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Everything Wrong With HARRY POTTER Fanfictions
[ CLOSED FOR REVIEWS ]About 120K fanfictions emerge when you directly type Harry Potter in the search bar at Wattpad.While some of them are amazing and well worth every reader's time, there are a great many fanfictions which are either too cliché, contain too many errors or just not that appealing.In this help book, we will first discuss the cliché plots and errors made in writing and then there's also a lot more such as tips on improvement, the dos and don'ts of writing HP fanfiction, book reviews etc.***P.S This is an opinion book and a completely hate free zone. I am not bashing anyone or any type of writing skills. And the sole reason for the creation of this help book is to help not hate.โด๏ธHighest Ranking: #1 in reviews#1 in helpbook#1 in potterverse#19 in Random.
Danganronpa Character Reviews!
I've never done this before, but I'm gonna do my best and give my honest opinions! One more thing, I have not played/seen all games so until then, I will not be reviewing all characters! But! I will also review OC's if requested!You can request which characters I do! But if I have not seen them, I probably won't do them unless I'm just reviewing their looks.(or I'm actually interested in the character)DISCLAIMER~: I do not own Danganronpa or its characters!
The Salt Files (MLB)
Different scenarios of salt in the MLB fandom. I typically do Lila, Alya, and class salt the most. Sometimes Adrien depending on how I feel. I'm gonna make it like before S3 cuz Marinette's character hasn't been the best in the later seasons.The book cover doesn't belong to me, and neither do the characters of the fandom. Don't sue please๐ญ
Harry Potter One Shots: Book 1
All of the memorable characters of the wonderful world of Harry Potter in a Character X Reader One Shots Book!Started: November 5, 2018Finished: May 12, 2020
Harry Potter And The Book Of Random Awesomeness (+other stuff)
Hi everyone!So this book is basically me being just me, that is random to be precise. It contains ways to annoy characters, jokes regarding the Potter universe, one shots, videos, reviews of fanfics plus much more.And just so you know, this is an opinion book. I will be stating my own opinion on stuff so if you don't agree with me, that's totally fine but I really don't want to see any hate on this book. State your opinion, correct me if I'm wrong but please don't pester me.P.S I suck at updating so read at your own risk. ;-)
One Of Us - A Gally, Maze Runner Fan Fiction
Minho would fight for her. Newt would die for her. Thomas would kill for her.Gally would burn the whole world to the ground for her. Follow the journey of Eleanor, the only female glader, as she struggles to adjust to her new life in the Glade that takes her on a journey of love, loss, and friendship. (Gally x OC)Some notes to add: The central romance plot is between Eleanor and Gally but there is a subplot of Newtmas obviously. The story is inspired by the movies only, because the lore of the books goes quite deep and I don't think I will be able to write up to a standard that honors James Dashner's amazing legacy. Also, Eleanor is named after Eleanor Roosevelt which sticks to the idea that all main characters are named after famous scientists, inventors, and activists. Finally, this will be a three-part book for each movie and just to clarify, no smut! (I don't really like writing it) Also, just acknowledging that the only original character here is Eleanor, everything else including the storyline (minus Gally x Eleanor's romance + other minor changes) is James Dashner's work :)Previous rankings...#1 in Mazerunner #2 in Gally#1 in Scorchtrials #1 in Adventure-Romance
๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ - camp cretaceous
Hey everyone!I decided to make a book where I can talk about my opinions and thoughts on the different Camp Cretaceous seasons and their chapters. I hope you all enjoy reading, and feel free to comment with your thoughts!I have zero focus on this book, and it just exists for you guys to see my thoughts and opinions and share your own!~Tags:#2 reviewbooks - 29/05/24#5 sammygutierrez - 29/05/24#6 jurassicworldcampcretaceous - 29/05/24#9 yaz - 29/05/24#10 brooklynn - 29/05/24#10 dariusbowman - 29/05/4
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[CLOSED] WoF OC Reviews
Basically, you send your OC in and I either yell at it for a long time or hug it. Oh, I'll probably also offer you some constructive criticism while I'm at it. Things to improve, and whatnot. I created a book similar to this on Quotev, but was overrun with desperate users begging me to review their (usually very bad) creepypastas. I've just seen books like these kicking off here in the WattyWings' community, so figured I may as well jump on the bandwagon once again! I may be a bit slow in getting back to you, but please bear with me. I am a busy person and have duties et cetera outside of here.
AOT Junior High, Levi X Reader
My first attempt at writing fan fiction. (Y/N) (L/N) is a pretty normal girl, very uh... special and unique. She's quite the random one but hey aren't we all? She meets the short stack of pancakes known as Levi. I wonder what will happen between them? (Probably fights-)Anyways heyo guys, I'm gonna go back and fix up the previous chapters, reading through my story I noticed so many errors and the incorrect uses of point of views. So if you notice a bit of changes in previous chapters that's why.
