Hello everyone. I am happy to be back reviewing. I just transferred everything from my old phone to my new one that I am using now. I am happy that you all were patient with me. I thank you all for waiting. I have tons of OCs that I have to review and I will be doing them in the order I got them. In fact, you might just see tons of reviews in the same day. Now this OC is from dancegirl222 she was my first and I did two of her OCs so far. This here is the third. I hope you all enjoy this.
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Genre: I figure since I did the other 2 that makes up Team 5, I thought I should probably do one for her!

That's perfect. Now we have the whole team.

Name: Cho Tora ("butterfly tiger" or "tiger butterfly")

Sounds like very beautiful name.

Age: 23-26

It's great to see ninjas Kakashi's age.

Gender:female

It's been a bit since I had a female OC.

Family: Koemi Tora (twin sister) Emi Tora (little sister) Jun Tora (mother) Aoi Tora (father)

Sweet it's nice seeing a family with some sisters. I believe they are alive correct? Please tell me if I'm wrong.

Appearance (Part 1): short orange hair that goes to the middle of her neck with blunt bangs, black and purple kimono style short-sleeves shirt with black pants and black shoes, wears her hitai-ate around her neck, violet eyes

I can imagine her and to me she just seems so unique and beauitful. I don't know why. She has that creativeness to her that just makes you think she is beautiful.

Appearance (Part 2): hair is a bit longer, to her shoulders now, wears an violet long sleeved shirt, with the green flack-jacket, black pants and black shoes.

It's great. She didn't change to much and because she is getting older, she is becoming more mature with her clothing style. Great job.

Personality: bossy, sassy, manipulative, confident, kind, a leader, passive-aggressive,determined, competitive, analytical

Great work. She is in the same category of traits for a personality. It is wonderful and not a trait is out of line. The leader goes great with bossy just like how competitive goes with determined. This is the way to make a personality.

Battle: lurking in the shadows, tries to stay out of the direct fight since she does better with genjutsu, can hold her own in any position

It's great seeing that she specializes in genjutsu. I don't see it much and it is underrated. It's also good that she can hold her own because if you can't then you probably shouldn't be a ninja.

Weapons: trip-wire, Kunais, shurikens, smoke bombs

These are great interesting weapons that many ninjas have so it isn't out the blue. I believe that these are the perfect weapons too sense she is mainly in genjutsu.

Past: She hides behind her loud and bossy attitude; really she's terrified to be a ninja. She became a ninja because she wanted to make her family proud because her entire clan was full of ninjas, although they weren't very well known. Cho is apart of the Tora clan, a minor clan that is known to be fierce in combat, and definitely not people to mess with. She and her family are quite close, although her sisters are quite jealous of her strength in genjutsu. It's funny because Cho admires her sisters' prowess in taijutsu. She's actually quite delicate and quiet at times which is what she truly is, but puts on a mask of false bravado, to make her parents proud of her.

This tells a lot about her character. It makes you think more about her. Cho has this side that nobody knows which is the real her and she puts up a false personality to make others proud. It also shows flaws within her character which is important when making a good character.

Her parents want her and her sisters to be "rough and tumble" kind of people scoring high in taijutsu. She thinks her parents aren't proud of her. Her parents are proud of her, but they just don't show it because they're tough and their emotions don't bother them. When Cho met Kirei, she was very "in your face" and Kirei didn't like that. So she told her about herself, and took her down a few pegs. After getting used to each other for a while, Kirei and Cho kind of get along and help each other out in their respective weaknesses, Kirei's being genjutsu and Cho's being taijutsu. They became friends and often liked to aggravate Iwao.

This is a great way to result friendship. Kirei seeing through the exterior that Cho was putting on and them becoming  friends. It's perfect and tells you a little more about Kirei. I also love how they help each other in their weaknesses.

