Trouble in Paradise...

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Next day Karishma Singh house...


Rohan is reading the newspaper while drinking the tea....his phone rings and surprised to see unknown number...and it's also a video call...he keeps the paper down and unlocks the screen. And his face lights up seeing the person in front of him....


"Hai buddy kasie hai aap......" the person says while adjusting the camera...


R – Kirshu....kaise ho...aur kithne din se phone kyu nahi kiya..


K – vo papa...kaam me busy ho gaaye the..apko bola tha na ki hume business ki deals mil rahi hai...par jaise hi hum yaha aaye bahut saare logo ko milne ka mouka mila aur busy ho gaaye...aur humare phone bhi karab ho gaaya..isliye hum contact nahi kar paaye...


R – koi baat nahi beta....sunn kar accha laga ki tum humare business keliye kiya kuch nahi kar raha ho...I proud of you...


K – thank you so much buddy..aur maa kaha par hai..


R – vo mandir gaayi hai....kushi ka jo mouka hai..


K – kyu...liya huva...


R – aery....maine tumari shadhi ty ki hai.....rishta accha that ho maine haan bol diya...


K – ( pretending to be shock ) kya..ye sab kaise kaie huva..


R – vo maine kuch business keliye bahar gaaya tho mujhe mere bachpan ka dost mil gaaya....aur baathao baatho me pata chala ki vo apne beti keliye accha rishta dund raha hai tho maine tumare liye unki beti ka haath maag liye....bahut hi acchi bachi hai aur unki family bhi...tumhe koi problem tho nahi haina..bina tumse puche hi maine ye vasala kar liya..


K – nahi papa...hume pata hai aap jo bhi karthe ho humare liye soch samjh kar hi karthe ho...hume koi problem nahi hai...


R – ye sunn ke accha laga..mai ek kaam kartha hoon uss ladki ki photo tumahe mail karduga...tum dekh lene...


K – ji papa aur kuch..


R – ab tum mil hi gaaye ho tho mai unse shaadi ki date fix karne keliye bol detha hoon....tum kab tak aa raha ho ghar...


K – haan vo kiya haina...abhi kuch paperwork chal rahi hai..tho hum usme busy hai...ek kaam kijiye aap pehale date fix kijiye fir hum dekhe the ki jaldhi aane ki....


R – thik hai..fir aaj mai apne dost se baat kartha hoon..aur haan shaadi me aajavoge na...


K – kya papa aap bhi ....aajayege...jaise humare kaam kahatm ho jaayega hum aajeyge....


R – thik hai...hum aage ki tyaari shuru karthe hai..aur tum jaldhi hi apne kaam kahatam karke vaapas aajavo..


K – ji..aur haan ek baat pata na bul gaaye...humare car haina usse humne kisi ko bejh diya hai..apne kaha tha ki uss ka kuch karo tho accha offer mil raha that ho humne bejh diya...


R – thik hai...fir hum rahthe hai..kaam bahut hai..


K – ji buddy....apne dhyaan rakna aur maa ka bhi..jaise humare phone thik ho jaaye hum aapse baat karthe hai....


Rohan nods his head and cuts the call feeling happy that everything is going in a good direction....while on the other side Karishma takes the deep breath and relax herself on the chair...and Cheeta juts smiles at his antics....


K – vaise maana badega...tumne ye idea acch diya..video call karne ka..nahi tho hum yaha phas hi jaathe..


C – chalo ek kaam accha huva..ab aage kya kare..


K – vo tho sochna hoga...ab hum iss natak ko kaise bhi karke kahatam karna hoga...


C – par kaise...


K – sochthe hai...pehlae hume Haseena se milna hoga..fir baath karthe hai...


C – thik hai...chal vaise bhi humare wait kar rahi hongi park me....


At the park the girls were waiting for their love life who were little late....then they see Karishma and Cheeta entering the park with tensed face...the girls goes near them and asks what happened...


C – nahi vo baas soch raha the ki aage kya kare...


K – haan..abhi humne papa se tho baat Karli...par pata nahi aage kya hoga..


H – kuch nahi hoga...jaise ho raha hai vaise hi hone dethe hai....jab wqt aayega tab hum paap ko sach baathayange.....


S – aur papa nahi maane tho...


H – aise nahi hoga...haan unhee dhuk tho bahut hoga par hum jaanthe hai apne papa ko vo samjh jaayege ki humne aise kyu kiya...


K – chalo ab princess ne bol diya hai tho tension ki koi baat nahi..vaise bhi humare shaadi me tho bahut kuch ho raha hai baas aur kuch na ho..


H – aise kuch nahi hoga Kirshu..aap baas shaant ho jaaye...


C – vaise ek baat kaha..apke papa ne tho Karishma ko bahut hi pareshan kiya...( supress his smile ) vo piche hi pad gaaye the Mumbai aane keliye...