She-Ra and the Princesses of Power Incorrect Quotes, Rants, and Other Stuff
So, I'm crazy about the show She-Ra and the Princesses of Power, which is a reboot by Netflix.I also want to make sure that it is known that I do NOT own any of these characters (unless they are my ocs, in which I will mention that) and I also do not own the show.Now, for the real description:I've noticed that a ton of people have been making some really cool books about this show, and I would like to credit them for inspiring me. I'm not going to say anyone in particular, but great job to all the people who did stuff like this.Anyway, it's just the title: just bunch of scenarios that show the characters from the way I view them, but also memes, vines, jokes, incorrect quotes, thoughts, rants, vents, and countdowns. It's kind of finished, since I can't add any more chapters. Also, please disregard all my dumb theories from before the later seasons came out.Enjoy!
disventure camp stuff
this book is basically stuff about total drama and disadventure camp! (mostly disventure camp tho lol, especially the 'jaiden' ship)WARNING: a LOT of fangirling lmfao
OC reviews And Tips (Closed)
REQUESTS ARE CLOSED Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS and see what I think. Don't worry, I'm not going out of my way to be brutally honest and mean just because I can because honestly, that's just painful. I will be as honest as I possibly can without tearing your character to shreds and giving ways you can improve.I will review characters from existing universes as well, there's a list on the first page of fan bases I'm apart of. This is all for fun and you don't have to follow my critiques, if you think I'm wrong then that's fine, nothing here is meant to cause offence and I am simply here to help you all improve.
Fire & Ice
Of Witches and Warlocks readers will love this story, which is a retelling of The Trouble with Spells, but from main character Vance Mangum's point of view. Loaded with new scenes and dialogue, this story will take readers on an adventure even deeper into the life and mind of Vance Mangum.Overview: He was on the run. Love wasn't an option, But Fate had a different plan. Magic abounds and sparks fly, when destiny brings Fire & Ice together. Reviews:"Vance Mangum landed a place on my all-time favorite book boyfriend list, and no one has been able to bump him off of it. I honestly can't put into words how much I loved Fire & Ice, and how excited I am for the next installment of Book of Shadows!!!" - Christina Silcox, Literary Redemption "What did I think of Fire & Ice? Well, if you could see my face right now, I think you'd know. I am completely, undeniably, irrevocably in love with these characters!" -Raquel Auriemma, Roc n' Read Back cover: Time passes . . . sometimes too quickly, other times not fast enough, but that's not what's important. The essential thing is what we learn about ourselves during that passage of time and how we apply it. Will we continue to follow the destructive paths we find ourselves on? Will we give in to circumstances that seem completely unchangeable? Or will we desperately fight to hold onto those we love and to what's good inside us-no matter how terrible the cost? I only know I would do whatever was required of me to keep Portia, but in a world of witches, warlocks, and demons, anything can happen. My name is Vance Mangum, and this is my story.
BLOOD AND BONE | rewritten
"๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐, ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐"โ Delphinium Tesla is anything but the innocent citizen she pretends to be, especially not with the power of telekinesis behind her fingertips. Laying low will not erase her haunting memories of the enigmatic master who trained her to be an assassin against her will-nor the atrocities she committed to end him. One of her worst fears comes to life when she is arrested by a familiar face and forced into a crew of the only other gifted individuals, who bear titles as grim as hers: drug addict, kleptomaniac, crime lord, lunatic, murderer. Alongside her new crew, Delphinium is tasked with apprehending a wraithlike international terrorist. This dangerous group of criminals must join forces if they have any hope of living long enough to unravel the mystery that is not as it seems. But they all must beware: everyone is hiding secrets, and most of the crew members are far more deadly than they let on. Perhaps even deadlier than the enemy they seek. โ
Dear Diary
cover and possible art in the book isn't mine neither are the characters. I credit if I know/find the artist. I only own the storyline.No one knows when or why they appear but everyone has a special diary that's connected to your soulmate's. You can see what they wrote and vice versa. It might sound easy fore you can just tell your location to your mate but the diary doesn't share that kind of information.This is the story of Sans, Sans the Skeleton and how he found the love(s) of his life.Everything is in Sans's pov unless told otherwiseI edit quite often but try to write new chapter weekly, I'm kinda irregular though.
