Reviewer : _rehyaa

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Cover : 10/10

The cover is perfect for the story. I see no flaws and at first when i thought about the cover , it gave me peaceful vibes which is nothing like the story. The story and the cover gave me quite contradictory vibes and the readers will be fascinated to read.

Title : 8/10

Although the title is a bit romantic, it fits the story as it is a romantic one, ' shades of purple' isn't a title that I would put to this beautifully written story.

Tip: you can put the title as ' shades of love' or ' shades of red'.

Blurb / Description : 8/10

I feel like there should be so much description about human feelings . You wrote about how Piha was feeling like she was depressed and lonely. Tip : Write much deeper yet in simple words to get more readers to understand the character more.

Creativity / Originality : 9/10

I can definitely see a very different plot than the other books I have ever read. The story is quite original as not all love stories end well. Although your story is very addictive to read , I sense some cliche parts of the story. Tip: Add some plot twists that can actually happen in real life.

Plot flow : 19/ 20

The plot was going smoothly and it didn't feel like it was going slow at any scene. The only thing I found unsatisfied is that the emotions you described were only at the surface when it was supposed to be below the surface [ if you can understand , good but if you can't then do pm me]. Tip : Plot flow also contains how a character goes on to do things the way they do . Describe their childhood memories and describe the environment.

Character development : 10/10

I can tell that piha changed a lot in a good way. Earlier, she couldn't handle her love's death and she was depressed for six months and after that , when she got the job , she was much happier and determined for her life which is pretty encouraging for the readers as well. But in order to understand the character development , there must be some actions which require their decisions and their thoughts. So, till what I have read , there was some character development that I could observe.

Writing style / grammar : 7/ 10

Although the plot is very promising , there were many grammatical mistakes which I would correct if I were you. Tip : Do check on your tenses of the sentences and the verbs of the sentence.

The writing style was good yet it needed much more professionalism . Write it as narrative so that the readers may imagine the scene in their minds and find it easier to connect with the story.

Genre relevance : 10/ 10

The moment I started to read the story , it was instantly romantic (sad) because of the accident. Romance was also shown in other characters. I think it's perfect for the story.

Reader's enjoyment: 9/10

The readers will enjoy reading your book. It has tragedy, love and also relationships between siblings. There is drama that makes readers curious.

Tip : make sure that your book stands out in a good way..

Overall: 90/ 100

Overall , your book is written beautifully and is simple yet elegant for the readers to read . take a look at my tips and suggestions. Make sure your grammar is correct by checking it twice before publishing the chapter. When you're mentioning someone's relation like Di , then make sure to write alternative text in english so that readers from all over the world can find no difficulty to read.

Don't take it to heart, dear.
I hope you do well and all the best.
Treat people with kindness.
With love,
Sahiti. 

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