jutsu: Armour(Chunin)
Water style: Sea Monster(Jonin years) Basic water style jutsus(Genin years)
Cool
Relationship: Kai Ryu Clan
Nice
Traits: black hair, dark blue eyes
Cool
Element Affinity: Water
Nice, and the fact that she has one could mean she could be the best water user.
Ninja Rank:
Genin(13 years)
Chunin(19 years)
Jonin(25 years)
This is great distance and shows that she prepared herself to get to each rank.
Past: Misaki grew up as an only child and her parents spoiled her as much as they could. She had to learn the hard way, with 5, that she can't have everything she wanted, because her mother got busy after she started taking over her fathers leadership. Misaki was sad about it but her father started training her to distract her from what had happened. In the end Misaki got over her mother's absence and some time after it finished the academy and became a genin. When she later, with 15, finds out what happened to her mothers beloved village, she promised herself to avenge the village to make her mother proud.
This is a great past. Not all sadness and has happiness good job.
Trivia:
- awakens her kekkei genkai with 17
- mother is one of the leader of the village
- learned to control her kekkei genkai with 23
- trained to fight blind, but can only do it in water
- stops having a grudge against Ryus after she hung out with Kai a lot
Great trivia
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Final Analysis- This OC is really good with the little detail given. She has a nice past and everything just fits in with her. Thank you for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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