Nothing Lasts Forever
Delaney Carson is currently one of the most famous singers globally to date.She first rose to prominence when she was only ten years old singing covers on YouTube.At the peak of her YouTube rise she was discovered by a talent scout who recommended that she sign with them and branch out to other ventures, acting being one of them.Hunter 'McKenna' King is currently one of the most famous actresses in America to date.She first began acting when she was only seven years old as a solution to helping her Mother meet bill deadlines.Albeit Hunter acting at seven years old, she did not officially hit her rise until she was ten years old.Delaney and Hunter had no clue of each other's existence until the both of them ran into each other on the set of a powdered milk commercial.The two of them were immediate friends, I would go as far as to say they were the closest on set.All of this friendship came crumbling down the second Delaney accidentally spit her strawberry milk out on Hunter during their last taping.In response to this Hunter poured her chocolate milk over Delaney's head, solidifying her hatred for the girl.
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OC Reviews [CLOSED]
An OC review book for those who want feedback on their characters. I give constructive criticism and I try to give non-biased feedback. Started: July 2017 Completed: October 2017 Highest Ranking: #702 in Random
Stolen Heart
[Complete] A flirty, romantic adventure & feel-good read!***Lana Asfoor was content to live with the status quo and ignore her piling debt. Ignorance is bliss, right? Yet any ideas of playing things safe are thrown out the window when a charming, mysterious thief steals from her.Risk taker Jack Hanscom, whose name coincidentally rhymes with handsome, soon takes her on an adventure to reclaim what was stolen. And Lana finds out it may be a little more complicated to get her life back to order when her heart may have also been stolen in the process.***Features & Awards:๐ Grand Prize Winner Summer Fest Contest 7/22 ๐ฅ1st in Chicklit, Campfire 2.0 Awards 8/22๐ฅ1st in Romance, Rain Flower Contest 8/22๐ฅ1st in the WSP Awards Season 2 9/22๐ฅ1st in Chicklit, The Hearts Awards 10/22๐ฅ1st in Romance, SW Awards 11/22๐ฅ1st in Romance, Ultimate Genre Awards 11/22๐ฅ1st in Romance, The Final Rose Awards 12/22๐ฅ1st in Chicklit, Clouded Ink Awards 12/22๐ฅ1st in Adult, Those Romance Awards 12/22๐ฅ1st in Chicklit, Auctor Awards 12/22๐Dreamland Community's Undiscovered Books 6/22๐@NewlyWrittenBooks Fun Female Fiction 8/22๐@Humor Isn't It Romantically Funny 11/22๐@Romance Head Over Heels 4/23***Reviews: "I LOVED IT. I loved the characters. It was just a gorgeous story!!" - @MiniMoxx"I was planning to read a couple of chapters today but the story is really captivating and funny. I can't stop reading it" - @MissAgataaa"Stolen Heart is AMAZING! I can totally see it as a paperback that I've placed in my bag to read during the quiet moments when I'm out and about." - @GabPierrette"Romance lovers!! You HAVE to check out this book!" - @HeidiCarroll
Hey, Mate! (Cursed Mates #1)
"The Moon makes you a half... and then you find your mate. And together, the two of you, make a full" ***** It didn't start with a rejection. No. The Alpha didn't reject her, but he didn't accept her either. So she was left hanging, alone. For nearly 14 years. Now, she's come to terms with it. She can't have a second mate as the Moon grants them to only the ones who are rejected. So, yeah... she's alone. With secrets one too many, that can cause havoc in the entire supernatural world it gets hard. Especially when you and your friends are cursed Every curse has a counter curse, but will Del be able to find it? Or will it be too late? With Clans of other shifter species at her back, things are bound to get difficult. **** This is the story of Delilah Selene Raymond, daughter of the Gamma of Ash Moon Pack. **** I know the description sucks, but this is my first werewolf story... so bear with me? *Offers a cookie* #Peace.
Beasts of New York
A violent, epic, action-packed urban quest full of very eccentric, often hilarious, extremely dangerous characters who also happen to be animals - the wildlife of New York City, to be exact.Reviews'Artfully imagined and constructed ... Through the eyes and hearts of Evans's furry characters, Beasts of New York gets at a lot of complex stuff: issues of identity, specifically nature versus nurture, are explored without being heavy-handed, and the real-life distances between bravery and cowardice, loyalty and disloyalty, hope and despair are often revealed to be just a hair's breadth apart.'(Julie Eakin, ForeWord Magazine)'EPIC!'Beasts of New York is about a squirrel named Patch who, out of desperation and need, adventures beyond his home in Central Kingdom to try and save it. While it seems that fate is conspiring against him, taking him further from his home than any squirrel has traveled, his journey is a necessary step to saving all of Central Kingdom from the evil trying to consume it....'This book reads like a fantasy novel, even though it is set in New York City. The horrors that Patch encounters at times seemed so unreal to me, despite knowing where they were. Seeing them from another pair of eyes gave some things a new air of terror and others one of wonder.'This is not a light novel. It is very dark, and at times absolutely horrifying, but I connected so much to Patch as a hero that, in the end, I was left with tears of relief and happiness in my eyes.'(Kate, GoodReads)About the AuthorJon Evans's novels have been published around the world, translated into half a dozen languages, and praised by The Economist, The Times of London, and the Washington Post. His journalism has appeared in Wired, Reader's Digest, The Guardian, The Globe & Mail, and The Times of India, and he writes a weekly column for TechCrunch. He can be found online at www.rezendi.com.