After Rin and Obito died, Cho tried to be there for Kirei and Iwao. Iwao accepted her help but, ironically, Kirei didn't because she wanted to go help Kakashi, but he pushed her away. Then after Kirei finally gets the message, she tries to help Cho and Iwao, and their bond as a team grew stronger together. When Team 5 grew stronger bonds, Cho decided it was time to clear things up with her parents. She explained to them that she felt that they weren't proud of her, but they were, they just didn't say or show it. So, she put a mask on to try and attract attention, and after Kirei explained to her that, she didn't need to do that, she mellowed out and they got along.

Death always bring people together so using a real life scenario in Naruto where death happens and change people is pure genius. The strength of their bond got better as a team and it's perfect because when you lose something, you don't want to lose anything else. This here is a great way of making the team bonding better.

Cho started getting feelings for Iwao when Kirei pretty much stopped hanging out with them because she was chasing Kakashi. Cho told her history to Iwao when they were training and they got to an understanding and gave each other advice. Cho really likes Iwao and shows it too but he's too nervous to tell her how she really feels. She decided that she would wait for him to confess to her, how ever long it was going to be, so they could be together.

I love how Cho is showing her personality a little in this too. When you think of the type of girl Cho is, you wouldn't think someone who would confess to you. You would have to confess to them. This brings more of Cho's character into light.

Relationship: Iwao Fujimoto. They start going out in between Naruto and Naruto Shippuden.

Adorable. I have yet to see OC X OC. This is a first. It is great, if you however want to ship her with a Canon character that would be fine too.

Clan Traits: many wear orange and black, like a tiger, orange hair and purple eyes, skilled in taijutsu, most are very prideful and egotistical. Can hold their own in battle. Really kind-hearted people deep down, just don't show it. Many are out-spoken and bold with their opinions on any topic.

This is a perfect clan and character mix up. The appearance goes great with the clan traits and their name. It is great to see you put it all together. I also love how the way they act is similar to Cho and just like her parents. You did great with this.

Clan Symbol: A tiger head with a Japanese mamushi snake in its mouth.

Very cool and interesting.

Chakra element: wind

Her only one? That's unique because most people give their OC at least two or three. Great job for being different.

Jutsus: academy jutsus, body flicked, replacement, air current levitation,blade of wind, dance of the tigers( takes lots of concentration and chakra, can't be used more than 4 times or it eats away at her chakra, creates an illusion of tigers, and the tigers can transform into something that the user fears, and injuries sustained in the illusion are actually real) and summoning jutsu, burning ash,piercing chakra weave,obscuring wind.

Very great. I love how you didn't put tons of Justus and how they are either clan, chakra, or wind Justus. It is also nice to see that you don't have any Water, fire, or other elements because you did say that she was wind. Great job. It is also amazing seeing that dance of the tigers is a genjutsu which she is the best in and it goes wonderfully with her clan. This shows you paid tons of attention to Cho.

Other: She loves dancing and climbing trees. She always had a strange fascination with butterflies which led her to become friends with some from the Aburame clan.

These are some great fun facts. It also shows more about her and the minor things that are also important.
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I hope you liked it and I will be getting to the other OCs that I'm going to review very soon. I also have other books that I'm working on published and drafted. Such as all the published ones and in my drafts I have a black butler one and my own Naruto OC story. I'll get to those in a little but let's  see the final analysis first.

Final Analysis- This OC is very well thought out and planned greatly. She is much different then her teammates and I believe was spent tons of time on. She should be praised for I barely found anything wrong with her. The things wrong with her adds to her flaws which is perfect. I would love to see more of this OC in the future. Thank you for letting me review her. It was a honor.
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I hope you all enjoyed the OC review once again. Also like I said I am making a Naruto OC story which is in my draft. If you want to know a little about my OC before I put out her story, comment. There are three OCs featured in the story so if you want to know a little about them then comment and I may make a little chapter explaining a little about them. I will be updating in a while for the next OC review. So I will see you all soon. Till then Shoko is out.