K – tuje bahut haasi aa rahi hi..beta hum tumare paap hai..aagar hum chale gaayena tho teri love story yahi kahatm ho jaayegi..( hits on his arm playfully )


C – aery yaar tu tho nazar ho gaaya...hum tho Mazak kar raha the...


the girls were laughing while Cheeta trying to Pacify his best friend who is roaming all the park with grumpy face. Then after spending sometime each other all goes to their home as Rajveer called Cheeta to talk about something important...


At Rajveer house....


Cheeta and Karishma enters the house and Rajveer welcomes them. The girls too comes down to see why their father called at the sudden movement....all gather around the hall. And drinks the tea..


K – ji Rajveer ji boliye kyu bulaya hai hume..


R – Vanraj ji ..hum tho apke paas aa raha the na tho fir..


K – vo socha ki apse baat karne ke baad thoda ghum le..isliye hum apke paas aagaye...ji boliye baat hai..


R – ji kushi ki baat hai..mujhe Rohan ka call aaya aur shaadi ki tyaari karne ko bol raha tha...


C – matlab unki beti se baat ho gaayi..


R – haan beta..baat ho gaayi....vo unki beti business ke karan thoda busy thi isliye vo phone nahi kar paayi...par aaj subha hi unse baat huvi tho unhone bhi shaadi keliye haan bol diya hai....


Karishma takes the deep breath and looks at Haseena who is blushing and Santu is side hugging her...


K – ye tho bahut kushi ki baat hai...humne kaha tha Rajveer ji thoda din rukne keliye..ur dekhiye kitna accha news mila hai...


R – sahi kaha apne....mai kuch jaadha hi over react kar baita..kya kare aakir beti ka sawal hai...


K – jaanthe hai...aur apko react karna bhi chaiye....hume tho kush ho rahi hai ki aaj kal ke baache apne kaam ko lekar kithne serious hai nahi tho kai log tho sirf time paas hi karthe hai..


R – ji ye tho apne sahi kaha...ab Rohan bol raha tha ki mujhe jaldh hi date fix kar deni chaiye..lag raha hai unki beti thodi busy hai apne kaam me...isliye mai socha raha hoon ki kal hi panditji ke paas jaavo aur fix kardu dono ki date...


Listening to see all becomes happy and finally everything is under control....after some talking and discussing about marriage Karishma and Cheeta leaves the house.....


Next day...


Rohan was is on his way to his office when his car broke down....his driver gets down to check while he too gets down and looks around to see where he is....he is in the middle of the street.....while waiting he sits in the chair nearby house when old man comes to his house...seeing the condition of the car and as well as the man he thought to help them...


M – ji aap yaha..


R – vo humari ghadi karab ho gaayi tho isliye hum yaha bait gaaye...maaf kijiye bina baathaye bait gaaye..


M – isme maafi maang ne ki jaurt nahi hai..ek kaam kijiye aap andhar aayiye.....yaha iss dup me wait kyu kar raha hai...


R – ( looking at car ) accha thik hai...chaliye..


The man locks the house and asks Rohan to come inside....Rohan looks around the house and sits on the chair....the man brings the glass of water to him. And Rohan drinks it...


R – bahut dhyaanewaad...( that's when his feels on the photo frame hanging on the wall )


He stands and goes near the photo frame and looks at it shockingly...he couldn't believe what he is seeing. He call the old man and asks about the young man...


M – ji ye mere beta Cheeta hai....


R – ( still in shock ) ye sach me apka hi beta hai..( looking at photo frame )


M – ji haan..mere ek loutha beta hai....


R – aur abhi kaha hai..


M – bhi vo Shimla ke estate company me Assistant manager ka post me kaam kar raha..


R – ( fumes in anger ) vo oh..tho ye baat hai.....


That's when his driver calls him as his car is ready....Rohan once again says thank you to the old man and leaves the place with lot of thoughts....while in the car his mind stopped to process everything...how can this young man do like this...how can he do something like to his friend who is trusting them with closed eyes who they were fooling them all along....after lot of thinking he called Rajveer...


At Rajveer house....


The girls at room busy with their work when the phone comes....Rajveer takes the call and surprised to see its from Rohan....he takes the call happily..


R – abhi tuje phone karne waala tha ki mai abhi pandit ji ke paas jaa raha hoon date fix karne..aur tune phone kar diya...


RO – ( stern voice ) panditji ko maaro goli aur meri baat acche se sunno..


R – ( senses something is wrong ) kya huva yaar sab thik...


Ro – haan thik hai ...baas tu Mumbai aaja..tujse bahut hi important baat karni hai..


R – kya huva..


Ro – vo mai tuje phone me nahi baatha saktha..baas tu yaha aa..jithna jaldhi ho sake....aur ye baat kisi ko baad bolna tu kisliye aa raha hai...aur koi pucha tho bol dena ki shaadi ki baat karna mere paas aa rhaa hai..