Everything Wrong With TWILIGHT Fanfictions
[ CURRENTLY ON HOLD ]Ever since Stephenie Meyer released her Vampire Romance novel Twilight in 2005, it took the young adult readers by storm and spread like a phenomenon. As of now, there are a total of four novels in the Twilight Saga.Now that the original story of Edward and Bella Cullen have reached its end, fans are still writing about them such that there are about 48.5K such fanfics on Wattpad alone. While there are many great fanfics out there which appeal to the reader instantly, yet there are a few which are either too cliche, have too many grammatical errors or are just not up to the mark.In this help book, we will first discuss the cliché plots and errors made in writing and then there's also a lot more such as tips on improvement, the dos and don'ts of writing fanfiction set in the Twilight Universe, book reviews etc.***P.S This is an opinion book and a completely hate free zone. I am not bashing anyone or any type of writing skills. And the sole reason for the creation of this help book is to help not hate.
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Strength and Sensuality [Completed]
A modern Pride and Prejudice story. Only sexier.Mira is a refugee, starting a new life far from home. She has to deal with her troubled past, her son, and her enigmatic boss, while her only weapon is her killer sense of humor.It's a slow-building love-hate story, witha strong female lead;two control freak lawyers, fighting for dominance, in denial of their feelings;an alpha discovering his submissive side;lots of humor and humanism.~73K words~~~Warnings:- Mild language. Characters talk like white-collar workers usually do in real life.- Chapter 43 has mild sexual content. It isn't very graphic, it's emotional, rather, but if you don't want to read about it, just skip it. It won't affect the story.~~~Featured:- WP Romance's Read Together and Head Over Heels reading list- WP ChickLit and Women's Fiction reading list- WP New Adult's Romance reading list- WP Adult Fiction reading list- WP Classic Authors Twisting Austen's Magical Moments reading list- WP Retold reading list~~~Reviews:"You have a lot of literary elements going for you: your style is chock full of subtext, humor, and intelligence. There's a careful craftsmanship in world-building, character development, and theme."Scripturam Awards"A truly unique story with a quite remarkable a plot! It has the ability to convey the emotions stirred within the characters to the depth of readers heart!"The Graphomania Awards"I am beyond impressed with this work. The characters feel real; three-dimensional. The narration does not feel forced in any way, it flows as it reads."The Dream Awards"Some books lead with suspense and cliffhangers that even if you don't want to continue the book you do so just to sate your curiosity. But then a rare gem like this comes along and without any cheap tricks it pulls in, you just continue and keep reading it and you may not even know when you reach the end."Shadow City Awards
๐๐ญ๐๐ซ๐๐จ๐ฒ ~ Rinney Oneshots (tbp)
[DISCONTINUED]My first ever published writing. It is so cringe ๐ญ.๐๐ญ๐๐ซ๐๐จ๐ฒ, ๐ฉ๐ซ๐๐ฏ๐ข๐จ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ค๐ง๐จ๐ฐ๐ง ๐๐ฌ ๐๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ ๐ก๐ญ. "๐๐๐ฏ๐๐ซ ๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ ๐ก๐ญ ๐'๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐๐จ๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฐ๐๐ฒ ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ."๐๐ฏ๐ค๐ญ๐ถ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ด:• Rinney/Finbin (Finney x Robin) • Angst and Fluff (NO SMUT)! • Very brief Brance (Bruce x Vance) • The missing kids friend group adventures (LMFAO) • Personal headcannons_______๐๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ค๐ฉ๐ข๐ณ๐ข๐ค๐ต๐ฆ๐ณ๐ด ๐ถ๐ด๐ฆ๐ฅ ๐ฐ๐ณ ๐ณ๐ฆ๐ง๐ฆ๐ณ๐ณ๐ฆ๐ฅ ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ข๐ณ๐ฆ ๐ฏ๐ฐ๐ต ๐ฐ๐ธ๐ฏ๐ฆ๐ฅ ๐ฃ๐บ ๐ฎ๐ฆ.