This OC is by TheSuckiestAuthor I hope you like it.
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Name: Yoake Hanta

A nice name

Age: 
Pt.1: 10
Pt.2: 15-17 (Two years younger than Naruto)
Boruto: Dead

Oh so around the Konohamaru group's age.

Gender: Female

Nice.

Appearence:

Hair: long curly red-brown hair, usually in a braid

Cute

Eyes: chocolate brown, angular, thick, short eyelashes

Nice and a beautiful common color.

Clothing: Tight tan long-sleeved shirt, Dark-brown vest, lots of pockets, Long green flowing skirt, mint-green sunhat, either tied around neck or on head

Nice but I hope if this is her fighting gear that she is wearing shorts under that skirt.

Skin-Tone: Tanned with an orange undertone

Nice

Extra: Black tatooed markings under eyes (Like a football play or some shit like that)

Cool, and its different making her unique.

Family: Hoshi Hanta (Aunt), Hana Hunta (Adoptive Aunt, Hoshi's Wife), Shida Hanta (Adoptive Big Brother), Mayonaka Hunta (Real Younger Sister)

Oh nice. I wonder what happened to the parents.

Personality: Possesive, Quiet, Annoyed Easily, Scared Easily and Ticklish, Stressed Easily, Perfectionist, Hates Loud Noises, PTSD

Oh ok, this OC is also in a singular personality group which is a great thing.

Likes: Cooking, Eating, Her Family, Skipping Class, Reading, Orchestral Music, Quiet Time, and Routine

Nice, but don't think orchestral music would be in Naruto. Only because the only instrument we do see is Tayuya's flute in the anime. Of course they can have more but it would probably be used to fight instead.

Dislikes: Large animals (Freaks the fuck out around canine), Disorder, Getting Rid of Gifts, Horror, Loud Noises, Being in Small Spaces, Being Alone

Oh ok, so she hates her disorder.

Abilities: Long Range, Agility, Planning, Strategy, Seeing Mistakes in Others' Strategies, Finding Liars

Nice.

Ninjutsu: 

Rain of Terror (See the pun, heh heh)
Water Bullet
Tsunami Defense
Lily's Revenge
Copycat
Chakra Shield
Poison Skin
Clone Jutsu
Advanced Henge
Kawawarmi (I CAN'T SPELL IT FOR THE LIFE OF ME)

It's fine I'm not the best speller either. Also I got the pun. Good one XD. Also nice jutsus.

Summoning Jutsu: Frogs (NOT TOADS FROG SPECIALIZE IN EARTH, WATER, AND POISON, HATE TOADS, USUALLY HEAL AND BACK UP)

Oh ok, there is a big difference between the two amphibians.

Taijustu:

Lily's Dance
Poison Skin

Nice. I wonder what those are like and what they do.

Past:

Her clan were originally nomadic merchants and huntsmen but during the night were wiped out by a rapid wildfire while she and her sister were in a nearby village helping her aunt sell the meat hunted by her tribe, or clan. Seeing the fire they fled to Konoha, they starved while on the road, when they reached the outskirts of Konoha the Hanta clan welcomed them, some of the clan died due to rough winters after that she was sent to the village to become a ninja-

Nice but how did they know where hidden leaf was? What made them run to leaf? How come this clan took her and her sister in out of no where? If they got in leaf how come Ibiki didn't interrogate them? These are just some questions that need to be answered.

while in the village she saw a girl, loud, confident, everything she wasn't, Warai, Warai was Naruto's Rival for dobe, she was a bit passive aggressive and a jokester, she and Naruto contended for best prankster often, Warai didn't notice her, Yoake noticed her quite often though, one day Yoake bumped into, the furs she carried spilt, Warai stopped to help and then a relationship bloomed

Nice, so this girl was like a girl version of Naruto? Or was she a little different?

That's my oc, it's a bit plain and simple, she does not want to be a ninja, KEEP THAT IN MIND PLS

Oh ok, that's nice.

Also, fanfiction material, actually, most things...

Ok, thanks.
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Final Analysis- This OC is good and don't have a lot to work on. The only thing really is her past. She is short and simple and straight to the point but her past where she and her sister flees and somehow ends up in leaf isn't right and doesn't fit. The other thing is the girl named Warai, I would like more information on her and more info on the sister because it seems after they got to Konoha and was somehow not interrogated she just left and isn't seen anymore. The last thing is her family, who exactly is this adopted brother and this Aunt? There is no information on them. More information on some of these characters is needed. Other than those small things and the shorts under the skirt if she is forced to be a ninja sense it doesn't say she went to the academy or has trained. Is she also technically a civilian or is a ninja? There are many questions unanswered. Just answer those and this OC can be a success. It was a honor reviewing her and I thank you for choosing me to review her. Thank you.