R – vo tho maine sambal luga...par kuch huva hai kya...


Ro – aagar mai phone me baat karuga tho tu mari baat nahi maanega..usse accha hai ki mai tuje le jaa kar dekhavo....baas tu aaja...


R – thik hai..tu pareshan mat ho mai abhi nikal jaatha hoon.....


Rohan cuts the call and goes to his office...while Rajveer just stares at the phone and recalls the conversation and thinks what just happened...he knows something is not right otherwise his friend would never call like this...maybe he is right he should go there and see what is happening and why he is talking like this....he calls his daughter and all comes to the hall....


R – beta mai aaj hi Mumbai jaa raha hoon..mere bag pack kar dena..


H – kyu papa...abhi tho sab thik haina....tho fir acchnak...


R – haan beta sab thik hai..vo Rohan ka call aaye tha..aur unse mujhe vaha aane ko kaha...pata nahi kya baat hai.....par shaadi ki baat kar raha tha...mujhe tho dar hai unki beti hi use pareshan kar rahi hogi isliye vo mujhe vaha bula raha hai..


S – fir tho aap yaha se bhi tho baat kar sathe haina..aise acchnak vaha jaana jauru hi hai...


R – haan beta..jabse Haseena ki shaadi ty huvi hai kuch na kuch ho raha hai...aur haar baar ye Mumbai se lekar hi..isiliye humne socha liya ki ek baar vaha jaake dekha tha hoon ki aakir ye sab maajra kya hai...tum dono ye mere bag pack kartho maine abhi Vanraj ji se baat kartha hoon...


Takes the phone and goes out while the girls exchange looks worriedly...starts to pack his bag. After packing Haseena sits on the bed and thinks about what his father said...Santu comes and sits beside her...


S – di kya huva..


H – pata nahi santu....baas dar lag raha hai..aur kuch nahi...


S – aisa kuch nahi hoga....aur Karishma di haina vo kuch hone nahi dengi...pehale papa ko vaha jaane tho fir hum sab mil kar kuch soch the hai...


H – hum bhi yahi soch raha hai.....


At the Guest house...
Karishma who is working on laptop hears her landline phone ringing. She keeps the laptop down...and takes the phone and shocked to hear Rajveer voice..


K – ji Rajveer ji boliye..iss wqt phone...matlab sab thik haina..


R – ji sab thik hai..vo mai aaj hi Mumbai jaa raha hoon....Rohan ne bulya hai...


K – ( shockingly ) kyu..kuch huva hia kiya...matlab shaadi ko lekar....


Hearing her panic voice Cheeta comes to her room and sees her tensed face...


R – aery nahi Vanraj ji..vo shaadi ke baar me kuch baat karne ko bula raha hai..aur vaise bhi ye kahi baar ho chuka hai tho socha iss baar mai dekha kar hi aavo...apko koi problem tho nahi haina..


K – nahi nahi..hume kiya ho saktha hai...aagar shaadi ki baat hai tho thik hai..vaise bhi hume bhi kuch kaam hai tho hum bhi busy hi honge...


R – thik hai...fir hum aaj hi nikal the hai aur vo sake tho humare betiyo jo jarrah dekha lijiyega...


K – aery Rajveer ji isme bolni ki kya baat hai...apki betiya thik hongi aur bina firkar huve jaaiye aur hum yaha dekh lenge...


R – thik hum rak the hai....( cuts the call )


Karishma keeps the phone down and sits on the bed with lot of thinking..Cheeta comes and sits beside her..


C – kya huva yaar...


K – Rajveer ji acchnak Mumbai jaa raha hai..aur vo bhi aaj..


C – accha par kyu..


K – pata nahi....bol raha the ki acchnak papa ne unhee vaha bulya hai...


C – fir tho acchi baat haina yaar...shaadi keliye bulaya hoga....aur vaise bhi hum tho bothe hai ki unhee jaana bhi chaiye..kithni baar iss Mumbai jaane ko bol raha the....


K – haan vo sahi hai..


C – tu thik tho haina...


K – pata nahi yaar...jabse humne ye natak shrur kiya haina tabse kuch na kuch ho raha hai...baas sab thik ho jaaye....aur Mumabi ke chaakar pata nahi kab kahatam hoga....baas ek baar thik ho jaaye..


C – tu chinta mat kar sab kuch thik ho jaayega,...


Karishma nods her head and works on the laptop while Cheeta goes to his room...while working Karihsma mind were only roaming why her father called Rajveer all of sudden....she just prays to god that everything should be ok in her love...Here Rajveer also went to Mumbai to talk to his friend who called him on urgent basis....


everyone were thinking about it not knowing the outcome which is going burst in their life....




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Adios Amigos....

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