OC 86 (Manami Senju)

This OC is by Milkychick I hope you like it.
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Name: Manami Senju (まなみ せんじゅ)


Nice name


Status: Alive


Good


Age:
12-13 [Part I]
15-17 [Part II]


Naruto age nice


Species: Human


Good


Gender: Female


Cool


Sexual Orientation: Heterosexual


Cool


Blood Type: O-


Nice


Birthday: February 14
Zodiac Sign: Aquarius


Cool


Personality: Manami is an independent and quiet person. She is intelligent and very much enjoys helping others. Though she isn't very empathetic. She's very outspoken and could be quite insensitive to others feelings. She has a short temper and finds a lot of things irritating. She hates talking about her feelings and strongly dislikes confrontation.


Ok but outspoken and quiet contradicts each other that's like saying your nice but also mean. Also if she hates confrontation so much why is she a ninja? Wouldn't it be common sense for her not to be a ninja if she hates confrontation?


Good Traits: Dependable, caring, trustworthy


Bad Traits: Arrogant, stubborn, detached


These are really good traits for good and bad.


Like(s): Reading, playing with dogs, playing shogi


Dislike(s): Confrontation, strawberries, dark chocolate


Hobby(ies): Collecting rings, training, tasting different teas


Good for all the above.


Clan info
Clan Name: Senju


History: The Senju clan was one of the responsible for founding the first shinobi village. Although the clan itself no longer appears to exist as a group, the Senju continue to influence Konoha's politics through their philosophy of the and the corresponding interpretation of the role of the position. As such, three Senju have achieved the position of Hokage.


We already know about the Senjus but thanks for the reminder.


Specialty: More than one


More than one what?


Kekkei Genkai: Wood Release [Though only Hashirama and Manami posses this]


Why only them? What makes her so special that she's the reincarnation of Hashirama? There is no point in only giving him who is dead and her this Kekkei Genkai just give to all of the members, they're barely seen anyway and would be good for a rival.


Looks and Appearance
Appearance: Black shoulder length hair with a full front fringe. light skin with blue eyes and plumped lips. She does have a womanish body throughout her childhood and teen years. She wears her forehead protector as a headband


So a 6 year old has a hour glass figure. Why? Why can't she just look like a kid and teen? Not saying that some kids don't develop early but she's looking like a grown woman as a kid and teen. There is no reason for her to look such a way, not even tsunade looked like that in her early years.


Height:
150.8 cm [Part I]
169.2 cm [Part II]


Weight:
42.5 kg [Part I]
52.5 kg [Part II]


Good height to weight ratio


Hairstyle(s): Manami wears her hair down and with red clips in her hair above her ears.


Good


Scent: Bananas


Jewelry: A gold ring and a gold necklace
Colors: Red and Black


Clothing: She wears a black shirt slightly above her waist, a red fur-lined jacket. Black pants that cut off above her ankle and with blue sandals. [Part I]
She wears a long red jacket that reaches to her mid-thigh; with a black sleeveless shirt that stops above her belly button. with dark chocolate brown shorts and thigh-high black sandals. [Part II]
On both outfits she keeps her weapons pouch on her right side.


So in part 2 she dresses like Ino. Ok


Relationships
Parent(s): Kishiro Senju [Father; dead] Harumi Uzumaki [Mother; dead]
Sibling(s): none
Relative(s): Hashirama Senju [Great grandpa; dead] Tobirama Senju [Great granduncle; dead] Mito Uzumaki [Great grandma; dead] Tsunade [Aunt; alive] Nawaki [Uncle; dead] Minato Namikaze [Godfather; dead] Naruto Uzumaki [Godbrother; alive] Kushina Uzumaki [Godmother; dead]


Thanks for the relationship and life status of the characters.


Best Friend(s): Sai and Naruto Uzumaki


Ok


Sensei(s): Kakashi and Tsunade


Ok


Crush(es)/spouse/bf: Sasuke Uchiha


I hope you have a good reason for breaking up a canon couple.


Rival(s): none


Enemy(ies): none


Pet(s): none


Ninja Information Birth


village: Village Of The Hidden Leaf


Current Village: Village Of The Hidden


Leaf Teammates: Sakura Haruno, Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki [Part I] Sakura Haruno, Sai, Naruto Uzumaki. [Part II]


Nice


Chakra Element: Earth Release [Primary], Wood Release [Secondary], Lightning Release [Tertiary], Fire Release [4th], Wind Release [5th], Water Release [6th], Yin Release [7th], Yang Release [8th]


Why does she have everything? All she is missing is water. What is the point of giving her 4th, 5th, 6th, 7th, and 8th? Why not just 2 or 3 at max.


NIN: 5/5
TAI: 4/5
GEN: 3/5
KEN(intelligence): 3.5/5
RIKI(power): 5/5
SOKU(speed): 4/5
SEI(chakra): 5/5
IN(finger sign): 5/5
Total: 34.5/40


How old is she? At what age is this her power? I'm hoping it 17 or 18.
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Final Analysis- This OC has a little to clean up. One thing I don't understand is how is she not best friends with Sakura? Naruto is gone half the time and Sai doesn't even come till Shippudden yet they are her best friends while Sakura is the one who stayed in the village when Naruto and Sasuke left, is trained by Kakashi and Tsunade, and finally has been there for her teammates yet they aren't best friends? For god's sake you guys even share the same teacher at one point how are they not best friends or even friends at this point. It just makes no sense unless you hate them but if she does than wouldn't she try to avoid her own teammate. Also she hates confrontation but is one of the best ninjas sense she has a Kekkei Genkai that only her and her great grandpa has. If she hates confrontation aka fighting and arguing than why be a ninja? No one forced her so it makes no sense. There are also questions that need to be answered, other than that this OC is pretty good. Thank you for letting me review your OC, it was a honor.
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