Ok listen up ducks, I just have gotten tired of people saying this book is confusing at the beginning.

I'm editing mistakes and fixing it, but I thought of something better.

IM GONNA REWRITE THE BOOK! How's that sound? Characters that are unnecessary are gone, Jake and Naomi won't date as quick. I'll make Naomi seem more like a good girl than before. And who would love a sex scene between them?

Comment things I should fix, I have help by the way. Just wanted to tell you so you guys can reread it and love it even more.

Comment some suggestions for editing, some changes. Comment what chapters I really I need to focus on and what characters I should cut out.

Blow up my phone!